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Highly toxic, high pressure
At level 41, Huo Yuhao absorbed two ferocious beast soul rings and soul bones, which were actually only level 45. Even Titled Douluo could absorb them by five levels or more. Tang San absorbed Xiao Wu's soul ring and soul bone from just level 60 to level 66. Seventy-seven absorbed a hundred thousand year soul ring to reach level 74. In this way, the soul king absorbed a hundred thousand year soul ring and was raised to at least eight levels, and the soul sect absorbed a hundred thousand year soul ring and was raised to at least eight levels. The soul ring is directly the soul king. This is an ordinary hundred thousand year soul ring. The ferocious beast soul ring must have more than this level. Either you don't write the Ice Emperor's sacrifice, only the Snow Emperor's sacrifice, and then most of the origins are transformed into the second martial soul, or directly write Huo Yuhao's level 50. The extra soul power has to be absorbed by the soul ring to show up. After adding a ten thousand year soul ring, at least level 53 is the normal level.

What kind of rubbish is this? Why is level 39 not absorbing soul rings? In Douluo Continent, it takes ten levels to say that you are stuck and will not absorb soul rings. If you say level 10, level 20, level 30, you can still say that you are stuck for soul rings. Level 39 cannot absorb soul rings at all. Unless you make a sacrifice, you must at least respect the original settings when writing fan books.

Lao Deng, are you thinking of your original graveyard demon?
Do you know how many years I have been waiting for your trial to end? Do you know how I got here all these years?

Ninety percent of genres like this one fall apart before the middle stage, and the remaining nine percent are just endlessly repetitive and uninteresting. The last one percent are either eunuchs or unfinished and don't even know what they're writing. This subject matter is too big and requires too many balance points. I've read n books so far, and none of them are satisfactory.

Author, I beg you, can you please come up with a second side story? I will definitely support you. I really can't leave. I like the little junior sister so much. Ever since I finished reading it, my heart has always been empty. When I think that I have finished reading it, I want to cry... I beg you, please reply to me. I really like this book. Please, everyone will also love the second one.

It's 2025 and you're still so old-fashioned writing about a protagonist who was born in 1990! I really vomited! Why don't you write that pig's feet are forty years old?

Xiao Wu Ning Rongrong Zhu Zhuqing Bai Chenxiang A Yin Qian Renxue Bibi Dong Hu Liena Liu Erlong

It's over. It's true. I was born with full soul power and was beaten by an eighth-level shaman for several days. Do you think people who read fan fiction like to read this kind of novel?

Good looking!
The books written by Shiitake Mushrooms are so good. I love them so much. They are written by a heroine. How come I only discovered this magical author Da Da this year?

The protagonist has a big face, right? What qualifications did he have to win over Tang Wulin to oppose Tang San? The Ten Thousand Years Plan was set up for Tang Wulin. He was the biggest beneficiary of the entire Dou San. Tang San had nothing to say to Tang Wulin, so he gave him the best and started directly as the God King.

final thank you note
The finale is coming at the end of the month, and this book is finally coming to an end. Special thanks to [zuccleo], [AIUR will be redeemed], and [Favorite Silly Na] for their large monthly votes. Thank you to all readers of this book, I love you. The next book, planned to be a Warcraft fanfic, is in the process of being brewed! Another unique adventure will begin, so stay tuned.

There was no clock or bell on the roof, but I could hear bells ringing. It turned out to be the echo of the wind. From the top of tower, there comes ringing of bells, but there isn't any bell, Oh, it is echoing of the wind.

Well, I read the original work carefully. In the 66th year of the Bunker Era, the two-way foils had already arrived in the solar system, and the singer civilization only launched the two-way foils in 67 years. There is this small point, but this is the best writing in the Three-Body fanfic I have read.

Although I haven't read it yet, I think it should be quite interesting. I just hope I don't abandon the article halfway through.

Here it comes again, Tianshui Academy feels that the protagonist is asking Jia not to join... He is already imbecile in Douluo, and the protagonist has to cast the halo of wisdom on his behalf.

I came from listening to books. This is real water. It's like taking a class. One thing is talked about over and over again.

Is the author furious? It's been 2 years and it's still not finished. I'm so angry.

What the hell? From beginning to end, Zuo Rong is the most irritating, dangerous and dangerous protagonist. He had been holding back a lot of fire, but he killed the person instantly before the fire was released. He didn't even pee in fear, didn't he regret it?

New book! ! ! ! Today I discovered that the cover of the Infinite book has been changed, and then the Beauty book has also been changed! Just found out there is a new book! ! It's been too long! ! !

