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👉Wall crack recommended. If you like it, give it a like 👍Available on the 1st. First order 12500 [Passenger Review] "Rebirth of the Wild Age" - Bold and sharp, telling the truth! 1. Basic perception Rich experience, rich knowledge, vivid characters, strong sense of the times, and high-level humor. This book tells the story of a 17-year-old high school boy who went back to 1993 from middle age. In order to recover from the tragedies before his rebirth, such as his father's imprisonment, the early death of his eldest brother, the exhaustion of his sister-in-law, and his children's out-of-school experience, he bravely ventured into the deep city alone and found the first pot of gold in the gray area. After returning home, he revived private enterprises such as the peach cannery and the liquor factory that were on the verge of bankruptcy. He recruited teams, engaged in marketing, and built brands out of the blue. 2. Highlights of this book 1. The characterization is remarkable, the characters appear vividly on the page, the environment and background are vivid, and full of a strong atmosphere of the 1990s. The protagonists who open up wasteland, the People's Liberation Army who act bravely for justice, the deputy director who blindly goes to sea, the strong woman who almost loses her virginity, the scheming mayor and secretary, the arrogant deputy county magistrate, the newly entered field reporter, the domineering brother, the mother who is the master of the house, and even the uncle who just hangs around, are all well described; 2. The scene of bravely fighting carjackers on the train makes people's blood boil and makes them unable to calm down for a long time. It is both real and enjoyable; a Bayi Army thorn shows the hero's style; 3. His profound knowledge and rich experience make the gold mining in Shenzhen City and the entire entrepreneurial process appear authentic and credible, including every production process, product design and packaging, real-time changes in policies and regulations, how to expand the market, how to manage the enterprise, how to market effectively, and how to seize the opportunity, all of which are quite professional; 4. There is no need to talk about the writing style of this book, you just need to pay attention to the plot; 5. The author writes about complex social relationships with ease, and the appearance of each character is logical and intricate, making it dizzying; 6. Humor and ridicule are readily available, and they are not vulgar spoofs. 3. Overall evaluation Suitable for: Suitable for all ages, physical publishing It seems that people who have experienced the 1990s will have a stronger sense of immersion. People who have not experienced that era can also satisfy their curiosity. After all, it is a good book! (The level of passers-by is limited, and the comments are purely amateur, based on personal preferences, for reference only) New book Super Short Seedlings.

[Passenger's Comments] Passerby's Comments: "Li Fan Ji" Overall Rating: 70 points At first glance, the title of the book seems unremarkable. To be honest, a book title like this is a bit cliche. It lacks something that attracts the attention of ordinary Internet articles. I guess the title of the book means leaving the mortal world to cultivate immortality and ask questions. After reading the content again, I found that the original male protagonist was called Chen Lifan, well, he escaped from the mortal world. When I thought about it, I felt that the title of the book was quite good. The name not only echoed the title of the book, but also provided the reason why the male protagonist entered the world of cultivating immortals. Although most people do not recommend using character names as book titles, I personally think it is okay. If there is no more attractive title, it is okay not to change it. The text begins with the reference to the patchwork stone left by Nuwa under Qinggian Peak in "Dream of Red Mansions". Although this is not a new idea, it is still interesting. Anyway, I like "Dream of Red Mansions" and I was attracted to it. The first chapter describes the male protagonist Chen Lifan, who is an ordinary white-collar worker in the city and is tired of his boring and meaningless life. He takes a tour bus to the north nakedly, but encounters a patchwork stone blocking the road near Mohe, and is attacked by vampire bats and blood dragons. The description of this paragraph is very visual, and it is very interesting as far as the first chapter is concerned. The Sky-Mending Stone described by the author has a special mission. Nuwa sealed the souls of evil beasts and raptors in the Sky-Mending Stone and left a legacy in it. The Tianbu Stone, which lacks spiritual energy supply, knows that its end is coming. In order to prevent Nuwa's inheritance from being cut off, it tears apart time and space and brings the male protagonist into a world rich in spiritual energy. Since then, the male protagonist has started his journey of cultivating immortality and upgrading from Novice Village. Advantages of this book: 1. The details of this book are well described. The villagers' inadvertent actions are very touching, reflecting their integrity and kindness. The plot of the male protagonist picking wild flowers to give to the little sister next door is also very heartwarming. 2. The suspense foreshadowing is good. The Novice Village that the protagonist travels through turns out to be a peach blossom garden of a large sect. The protagonist and the tiger are together, and it turns out there is a demon mistress... These should be big stories in the following chapters. 3. There are descriptions and quotations from "A Dream of Red Mansions" and "Journey to the West" in the book, and small plots can become laughable if used properly. 4. The author's writing style and conception are worthy of praise, and he has a good grasp of the rhythm, and the plot does not drag out at all. 5. The paragraphs are well divided and suitable for the reader's reading experience. These are the highlights of this book. If the author has a complete outline before writing the book, then the story should be more exciting as it goes on. It took me a whole morning to read 67,000 words in one go, and so far I am looking forward to the rest of the book. If we can continue to maintain this level in the future, the score will be 5 points higher.

