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Chapter 17, still level 0
Sister winks at you, and rolls eyes at sister. He is also decisive in killing and is just playing house here!
I got it from a certain audio book, it's really good
Indeed, the writing is good, but the number of words in the new book is too few. I hope the author can work harder!
Okay, it's almost the same as in the game
Overall, it's not bad. The protagonist has lust and desires, but he also doesn't lose his sense and sense of proportion.
Hiding everything
The author has read too many novels and hides everything. He is like a three-legged cat and is afraid that others will find out. He looks like a staff!
It's abstract enough. The third young master of the Tang family writes about the peerless Tang clan, and he comes to disgust us readers. You just write this book, and you come here to disgust the third young master of the Tang family. This is magic versus bombardment. Bringing the third young master of the Tang family into Tang San is a bit indescribable.
The road to becoming a god
I hope Bai Chenxiang can become a god and Wang Qiuer can be resurrected
I really don't like this kind of passer-by's lines that have so many lines, and they are all mocking lines.
You should be more serious when writing a book. In Chapter 7, wasn't the pixel already killed and replenished? Why did it appear again later?
After fighting several times, no one died. The first time, there were two women and one man, the second time, there was only one man, and the third time, there was only one man and one woman. Still, the couple emphasized that they were not ugly? Why are they still paired up now in the apocalypse? Too ugly to be worthy of time travel?
Can you please stop writing about that unpleasant He Jiatong! !
Like the title, to be honest, I don't know what the idiot-like supporting character is for. It looked okay at the beginning, but every time he appears, he becomes special. He has no brains and a big mouth and acts like an imbecile idiot. I heard that there are more plots in the back than the heroine. Why do you want him to be the heroine?
It's very beautiful. The author would like to ask for more updates, and Delta would like to provide feedback.
It's very beautiful. The author would like to ask for more updates, and Delta would like to provide feedback.
Average. It doesn't deserve such a high rating. It's not even funny, and the plot is inexplicably advanced. Weird
Okay, okay, the two cats are driving to slime again to show off.
A brief analysis of Douer Noumenon Sect
Talking about why I chose to become the Heavenly Soul Protector of the Country One is Wei Na's twin martial souls, Second, he was tricked into robbing things by Xing Luo's reward of 100 million gold soul coins. The third is that he is originally in Tianhun country. The fourth is the soul master who has no sun and moon, The fifth is that he has been brainwashed by the righteousness of the Tianhun country. Sixth, I lacked vision and did not conduct preliminary investigations. If I had known that Sun and Moon had a hundred level nine custom-installed soul-guided cannonballs, the original work would not have ended so tragically. Seventh, Tianhun offered a price to help find the body soul master on a large scale. Dou Er's Noumenon Sect is really miserable. Even though the Sun and Moon Policy is very friendly to the Noumenon Sect, they still support the Tianhun Royal Family, the representative of the fiefdom nobles who exploit the common people. The ending is also tragic as it should be. Weina sold two pieces of her butt twice. First, she sold the butt futures to Long. Dragon died while blocking a level 7 bomb for Weina. Dragon's dead debt was wiped out. She sold one skin for two, and then sold her butt to Huo Yuhao in real time, but they refused to trade, 6. The ontology sect's inheritance was directly interrupted, and the core inheritance was lost and cannot be recovered.
Author, I wish you were more normal. I firmly do not accept Tang Wulin's sexual transformation and the ambiguous nature of the protagonist. Similar themes have popped up recently, but they are not very good-looking, and there are more complaints.
What's going on? It feels like it's unfinished. One story is shorter than the other, and one is more perfunctory than the other. It was pretty good up front, but it's over now
Good book. A very good farming novel.
I recommend a new book. It has been carefully polished. If it doesn't look good, just spray it.
"Douluo: I Dig a Treasure Pile in Peerless World"
Are there any poisonous points in my book? The trial promotion is over, and the number of readers is less than 100. If there are any major poisonous points, you can mention it, or tell me what you want to read.
Do you like to write or not write gun? I'm so convinced that I paid for you as a member in vain.
The 666 comment section was full of curses, which made me laugh to death.
I watched the video of the short drama on DY and continued to follow the novel.
