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🌿🌿🌿, if you find a fat fairy, report it immediately and block it.
Isn't it updated? It's heart-breaking and uncomfortable😊
Why not update it? Don't you want to change it anymore?
The four evil men each obtained a fragment and became superpowers in Jiuzhou Continent and Dongling Kingdom. Their superpowers became the basis for them to continue to do evil. " "So, Xie An'an will take it all back? " "Uncertain. If she could go back, she should be able to continue her research. She might come up with new ones and there would be no need for this one. "
It's pretty easy to make up, but it's tasteless to eat, so it's a pity to throw it away. Too watery
How can I put it this way? I don't like the female protagonist's character very much. If the male protagonist is almost dead, I won't take her to see her. I'll just let him die and let her die alone. You should suffer the consequences yourself.
Although I'm reading a novel, I'm actually reading other people's stories. Maybe I'm not used to writing from the first perspective, and I'm not used to it, but the writing is quite good.
Not bad, we need to speed up! Too slow
Today's task is completed
The weekend goes by so fast! There was a traffic jam when I went out to play today. Many people came to cheer up.
It's okay. Just watch these two, Zhetian and Yongsheng. You don't need to watch Perfect World later.
The work is very good, and the historical events and characters are well depicted.
Before signing and after signing are not the same thing at all
So far, the writing is good, but the updates are too slow and it feels like it will be unfinished.
The plot is really great, and the writing is very detailed. I'm looking forward to the finale.
Personally it's good, but updates are a bit slow.
Good water!
What a good water! ! ! !
Clock in on the 18th day
Time flies so fast, tomorrow is Monday again
Strongly recommend
Gentleness is the eternal light in a dark world
When the highly intelligent system starts, it talks back to the protagonist. The golden finger does not belong to the protagonist. It has another owner. It is a temporary contract signed with the protagonist.
[Punch in on the 18th day]
3.22 Check in on the 18th day of the points activity, la la la
The author dared to cuckold the Tang Shenwang. It seems that he has a way to die😪
Please update. Please update. When will it be updated?
Please update it soon. Can you please stop being a eunuch👿👿👿
It's good-looking, I hope the author won't make it more unfinished, please give it a try! ! !
The one who doesn't run away after seeing these two little brothers of the protagonist is 👍. No matter how good the writing is, it's not a good thing to have such a little brother as the protagonist.
Checking in on the 18th day, I almost forgot about it today.
Dual-tasking, playing on two computers by one person is beyond me, and I am also in debt.
No group? If you have any questions, please reply to me.
Why does 106 start and then repeat all the time? Although the writing is a bit jumpy, I think it's okay. All the repetitions are a bit confusing.
Although the plot of the unlimited streaming dungeon in the later period is very exciting, I feel that the most touching thing is the beginning where the living people in the group are chased by the broken faces. Especially the short section that was tweeted at the beginning and watched on Zhihu and other platforms. It has a sense of immersion in the reality of supernatural beings and hauntings. Ordinary people are powerless in the face of the supernatural. So when will the update be completed?
Delta is one of the few streams of fresh air👍Most Delta fans write about how the protagonist performs CS, but I don't understand what's so interesting about writing CS.
Chapter forty-four, beating someone up. Just like that national destiny, so many people think that the protagonist cannot beat him. He's throwing sword after sword slowly, can't you just give him seconds quickly?
Let's talk about poison
The subject matter is novel and interesting, but can you not make the protagonist so stupid that he uses the system to recycle things in front of others, and uses the system functions in front of Master Jin Danqi, as if he does not exist? In the early stage, I had no strength and yet I was so high-profile in front of others. This is a world that eats people without spitting out their bones.
It makes me sick to hear that it starts with sisters!
Hehehehehehe also made Nazha an affectionate woman, tsk tsk tsk, vomited
Various plots are inconsistent
Author, the protagonist has joined the Xinminhui twice, and the mother of the Yang family has been released earlier. Why is it said that the Yang family girl is still being imprisoned by the Japanese after she gets married? Writing a novel cannot be like stepping on the rind of a watermelon, right?
This writing style makes people feel uncomfortable. Indescribable feeling
Begins to be inconsistent later
Damn it, the guy surnamed Chen was controlled earlier, but after a few chapters he said he didn't control the inconsistency, and the branches turned into the heart of the tree, and he kept introducing it, which really made me vomit.
The pet beasts don't feel alive enough, and the plot is too repetitive.
I feel that the heroine's pet beasts have no souls, no thoughts and individual differences of their own. I just feel that all three of them are obedient to the heroine and cling to her, and then they are gone. They have no thoughts of their own, no sense of being alive, and are like a shell. The same goes for their interactions with the heroine. They are described as intimate but I don't know why. It's so intimate (I know I'm clinging to the heroine because of the need to save my life, but it still feels empty), it just makes people feel empty, and it's a very strange feeling... It's similar to the way young actors are kissing each other until their mouths are broken, but it doesn't make people feel like they love each other to death, it's empty... I have now seen 227. The plot has been repeated too many times so far, which is... A bit boring. It has always been: accept the task - meet the bad guy - defeat the bad guy - get the reward - improve the strength - accept the task again, and then repeat it again (repeated three times, well it seems to be like this, if the secret realm is not broken this time, it feels like this is the same way this time the secret realm is broken, please add more. Why doesn't the heroine just enter high school? There are still three years, so repeating this plot is a bit boring) These are the two issues I have seen so far. The front part is indeed very interesting, but I don't know when it started to become a bit hypnotic.
It's short and weak. Update it soon. I'll give it a vote.
Have you read the original work? The level of Shrek's Seven Monsters, Gong Yangmo's level is 59. I really admire you as the author.
Very beautiful, highly recommended with a little bit of yellow
It felt very ordinary. I just skipped to read it. I don't know how to describe it. It was uninteresting. It seemed like I was narrating a story rather than a novel. At the beginning of more than ten chapters, the first person voice suddenly popped up. At that time? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? Anyway, it's a little weird
Come on, author
It's super good-looking, warm and interesting in daily life, but it also has some hidden knives that make people laugh and cry. The foreshadowing is well laid out, and the author doesn't dig holes and forget to fill them in. However, the author is really afraid of being criticized. Even if he writes a sentence that may be a little controversial, he will immediately add parentheses to explain it. Even though he is so cautious, there are still some trolls who will mess up. If you like to argue, don't read (protect our author)
I can't stand what's behind, it's such a mess
Brainwashing article, no evaluation. . . . . Turnips and greens, everyone has their own preferences.
If you don't rebel against the little Yakuza, then I will rebel against you. Give me a six-star review to encourage you.
There are not many heroines who calmly know what they want. It's just that sometimes the chapter is a bit watery