This book is interesting, it magically changes reality. Great updates, 10,000 updates per day. Content introduction: Today's headlines--; "Malaysian Grandmaster breaks through the ninth level and conquers the world!"; "Grandmaster Pony aspires to the highest level and sweeps across Europe and Asia!"; "Gang Leader Qiao takes action again, suspected to be a ninth-grade grandmaster!"; "The stock god's sword is still young, and he has entered the top ten in the global guru list again!"; "..."; Watching the news flashing one after another, Fang Ping felt so tired, this script is wrong!

[Roadside Stall Evaluation Circle] The score is about 73. Not responsible for the advantages, only responsible for the poison... Overall, it is a happy novel for beginners, which is not easy to collapse and is relatively popular. Basically, the protagonist traveled through time and inherited a college that was about to close down. Then the spirit of the college woke up and told him that this was the super awesome Zhutian Temple, so... Goldfinger is particularly clear. He is a variant of the old man with the ring, the spirit of the academy, but he wakes up suddenly for some unknown reason. Xiao Yan's Yao Lao also said why he woke up. In short, Goldfinger is a bit abrupt. Then the protagonist has studied for decades in a time-stagnant space with a lot of knowledge. To be honest, you might as well design a search engine that you can carry with you. This weakling's way of learning is just... That's it. Anyway, the protagonist became more talented, and later obtained the Divine Art of All Heavens... It was so smooth. After that, the courtyard spirit took on the functions of the system, issued a task, and then slapped Mr. Zhou in the face. This golden finger is quite big, and the tricks are very popular. In the process, I gained a powerful disciple~~Of course this disciple is the precious daughter of a certain family. The whole process is quite good even though it is cliché. After that, the rhythm got a little messy. There are too many scenes with the Bai family who play the role of comedy. Although it is indeed very happy, there is always a sense of emptiness. Please remember to increase the depth of the article in the future. The number of characters gradually increased, and the role of the protagonist suddenly decreased. The plot around the protagonist was about the training and daily life of female students, which was very bland... The focus of the story was on the Bai family's search for a girl. Then until 80,000 words, the Bai family finally found their daughter, and they directly robbed her... By the way, is this Bai family really just here to make fun of her? I feel like there is something wrong with their IQ and their ability to make up their minds is too outrageous. Then... Have you thought of the main plot? If so, try to do it as quickly as possible. Pay attention to adding some frustration to the protagonist to bring the reader's attention back to the protagonist.