Really bad at writing
I've read Chapter 81 and I'm still pulling my hair out. You're pulling it off like this, right? It takes more than 100 cards to get to third base.
I have been looking for a novel for so many years, and I found this here. It is the first novel I have read in my life. I read it on MP.
Garbage, pure industrial garbage, it hurts the eyes just to look at it. You can donate your useless corneas, but be sure not to read this book.
It's a boring work. At the beginning of the prehistoric period, you are looking for Wuyi Mountain. You find it directly without even knowing the direction. It is too deliberate to describe the prehistoric world with the real universe. You are just kidding!
It starts with a classic Japanese trashy male protagonist, and I don't want to watch it anymore. 88
What a disgusting male protagonist, torture for the sake of torture
ai bar
Each paragraph is explained. Just like the comments in Yan Wenyan, you write a sentence or something about the plot or something. When the protagonist says a sentence or a certain character says a sentence, you will write a lot of explanation fragments. It is the same as the comments in Yan Wenyan. It is an AI text, right? It doesn't look like it was typed by human hands
What kind of hypocritical green tea is this? This plot is really disgusting. She is more effeminate than a chrysanthemum. She is simply a female cousin among men.
Seriously, have you ever read the original book? The five powerful ones include Sagnehru. If I remember correctly, they are Hong, Lei Shen, Mo Henderson, East, and Coastal. After these five, Luo Feng rises, and Coastal is squeezed out. What is this whole Sagunehru thing of yours?
How can the author make his novel so rubbish and not just forcefully write it?
Not bad, I've read all the updates
The writing is better than some of the top-ranked ones, but there are too few. The author should update it soon! Even the donkeys in the production team dare not rest like this!
I suggest turning Tang Wulin into a woman, and if possible, Xie Xie, too.
More, please! ! !
I gave four stars because I gave it too little, but I couldn't bear it. The rating was low and no one read it, fearing that the author would abandon the article. But there are really too few updates. One update a day. What does it mean?
Written in a mess
The whole thing is like a patchwork of things, and everything is not well written. What's the point of the author writing it like this? , The character of the protagonist is portrayed as stupid and rogue, and there is no main plot at all.
The author suggests creating a QQ group (ಡωಡ) Ah, I don't know what to say
The twins were let out as bicycles and had no intention of picking them up by themselves.
Wait a minute, I'm curious, ah, is Tang Wulin a boy or a girl? Are you jealous of Ji Fengyu? Moreover, Tangtang is jealous because of fate. I am curious, not very curious, but you feel weird.
On pk again
Babies! Please read and vote! Wish me a helping hand! I clicked to remind you when you see the last page, I love you! I will clear the level as soon as this pk is over, and the welfare chapter will be distributed when the time comes.
At the age of sixteen, the Dragon Transformation Realm reached the sky? This was written in imitation of Zhe Tian, and was written in random ways, the body of Chaos Dao? Chaos body plus innate Tao fetus? Plus Hongmeng Origin? Just a transformed dragon? People say that the innate holy body is a saint as soon as it is born. You are too ridiculous! It even blew up to the sky
good
Update more, update more
The pace is fast, the plot is not draggy, and the story line is clear
Five-star praise, the veteran author has profound knowledge
You can check it out, it's quite interesting, but I don't know how the protagonist became a god.
Who is the most suitable teacher in Poseidon Pavilion?
The author's protagonists both have twin martial souls, one at the god level and the other at the ultimate level. How did Moon resist not accepting a disciple? It's not like Mu En doesn't know Yan Shaozhe's character. Such a good young man, Mu En will directly regard him as Shrek's pinnacle of stability within two hundred years. But he actually watches the protagonist go to apprentice with Yan Shaozhe. Even if he is not a native Shrek Tianlong, Mu En will not ignore it. After all, in his eyes, Yan Shaozhe is unlikely to achieve great things, and Xuanzi is too rough to be the master of the pavilion. At the moment, only Zhang Lexuan is suitable. As a result, a protagonist appears who is so talented and has the first martial soul attributes that are very similar to his own martial arts attributes.
Twice a day, updated at 5pm!
Twice a day, updated at 5pm, don't miss out! *^O^*
It doesn't require you to write well, just conform to the setting, don't mess around, and stop updating. After all, writing about stars has become too little.