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It seems that your evaluation of this book is not good at all, so we will split it equally.

In addition to missing girls, they also arranged a harem for Muchen. What's even more awesome is that he and Muchen secretly watched Wu take a shower, and he didn't accept it until he was scolded later, right? He didn't even want to change the shower scene?

I must support You Qianda's new book✊Although it's not the romance novel I want to read, it's still a good read. :.゚ヽ(*´∀`)ノ゚.:。

Damn, a single chapter is so expensive. One chapter costs at least more than 30 coins.

This system is so useless! It is estimated that after writing 500 chapters, the protagonist will hardly become a god.
The protagonist's golden finger is too rubbish, and the leveling is too harsh! Upgrading the soul ring does not increase the level, absorbing soul bones does not increase the level, and eating fairy grass does not increase the level. The rewards for ten comments added together are enough to upgrade to n levels. The energy of 3 Ten Thousand Soul Rings is enough to upgrade the soul sect to level 6~7. It should not be a big problem to upgrade to more than ten levels below level 40, not to mention the rewarded soul bones, although they are not explicitly added in the novel. Level, but Tang San also added soul power and level, and the training talent upgrade speed is directly MAX, plus the martial soul quality MAX level innate soul power is also very likely to be level 20. In this way, ten rewards are enough for the protagonist to reach level 50, and the protagonist is over level 30. 🙃🙃🙃

Very good Machiavellian writing
The game, characterization, conspiracy, and language description are all excellent. The academic logic is a bit lacking, but this is not the author's problem, only the professor can handle it. The author's breadth and depth are already very good. Especially as not only Li Chengqian's counselor, but also his psychotherapist, this is amazing. Many people can't understand Li Chengqian's neurosis in the early stage and Li Tai's neurosis in the middle stage. This is exactly the wonderful detail in the book. Highly recommended!

The initial strike was extremely toxic. I did it hastily and thought it was a climax. Is this the result?

The novel is quite good, but the end of Chapter 122 is awkward. Do you want to imitate Huo Yuhao and use such awkward lines as Tianfu Fist, Tianfu Palm, Tianer, Tianer?

From what I've said in the comment section, it's actually cheating, and it's not a big problem in terms of character. The main problem is that the writing simply disappears after more than 90 chapters. It's the same as if it were written by another person, and the writing is not as strong as the compositions written by high school students.

I was so curious about the form of Yabao that I generated it.
It looks like Pixiu hahaha, it's so cute, so cute

I don't understand why the author insists on adding an original character to Xiao Yan. I haven't read the back yet. I don't know if the author wants to take away the protagonist that Xun'er gave you. If you are at this point and still want Xiao Xun'er, then I have nothing to say. Moreover, there are many ways to cancel an engagement, and you have to create an original character to replace it. Fan fiction, so-called fan fiction, is nothing more than the additional development of the original work that you present in the eyes of readers, and your original protagonist is the driving force of this development. The original characters are acquaintances and old friends in the eyes of readers, your original characters are the main perspective in the eyes of readers, and your original characters are stumbling blocks in the eyes of readers, especially if they are forced to the original characters.

It's a great write-up, cheers to the author. More good looking

I won't tell you if the writing is toxic. This author is going against the grain. He writes about family stories but not about future generations.

I like watching Passive, it looks good and I love watching it

If you like it, love to read it, please update more, please come on, author!

Damn it, is this book still being updated? I remember there were more than 5,000 chapters at the time. I uninstalled it when I got tired of reading it. In the past few days, this is the only book that is still being updated. It's awesome.

Will the author write a game about Street Fighter 6? Will he compete with a god-like kid?
I still hope that the author can write a Street Fighter game and defeat the faker kid in the fighting world.

shocked
This is actually a new book. When I saw the cover and the title, I thought it was a 2016 book. I read a few chapters with the idea of just giving it a try, and found that the writing was actually quite good, which made Liuli feel a little disgusted. Some irrational aspects are acceptable, and there is nothing particularly poisonous about it, which is good. Look at the character names in the book. Memories came to mind.

Why hasn't it been updated yet? Why hasn't it been updated yet? Why hasn't it been updated yet?
Why haven't you updated yet? Why hasn't it been updated yet?

The story is most interesting when it unfolds. When it reaches the point of "righteousness", I personally feel that the entire plot is a bit repetitive and sometimes a bit long-winded. For example, the heroine has already told other people about the ins and outs of something. From the reader's point of view, the matter has been discussed in detail. When the heroine explains to different people, it may be better to explain it in one sentence instead of unfolding the communication process in detail again. I personally think that this part of the plot of Yijue can be shortened further. The male protagonist really suffered a lot... From the beginning of the story to the chapters at the imperial tomb, I actually didn't see how much the female protagonist liked the male protagonist. I felt that she only cared about her younger brother and was afraid of him. Suddenly, after the identity of the heroine was revealed, the two of them became close to each other... Overall it's pretty good.

Personally, I don't think this book is good, and that's just for me. Anyway, I can't stand listening to it.

Updates are too slow
The donkeys in the production team don't dare to rest like this with you. They have to update at least five times a day, faster and faster😡

It's okay, but the emotional scenes at the end take up a lot of it, and it's too boring.

Okay👌, it's getting more and more exciting, I'm looking forward to it,👍👍👍👍👍👍

Very well written. Mainly because of the slow updates. If it's animated, it's a plus.

I subscribed in vain. It seems that Academy Apocalypse won't be written in the later stages if it breaks away from the plot. It's okay to write about destroying ghosts in the second world. If it's well written, it can be accepted as a transition, but even the settings are wrong🤐