(Female channel) [Roadside stall review circle] "Haunting and Peaceful" Overall rating: Good+ The writing style and setting are both good. Overall, it's a pretty good article. There's not much to say about it, so I'll mainly talk about some minor issues with language and details here. It can be seen that the author has good writing skills, but in some places it looks like a composition, and some of the language is a little too complicated. For example: In this era of advanced new media, there are probably not many people like him who would not buy a smartphone if it were not for the convenience of contacting his sister. They rely solely on television and newspapers to obtain information. I'm a little tired from reading. Personally, I think it would be better if it was more concise or broken into short sentences. Let's talk about the details. The setting for Chao Qianlin is too difficult to handle. Personally, I think a woman with perfect appearance should not appear in a novel with a serious style of writing. Even if she does appear, she should not be a main character or appear prematurely. According to the author's intention, this should be a foreshadowing, but it can easily become a poisonous point. If it is not handled well, it can easily collapse the story. Calling it a Mary Sue is an understatement. And it also caused another wave of things that can be said to be poisonous: Chao Qianshen and Chao Qianlin forced the love between brother and sister. The killer Li Liqing fell in love with Chao Qianlin at first sight but did not kill her and brought her back to his boss (I think this is Li Liqing's character setting). The morbidity was too strong, and it felt like a slight dissuasion. Hope it can be dealt with next. Then I continued, probably to explain the background and setting, so I wrote the plot that Chao Qianshen didn't even know Taoist Ren's real name. However, the phone call between Chao Qianshen and Taoist Ren in the first chapter and the subsequent interactions between the two people gave people the feeling that they had interacted with each other many times, and it felt a bit unreasonable that they didn't even ask their names; in addition, Chao Qianshen knew about his job. The office may be related to the other world. When Taoist Ren gave him the invitation letter, he specifically asked him to pay attention to whether anything happened. Then Chao Qianshen asked his cherished sister to leave all the protection to attend the party alone. He was frightened at home all night. I hope to give some more obvious foreshadowing hints in the front, otherwise it will look like Jiangzhi. In addition, the move names like Chidori and Rasengan are too ridiculous, so you might consider changing them. When switching scenes, it is recommended to use symbols to separate a row. If you switch directly, the previous paragraph will be Chao Qianlin, and the next paragraph will become Chao Qianshen, and it will be difficult to react. In addition to these, the disconnect between the introduction and the text is also a problem. The introduction is relaxed and the main perspective is Chao Qianlin, but the main text style is very heavy, and the main content is unfolded from Chao Qianshen's perspective, which may miss many readers. To sum up, I think the writing of this book itself does not have any big problems, but it will be more difficult to develop from a starting point where Shuangwen is the mainstream, and that's pretty much it.

[Part-time review] Author of "The Prison of Destiny": Before Life Is Dead Rating: 70 First of all, the title of this novel is very compelling. I feel that this is a novel that can make people think, and there are things related to human nature buried in it. Moreover, the introduction of the novel is very informative, and it imposes various conditions on the protagonist as a time traveler, so that he cannot use the golden finger like Shuangwen. But the only embarrassing thing is that the last paragraph of the current version of the introduction doesn't seem to be particularly grammatically fluent. I can understand what the author wants to express, but I can't quite understand it literally... So, there is still a long way to go to change the introduction [laughing] Let me explain the setting of this story. The world where the story mainly takes place is a magical world, and magic is so popular in this world that it is almost equivalent to another kind of science. There are several human countries of different sizes in the world, with battles between different parties. There are other species that are different from humans. Those who are stronger than humans will be regarded as enemies, those who are weaker than humans will be treated as slaves, and those who are particularly weak will be treated as pets. Although the place where the main character is located is a remote mountain village, basic operations such as population registration and medical insurance are still popular, which directly led to the protagonist traveling through time and becoming a gangster. Due to an unknown golden finger, the protagonist can understand the local language and can express it after practicing. And this golden finger seems to work sometimes. When it works, it can even translate the languages ​​of other species. And underneath all of this is the ultimate setting for the protagonist, or the entire story, which can probably be expressed as his inextricable connection with the world's biggest villain, the boss. This directly leads to the protagonist being instinctively rejected by the locals, and comes with the magical property of resurrection from the dead - if I understand correctly. This kind of story that artificially sets up many obstacles for the protagonist, weakens the protagonist's halo, and allows the protagonist to complete various challenges in an unconventional way, is quite interesting if it is well written. Then let's talk about the story itself. As I analyzed above - if the analysis is correct - the article adds a lot of obstacles to the protagonist's normal life. Personally, I feel that this kind of story should be one where the readers don't know what to do, but the protagonist knows what to do, so it looks happier. However, judging from the current situation, not only does the protagonist not know what he is going to do, but even the author is a little confused - he directly included the words "another bad chapter" in the author's remarks in some chapters, which made me a little embarrassed. Finally, in the world of this story, it can be said that the author has given many systematic settings, such as magic and weapons. Judging from the current settings, it is very possible to write a very good story, but the specific text is a bit uncomfortable. If it can be adjusted slightly, the effect may be better.

