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It's still unclear who is the lover. Liu Erlong said before that he only regarded Yu Xiaogang as his brother, but later said that he liked Yu Xiaogang before😐😐

Do girls really like to watch this kind of subject matter? As a man, I have no interest in female-led videos. Maybe there is a market for female-driven videos?

Can you update it soon? It's been a few months.

It's a pity that the protagonist is a virtual boy, so I deducted one star. Is it because the author is not good at writing the protagonist like this😑

The Queen of Misanthropy is always awake and cold-hearted towards NFC in the game, but in real life she still retains warmth and compassion, and is very humane!

It was still watchable at first, but after a hundred chapters, all the plot conflicts were completely written by AI. The people in the front appeared just after they died, and the heroes were locked up just after they returned home. Moreover, a steward can shut down the deputy director at any time.

There is a reason why no one reads your book.
You have already cheated and are still trying to level up. According to your own settings and the introduction, absorbing the evil poison value can be converted into cultivation, but the result is that you are still restricting it. Even the cheats can't level up. What's the use of your cheats? You are still trying to suppress the realm of the ninth level of rubbish, and then you are still doing the early, middle, and late stages, consummation, and Dzogchen. The first two chapters were the ninth level of Dzogchen, but in the end, it took fifty or sixty chapters of forced leveling down to reach the eighth level. The setting is that practicing cultivation will generate poison points, but the protagonist can clear them when he reaches the age of 10, and can also convert them into cultivation points. But if you don't practice, you can't have too much evil poison value? Sliding around and running around and making shitty plots. Upgrading to the eighth level requires more than 500 cultivation points. You can steadily get 100 in a day, and you can upgrade to the eighth level in a week. Not practicing, just playing.

It has a lot of poison points, not to mention its combat power.
There is a lot to say, such as from the temple nuns. And always arrange for teammates to hold back. And that thing after the flames. I was warned by the police god for no reason. This leads to the Mirror Master. Also has fighting power. I remember he had acquired magical powers. Although very little. It works. But I haven't seen him use it once. Even if there is no mention of making a flaming sword or something like that, there is still support. Also get some features. For example, if you have a one-eyed one, you can use it more flexibly and control it alone. He himself said that trying it can add magical vision. But I haven't seen it. Be cool. Originally it was a step to add points after the battle, but he always skipped it. There are some. I remember there was a kind of spider that could feel vibrations. At first it was said that it was two feet or two feet, and that it could be avoided. Then he said that he was suppressed while wearing armor and was still sensitive. At that time, I remember that there was a spider whose bones were tough. I used my hand to block someone else's knife, but it got stuck in the bone. Then there is the Plague Cave. In order to highlight the priest, the first thing is to escape directly. Then I realized I couldn't escape. Back again. Then let him come to the rescue. Let me tell you again, he previously obtained something called Blood Source. Only high-level vampires have it. Then the plague took direct control of the body. He also has rage. The cat hunter got it. It was possible to interfere with the body before. Not now. Even if he doesn't interfere with the body, he can still interfere with the soul. There is a soul scream that could be used twice before, but now it can be used 8 times. He is of no use. His enemy uses the body of a hunter, he is a demon spirit. Just to induce Mirror Master to sign a contract with him. He learned a lot of knowledge. But rarely used. There is magic, but no magic. It has features, but doesn't use them. Oh, yes, yes, he also has fog perception. And that shotgun, fired two rounds or fired one round, then fired again, prepared to fire, and then controlled the arm. He has the blood of a high-level vampire. That description said that the true spirit and blood source were immortal. Let's talk about the previous werewolf who was holding us back. Always get hurt unnecessarily. That's the priest. To warn him, he was shot with an arrow in the back. Although he has that energy. Or the life card. But this only restores damage and does not remove continuous damage and abnormal status. The combination of his characteristics means that except for some relatively advanced ones, others cannot beat him. There is also the Gwent card system. Especially afraid of group fights. For example, his panel is at 4 o'clock. Then the combination of his enemies has 10 points. After killing 4 for him and the other 6 escaping, he will give him cards if he has 6 points. He had collected some negative cards before but never threw them out. In addition to the alcohol addiction caused by fighting the blood demon before, there are also scars on the body. Therefore, tens of thousands of troops are still afraid. But dozens of people are not afraid unless they run away. He can kill people to gain life cards, and has some special traits. Knowledge. It was okay in the early stage, but became more and more uncomfortable in the mid-term. There is also an excessive sense of morality. This is nothing at all, but the way he described it made me unhappy.

