I, Star Fighting Spirit, Join the Chat Group

Brother, to put it bluntly, there is a high chance that you will be thrown off by writing like this. I find that most novice authors always like to set a very awesome background (ability) for the protagonist, but the author does not have the writing skills to keep up with the setting. For example, in your case, the protagonist traveled through time and became a fighting spirit in the stars, but his character is still the same as before, without the courage of a strong man. To be honest, it would be more satisfying to travel through time and become a mortal, and then practice step by step, because there is a big gap between the identity of a strong man and the character of a loser.

But can you change the chapter about Yun Yun? Even if she doesn't end up with the protagonist of this book, at least she won't be entangled with Xiao Yan like in the original work.

I don't even understand what the novel you wrote means. The chat group for being a babysitter... More than 160 levels, following the children. Yes, they have been helping, helping, helping.

After a rough look at it, I personally felt that it was not very good. The behavior pattern was a little hard to understand, the sense of substitution was not enough, the plot continuity was not strong enough, and the foreshadowing was not good enough. To put it simply, the author's writing style is not very good and the outline is unclear. It feels like a short article. But the content creativity is not bad, I hope to continue to work hard.

Well, the newly updated chapter said that the three-year agreement between Douluo and Douluo was of great significance. Actually, the three-year agreement was quite funny. A man who wanted to have a free love went to the man to break off the engagement, and the other was embarrassed by the woman's break-up and made the three-year agreement to break off the engagement on her own and lost face. It's boring.

You have practiced cultivation, but your brain has not been improved yet? Even if you fail the exam paper, you don't have to study, you can do some calculations or deductions, right? Even if he became an ordinary person there, why didn't the protagonist use the knowledge and memory of his previous life to deduce it before he got there? Also, isn't cultivation a transformation of life levels? It's just that the intelligence has not been improved, but the destructive power has simply been enhanced, or what?

I'm going, what's going on? Are you still allowed to see it? When you update a chapter, don't forget to change the previous one back! What, you ate it?

The Gate of Eternal Life is the quasi-immortal emperor weapon. Are you kidding me?

Don't mess up! Don't mess up! Don't mess up! ! ! Say important things three times.

It's very interesting. Great author. Come on Oli🤡🤡🤡