(Female Channel) Reborn Military Doctor Warms Military Marriage Initial review: 72. Looking at the title of the book, you can tell that it is a rebirth military wedding story that has been very popular recently. The introduction is also very attractive. The heroine is not a Mary Su type at first glance. It should be a story of a strong female character with personality, a story of rebirth and revenge. I had read more than a dozen chapters before I accepted the book review, and I was attracted by the author's imagination. The person caught in bed was actually a man. It was different from the ordinary routine. It really caught the reader's attention and wanted to find out. This time I read the previous article carefully again because I was afraid that the comments would be biased. The main story is very lively, not procrastinating, and the characters have distinct personalities. The twists and turns in the plot always make people want to find out and follow it, and there are many foreshadowings. The third chapter at the beginning sets up the male protagonist's bumpy love road in the future. As a layman about medicine, I thought it was very exciting. The author is either familiar with medicine or has worked hard in this area. For me, who has not read new literature for a long time, this book is actually quite enjoyable to read. At least it seems to be very fluent. The author's writing style is also good. The scenes and psychological descriptions in the book are remarkable, and the vocabulary is rich. I read the seventy-three chapters in detail, and skipped to almost one hundred and six. The plot gradually gets better, and the story of the heroine and the hero is not cliché. For revenge, she forms an alliance with the teacher she had a crush on in her previous life. Overall, it is a story worth watching. This kind of story must be seen in the revenge stage to feel more interesting. However, I was still shocked by certain plots. Why did the reborn heroine fall in love with her best friend who is also a girl? It turns out that the man-guy at the beginning is just a side dish, and there is a big meal waiting here. Well, this is purely a matter of personal preference, but it's actually a highlight of the plot. These are just personal opinions for reference only. Overall, it's a good article and I'm still following it. This is my first review, please forgive me for any inappropriateness.

[Discovering Fairy Grass] "Monster Big City" Author: Xiao Chui'er Yiyang Initial review: 85. This is a great urban fantasy system flow micro-detection article. If you like this subject, you must read it. If I hadn't run out of investment qualifications this month, I would have invested in this book - not for the profit, just because the story is really great. The story system of the entire novel is probably connected by cases one by one. So far, we have reached chapter 71, and there are about three cases. Since I don't know much about detective novels, I can't give any professional evaluation. I can only say that it has no flaws, it's very exciting and worth reading. The background of the story is modern times. The protagonist is originally an ordinary high school student, but after encountering an adventure, he comes into contact with the fantasy world of demons. He enters a system in the form of a mobile phone forum and lights up a series of practical skills. Then he can deal with the subsequent cases and tasks with ease and turn danger into disaster. The main idea of ​​the worldview structure is also very exciting, such as the settings about the teaching of exercises, the settings about the Classic of Mountains and Seas, and the system hidden in the mobile forum. They are all great ideas. The protagonist has a full character, a pair of parents who travel around all day long, a childhood sweetheart, a goddess, a buddy, and friends. The character is likeable and natural, and the inner activities are accompanied by barrage, which makes it quite immersive. The descriptions of human beings in the story are relatively realistic. The person with the golden finger is probably the hacker I met in the cafe who likes to decipher codes. Most of the characters tend to be just and gentle, without too much dark side. The non-human society in the story, or the "inner world" as described in the book, also appears to be very gentle. Although there are some murders, treasures, and human lives, the parts that have direct contact with the protagonist and have a close relationship are probably very down-to-earth and have upright views. There is a lot to look forward to in the entire story. So far, there are no clues about what is said in the prologue. It is probably the most foreshadowing content in the entire novel. The protagonist's "son" probably also has a more magical life experience, although I'm a little curious why he doesn't ask other people. The extension and development of several skills of the protagonist, as well as the emergence of new skills, are probably something worth looking forward to. Of course, there is also the emotional line. Is she a green plum or a goddess? That's a problem, haha. To sum up, this is a story worth looking forward to. There are no flaws, or for me, there are no flaws - except that I am not too keen on the detective genre. So, if you have time, if you like this subject, be sure to read it. Because, this story is worth it.