Is this novel so poisonous? Others, one golden soul coin is the food intake of an ordinary family for one year. I won't say anything about this. You gave me a whole Moon. It's the Golden Holy Dragon. I really can't stand it anymore. Please at least read the original novel before writing.

It feels like the author is sleepwalking, writing wherever he thinks. If he doesn't continue, the protagonist will lose his memory and start writing nonsense. It's better to start writing Harry Potter fan fiction earlier.

Is there something wrong with the introduction? The eldest brother, the second brother, and then a third brother came😊 It should be changed.

How come it's over 100,000? It feels a bit cheating.
At the beginning, I took 500 yuan to start a lunch business, and after earning 200 yuan for lunch boxes, I went to an Internet cafe to sell lunch boxes, and actually got a whole pack of 20 Yuxi to manage the network management. I spent 100 yuan on the management in five places, but I still made 70 yuan. I won't mention the price of things at that time, but I know people who surf the Internet in Internet cafes very well. I would rather eat instant noodles or eat at home than buy expensive box lunches. It's close to 90 days after the college entrance examination, so you must save some money on Internet fees.

Upgrading to level four in three years is still a small level below level 40. Can you resist this contrast? For those who don't know, I think the protagonist has given birth to hundreds of babies and is just trying to get pregnant.

I hope the author will update more
I like it, there are no bugs in the plot so far, and there are no issues with the heroine's character. Unfortunately, there is too little content now. I hope the author will update more, at least two chapters a day🌹🌹🌹

It's good. Just don't have too many female protagonists. Many fanfics stumble on the emotional line. It would be nice to avoid lightning and create more excitement.

Pig's feet are nothing without plug-ins. Even if they have plug-ins, they are only limited.

When I read the first chapter, I just felt like my eyes were darkened. I just wish you could give me a pair of eyes that I haven't seen before👀

The finale is not tense. It turns out that my mother is a transcendent angel god, and my father is the younger brother of Emperor Ming from a better level.

The real talent is rubbish. In the mirror world, the talent is invincible and the resources are abundant. I don't understand what you are still practicing in reality. After practicing in the mirror world for thousands of years, you will become invincible. You can also go to the Ancient Emperor's Cave. So if you can't just go to those ancient tribes and Danta to get resources, what's the point of cultivating a first-grade alchemist?

The overall plot is good and the originality is good, but the author feels very cowardly.
This book can be regarded as the mainstream writing method + systematic approach of early mortal fandom. Tiannan started with Xin Ruyin's line. There is no problem with the spiritual roots. Three spiritual roots. Building the foundation in the early stage will not make people think that you have a big treasure. In the later stage, it is enough to supplement the spiritual roots with two. -- The timeline is not at the same time as Lao Mo, and the originality can be seen in the first ten chapters, which is very good. Mortal fellows are the least able to suppress their levels. The old devil spends most of his time running away because his level is not enough. The protagonist's level is generally a small realm higher than that of the old devil. Because you have to take Xin Ruyin's line in the early stage, you must build the foundation. Therefore, the way of writing this advance timeline is understandable. --- Why do you say the author is cowardly? It's just that I didn't go through the bloody forbidden area before building the foundation. I built the foundation directly with a Foundation Building Pill. The way the Tiannan opening in Mortal Fans is written cannot avoid the Nangong line. This is the most controversial place, and some people criticize it whether it goes or not. Therefore, a new way of writing appeared later, that is, the protagonist killed or collected the ink dragon alone in advance, and searched for the treasures alone. Recently I saw another way of writing, which is to kill Duobao Nu's sister, the one who put the sealing talisman to block the door. Because the Bloody Forbidden Land is a copy of the God Transformation, the rationality of many high-level treasures can be compiled from here without any cap. The best treasure I have seen so far is a cave spiritual treasure brought out from a harem novel, which can take people to sneak into the spirit world. It is generally accepted among mortals that in the early stage, at best, you can get a book on the techniques that directly lead to the transformation of gods. The better ones are ancient treasures, pseudo-spiritual treasures, and one-time killing moves targeting Yuanying (must kill the early Yuan Dynasty). -- The author did not go to the bloody forbidden area to directly build the foundation. It feels like he did not want to touch the cause and effect of the ink dragon and disturb the timeline. Another taboo in Mortal fandom is to constantly mention the timeline and think about it at every turn, which indirectly makes the protagonist appear to be a coward. -- Personally, I feel that it is better for the protagonist to walk through the Bloody Forbidden Land by himself, add some original plots, and obtain the god-transformation skills and some treasures. It is better to build the foundation in Chapters 50-70 (Tiannan starts). Your foundation building speed is a little fast, and you can directly build the foundation in Chapter 39.