I feel like I can give the protagonist's father and grandfather the Xuan Tian Kung and Purple Demon Eyes to practice. There are still 8 years until the Soul Master Competition, and the Xuantian Kung may lead from Soul Saint to Soul Douluo.

It's okay, but it's a bit off topic.
The first part is okay, but the section at the end about simulating Ma Hongjun is a bit watered down. After all, this is a simulator article. The simulating section alone accounts for half of the entire article, and the simulation lasts for half a day. Unless you bring out the God King's combat power, you can write whatever rewards you get by simulating and going against the will of heaven. But the God King's combat power is revealed at the end. Basically, there is not much to write, so this shouldn't come out so soon, but the simulation process can be faster. After all, a lot of content can be covered in one sentence. To use Uncle Long's words, "No matter how powerful the simulator is, it is still fake." Unless the God King's combat power I just mentioned is revealed, look at your simulator and you have already ascended to heaven. What is the reality of the result? You have just left Notting City, which means you have just left the Novice Village. It has been almost a hundred chapters. In the Douluo fandom, the timeline is the same as that of Tang San before you left the Novice Village. It is almost 99% rare.

So? ? ? Again? ? ? I don't care at all about the erotic scenes of the female supporting characters! ! ! !

3.22 clock in
I clocked in today, why did today go by after just two sleeps?

Han Geng's harem novel about Wa's academic background, the protagonist's mentality is very good

Fast, update quickly, update quickly, update quickly, update quickly, update quickly, update quickly, update

Either don't write about the protagonist, or don't write that the protagonist is wearing clothes, or give yourself some brain training. How can a third-level Qi practitioner with a broken land have so many enemies? They all know as much as the Daluo gods. Just stare at the three melons and two jujubes in the hands of a third-level Qi practitioner. Does it matter? Reason is difficult to define, but basically there is nothing nutritious except for the plot of how to bully the protagonist. Readers read novels for pleasure, not to feel aggrieved and abused. Inexplicable self-movement can not move anyone's conscience except the author's glass heart.

Watch it, watch it, it's okay, some plots are okay, and some plots are not.

I can't stand the more than 200 chapters and have abandoned the book.

The martial spirit is Ruotuo Dragon King, and the original martial spirit is Zhongli. A book like this is probably coming soon💀

new, good
The angle is very new and I strongly support it. Dragon Girl wouldn't die like this, would she?

The licking was too much. I jumped to watch the scenes with Liu Yifei in the back, otherwise I wouldn't be able to watch them.

I want to know if the main character should be Hokage. It would be boring to not be Hokage. He would always work for others. Mainly, I don't like Konoha because it is too dark. Oh well, I don't like Konoha at all.

As soon as I saw Jialing Pass, there was no need to watch it. The video of Qian Renxue and Tang San in the Shen Kao was broadcast all over the continent. The golden liquid flowed out, but you went to marry a chicken?

The main character is written like a fucking passerby. He has no idea what he is doing. I have read Chapter 40.

Good idea
This fic is confusing! There were too many errors in the character relationships, and I didn't check the information! The details are too overwhelming

The writing is good, but there are too few updates. Please update a few more chapters.

Punch in and clock out
I feel like dying just thinking about going to school tomorrow, and I still have a full class

You are a genius who cheats on you, but you still insist on the protagonist's last name being Jing Tian. Are you really not embarrassed, or are you not smart enough, or are you just looking for a gimmick?

Dear author, is the Zhou Huan clone Lord of the Universe that the protagonist is planning to have a diameter of 100 light years serious? The original universe is at most 12 light years away. The Lord of Nine Netherworlds is just because of the limitations of the original universe, otherwise it would have been over 100 light years ago.

My head is getting big when I look at it
How can a work that picks up people's wisdom and mature worldview be so poorly written? The author is such a talent, and the characters are so ruined that they can't find it. If you like to change it according to your own ideas, why don't you be original and write this disgusting thing? !