(Female Channel) How can I put it this way? I read the first few chapters of this book and I feel like I want to keep reading. First of all, I think the idea of ​​connecting the male and female protagonists in this book is very good. Of course, this is my personal opinion. In the book, the hero and heroine are connected through a shared kitchen incident. The shared kitchen is really novel. Of course, there are some small logical loopholes, but the flaws cannot be concealed. I won't spoil the specific details, friends who are interested can check it out. Secondly, I think the role of the male protagonist's sister in the book is well set up. The reader is given a doubt at the beginning, why does she want to meet the heroine? Then I will explain the reasons slowly. There is a kind of narrative flashback technique, which is very good and arouses the reader's desire to read more.

[Roadside stall evaluation circle] [Passers' Comments] "Chaoyang Police" - words come from life, and opinions are born from experience! Overall rating: 87 points 1. Basic perception Daily style, ordinary things, seeing the big from the small, humorous. This book tells the story of a super unpopular little policeman who was transferred to the police station of a demolished urban village because of his inappropriate major (music major). The seemingly undisciplined classmate Han Chaoyang boldly took the mass line and fought the people's war. Through down-to-earth activities such as fishing, joining a band, establishing a WeChat group, sending red envelopes, going on blind dates and other down-to-earth activities, he had a great time mingling with the "Chaoyang masses". In return, the small community police actually led the "security team" to successfully destroy counterfeiting dens and assisted in solving large-scale cases of manufacturing and selling perjury, robberies, homicides, and thefts... Extraordinary things can be done in ordinary positions, not only by golden fingers, but also by the magic touch of turning stone into gold. 2. Highlights of this book 1. The details are described in detail and realistically, everything is described accurately, and the description is very accurate; 2. The full text is very down-to-earth, neither preaching nor condescending, but closely connecting with the masses, forming a united front between young people and adults; 3. The protagonist's character description is in place: he has ideas, personality, execution ability, dares to venture and do things, and has strong adaptability; 4. It can be seen that the author has rich work experience and accurate selection of materials. Several seemingly ordinary police missions: catching snakes, breaking up fights, land and property demolition disputes, immigration census, etc. Are all conflicting hot spots about people's livelihood, as if they happened around him; 5. The seemingly ordinary police career in the book quietly hides wisdom and philosophy, which comes from rich life experiences and is worth spending time to ponder; 6. The writing is full of humor, but this kind of humor is unique and not obvious in the text; 7. Pretending to be slapped in the face is also very covert, and most of them are logical. This is a purely literary way of writing, rather than blindly pursuing the cool points, but the effect is no different, and if it is used properly and the foreshadowing is sufficient, the cool points will be stronger; 8. Several supporting characters are also well written. 3. Overall evaluation Score: [87] (For details, please refer to the second edition of the "Roadside Stall Evaluation Circle" scoring details) Suitable for: Suitable for all ages (pure novices may find it difficult), physical publishing, TV series adaptations This is a book that describes the work and life of grassroots police officers. It is easy to write well and it is just one step away from bad writing. How to reasonably fictionalize and create exciting points while maintaining the original taste will test all aspects of the level and ability. The difficulty of writing can be imagined. But obviously, the author already has such strength! (The level of passers-by is limited, and the comments are purely amateur, based on personal preferences, for reference only)

