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The author is not a pussy in real life, right? The book he wrote is so girly.

Before chapter 80, I could get around 8.2 Points, but after chapter 80, I can forget about it. It feels like it was edited by AI. There are few people in the food world, but there are many business struggles and competitions. Small stalls should be built as small shops, and later they will prepare to open big shops. Those who like this kind of business development articles can read it, but those who want to see human fireworks will be disappointed.

The first three chapters of Goldfinger are a complete failure. What is the 30 cap? Ordinary people with looks ranging from 1 to 5. I almost say it is Daniel Wu, so what is your thirty? Another thing is to wash the points and wash them into three. Will the people around you not be confused? , A good historical article can be written as an online game. It's too boring and boring.

I didn't see in the introduction that the protagonist has six infinite gems and didn't understand the rules of the gems.

Give yourself a call and support. . . . Dear friends, please give me a five-star review!

This rating must be bad, there is no logic in everything you do.

It's better not to accept Xishui girl. She is already a third-hand product. Penetrated by old ghost Zhongli. Return it to Long Xiaoyao. The elders Zhong Liwu and Yan Shaozhe were both born to her. If Qingjiao likes this kind of overripe MILF. You can consider the crazy batch of Demon King😑😑

Not updated yet?
Damn it, why don't you update it yet? Not updated yet? Not updated yet?

This system is not good. The protagonist wiped out all the soul beasts before he could protect himself.

Is this black for the sake of being black? If Qian Xunji reduced Bibi Dong to a fertility tool, then it would be impossible for him to have a child in more than ten years, and even if he was seriously injured, it would be impossible for Bibi Dong to come into contact with him, so he would not die in the original work.

Has this book been updated? I'm very curious, so I'll ask. I hope it won't be discontinued. I quite like it.

It cannot be expressed in words, it can only be understood, not expressed in words.

The devil's plan to live in the country is really not as good as the protagonist's stupid idea.

If you're writing about monsters, you're really not as good as Ultraman. Logically speaking, after you get Zetton, you shouldn't let the world continue to develop into disaster, but the direction of control is like a controllable one. You're really not as good as writing about monsters as Ultraman, you have to be rigid. The more desperate the world becomes, the stronger you become

I don't know why the author likes to write some nonsense at the end of each chapter. It's so weird to listen to the book.

It really gets worse the more I write it, and the more I read it the more I look like a duplicitous villain.

Recommended, I feel it has great potential, please keep up the good work, author😣😣😣

Casual short stories, interesting
An interesting short novel, worth reading. Let me pick out a few flaws. One is about the case of a temple borrowing a child to commit dirty money-making activities. I have read it many times. The second one is that the description of old Beijing culture is a little deliberate and redundant, or does it mean that you show off your knowledge? Can be a little streamlined. The story is interesting, the characters are created, and the rhythm is well controlled. Oh, yes, speaking of rhythm, the large flashback story at the end can be saved. Most readers can imagine the plot. Even if it deviates from what the author said, it doesn't matter. Different imagination spaces are also the highlight of good novels.

Why are you still typing? If you don't type, you won't be allowed to send.

If you read it from beginning to end, it seems childish and not suitable for being a time traveler. Everyone knows that time travelers will do anything for their own benefit. In the real world, they suppress their desire for strength for a safe environment, but they still don't work hard in other worlds.

Add some other elements, don't keep reading, I'm tired of reading it

The writing is very silly at the beginning
The opening technique is very stupid. People are almost here and they are still playing with your skills. You have to stay and explain to them what is the right way to just walk away. It is like trying to help an old man fall while passing by and calling 120. It is a waste of time.

If it is set to be worn, those things from the Mountain Guest will not be available.
Soldier armor, general armor, king armor, emperor armor, these are all opportunities to bind and devour the bodies of people on earth in the starry sky. There is a high probability that you will not be able to practice the Nine Tribulations Secret Code.

It has the flavor of a fanfic of the Goblin Slayer series. As a Western fantasy novel, it is above average and the pace is a bit slow.

Everything behind is poisonous. Gods cannot interfere with the human world. Yunyuan remains in Douluo Continent. Do you think the other four god kings are dead? ? Qian Xunji wants to pass the throne to the protagonist. You Wuhun Palace can directly unify the mainland, but you still have to stay in the lower world.

Writing Shrek is your thing, but appearing on my recommended book list is an accident.

If you feel like your life is satisfactory, you can take a look... The male protagonist is so chauvinistic that he doesn't treat the female protagonist as a human being, and the female protagonist also makes a fool of herself, which makes you angry.

I cried after falling in love with the other person
It looks good. I gave it a squeak and a thumbs up.

Discouraging stupid people, forced writing, from the beginning it is either this flower or that flower, every chapter is inseparable from women, you, mother, are a reborn person after all, you, mother, are disgusting😐😐😐😐😐😐😐

The low score is not unreasonable
On the third level of Qi training, he went to Tainan Valley to leak money, and then he was targeted by three robbery cultivators for several years. Did you dig up someone's ancestral grave? Can I keep an eye on you for two years or three years? Later, they killed and licked out more than 500 spirit stones. Three qi-training cultivators of the fifth and sixth levels had 500 or 600 spirit stones. If they didn't buy elixirs and go into seclusion, they would just stare at you for two or three years? Are you out of your mind or are they out of your mind? Five hundred spirit stones are enough to buy your life, idiot.

The writing is good. I really like Xuan She now. I guess he should be the number one beast husband😑

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Have you seen Perfect? It's not like a small plane like Douluo can be perfect.

However, it is indeed very AI-like
When will you gain anything from writing novels?

This protagonist makes trouble everywhere and always loves to educate others, but he himself has bad conduct, has a homicidal nature, and bullies the weak and fears the strong. Once he encountered a strong enemy, he would let his descendants stay behind while he fled first.