[Roadside stall evaluation circle] [Passenger's Comments] "Hidden Ice" - heroic emotions in troubled times, combined with military skills, is indeed the best! 1. Basic perception History, fairy tales, martial arts, military art, and romance novels are five in one. They are integrated and integrated. They have already far surpassed each separate category. The application of knowledge is as pure as the Golden Liang. This book tells the story of a generation of famous general Zuo Beihou who was brutally wiped out and left behind a posthumous son. His beloved general and his son risked their lives to cross the Changjiang River and survived. A few years later, he traveled to the snow-capped mountains to visit elves, opened his eyes to wisdom, bravely braved Xiaogushan to save his brother, memorized 100,000 Taoist classics, shook the hidden ice ruler in the mountain, revitalized the Cangbei army, attacked Dulang City at night, competed with swords in Meizhou City, the heroine was born, and practiced medicine to save the people... The scenes were magnificent and heart-stirring. 2. Highlights of this book 1. For the first time, I feel disgusted with long paragraphs of text that are not divided into paragraphs. I feel that if I don't write like this, it is not enough to describe the vivid panorama. It turns out that it is not that too many words are not suitable for online articles, but that people who are incompetent should not write too much text, which will only leave a laughing stock. The correct way is to speak meaningfully; 2. The writing flows smoothly and is completed in one go. This has reached the master level. The environment, scenes and characters are lifelike and appear on the paper without any abruptness; 3. Poems and allusions can be picked up at your fingertips, and you probably don't need to look up too much information, let alone Du Niang's help; 4. The characters have distinctive characteristics, whether it is Zhou Qing and Xun Zhou in their childhood, Zhou Yan who regains his glory, the scheming Xianwen of the state government, the chronically ill Xuan Li, the Taoist Chen who sweeps the floor all day long, the dead tree springs up Long Yanyi, the old god who predicts the future, the unknown unknown heroine who is shocking... All of them are impressive; 5. The explanation of Taoist theory is very profound. This is a comprehensive expression. Without skills and experience, it is difficult to understand so deeply; 6. The Wise Eyes have far-reaching meanings. I am very much looking forward to breaking through the first one as soon as possible. What will the fourth Wise Eyes look like? Break into a cold sweat. 3. Overall evaluation Score: [91] (I leave the peak of online literature to 95 and above, and the peak of traditional literature to 90 and above, which may be a bit too precious) Suitable for: (senior) Lao Bai, physical publishing, adaptation of Xianxia TV series It turns out that Qidian also has such works, and I am still worried about whether I can sign the contract, but fortunately, these top works have gradually joined the ranks of online articles; online articles are indeed inclusive, and Big D has broadened the writing form of traditional writers. I hope to boldly write about immortals and heroic heroes. Who said that "xiaxia" is dead? I hope there will be more and more articles like this and the road will become wider! (The level of passers-by is limited, and the comments are purely amateur, based on personal preferences, for reference only)

[Roadside stall evaluation circle] [Part-time review] "Online Games Collection Master" Author: Lan Xiang's brother Overall rating 82. An orthodox holographic online game article with novel setting, interesting plot, clear main line and careful attention to details. Although there are some unsatisfactory aspects, the flaws are not concealed. It is a complete and rigorous novel worth reading. (The important thing is that the author still has the manuscript saved) The opening game is open beta, and you can enter the game directly without any extraneous content, the rhythm is appropriate, and it is full of fun to watch. The game setting is novel and the professions are quite satisfactory, but the character setting is relatively innovative and feels eye-catching. At the same time, there are also many unexpected ideas in terms of specific equipment tasks, such as "+15 epic necklace", "high auspicious number rewards", "hatred lock", monster names and skill names, etc. When reading, you will have the feeling of "Hey, this setting is very interesting", I suggest the author to continue to maintain it. The protagonist has a clear goal. He enters the game as a professional player, has a small group, and can exchange information offline. The setting is relatively complete and self-consistent, and you can look forward to the subsequent development. The golden finger should be regarded as luck, coupled with a little skill, it will bring good skills and equipment tasks, normal routine. The overall focus is on data flow and technology flow. All upgrades, equipment, skills and even monster attributes are supported by clear data. When the protagonist fights the boss, the details will be carefully designed (as the author said), and (should) stand up to scrutiny and appear to be very rigorous. The villain is pretty average, just a small boss in the big guild who fights against others, and with the addition of a white lotus, there is generally nothing outstanding about it. At the same time, I think another advantage of this novel is that the author is very sincere. This sincerity includes but is not limited to having a saved manuscript, being able to reply to this chapter, and commenting in the book review area. He often talks about the thoughts he put into writing, the hard work he put into this book, etc. In the writer's remarks. Personally, I think this will attract the most fans. Finally, after seeing the author interacting with readers about the number of female protagonists, I would like to share my views. There are several girls in the novel who have a crush on the male protagonist. This is normal. But if the male protagonist is hesitant and hesitant, or half-heartedly wants to open a harem and rushes to the stallion road, it will be a bit poisonous and shocking. I personally don't like this style of painting - of course this is just a personal whim and has nothing to do with the actual situation of the novel, so you can just ignore it.

[Roadside stall evaluation circle] [Part-time Review] "The Out-of-Print Sword God" Author: Coffee Bean An orthodox holographic online game, with data flow and technology flow, the cheats are not obvious, it is a little slow to warm up, the proportion of virtual reality is moderate, and there are no obvious poisonous points. The title of the novel is quite satisfactory, and the introduction is okay at first, but later on it feels a bit rough and doesn't quite match the style of writing. If you don't mind, you can adjust it a bit. The initial evaluation score is 80 points, which is above average and has high growth potential. If you are interested, you can fatten it up. The background of the novel is a holographic online game, which is an old routine. The public beta begins at the beginning of the story, and the protagonist directly buys a helmet and enters the game. I think the description of the game itself is more appropriate. It not only introduces the basic information of the game through excessive plots such as special animations, but also does not focus on too much science popularization to make people feel tired, nor is it too general to leave a complete impression. The author handles the details in the game very well. Personal panel attribute values, equipment data, skill details and even monster attributes are all introduced in detail. Since I am not a data controller, I did not verify the specific data. If this aspect can withstand scrutiny, it will definitely be a very stable selling point. There isn't much to talk about in terms of professions. Everything is a normal setting. The only thing that can attract attention is probably the skill book, but it's only the beginning now, and most of the content has not been unfolded yet. The sub-career is only part of it, it seems to be a way to make money. The mission setting in the game is unique. The protagonist has accepted a few missions so far, and what he brings is probably just ordinary experience, money and equipment. I hope there will be interesting things like serial missions in the future. As for the players, as of the 100,000-word mark, the protagonist had a feud with a trade union, got acquainted with a group of big guys, and connected with the display by the way. There is a best friend who cooperates tacitly and wants to start his own union, but he has accepted the invitation and has not responded yet. Personally, I prefer the protagonist to hang out with the big guys, but it depends on the author's ideas. Generally speaking, the structure and setting of the entire novel have no flaws, and it leaves enough platform for the future plot development. It is estimated that it can attract a group of readers through the feelings of traditional online game novels. They can read a long distance in one go without feeling bored, and the potential is sufficient. To sum up, this book is a qualified classic online game article, and the author's narrative technique is enough to support such a story. The only thing that is not good enough is that the story lacks highlights and is easily buried in today's online article frenzy. You can consider adding more of your own ideas to the story, or adding some distinctive characters to increase the impression of the novel in the minds of readers.

[Roadside stall evaluation circle] (Female Channel) [Passenger Comments] "A Nuan and Her Movie World" - a modern version of the Cinderella story! Overall rating: 85 points. 1. Basic perception The writing is excellent and the plot is fluent; it is warm and informative, and it is a good popular science article about the entertainment industry. This book tells the story of a beautiful screenwriter. Although she was very talented, her business failed due to her excessive ambition and the betrayal of her partners. She was reduced from a boss to an employee, and returned to her old business. Having just lost love, she accidentally bumps into a handsome guy on the road while chasing her ex-boyfriend, and the story begins from there. A cute little handsome guy, a pet white cat, a good idea, a good script, and the filming of a low-cost movie. During the period, there are complex corporate interpersonal relationships, a collective poisoning incident on the crew, the director falling in love with a life teacher, a private concert by a world-renowned band, and Lily being photographed by the paparazzi... Aha, no more spoilers, it is worthy of being produced by a screenwriter! 2. Highlights of this book 1. The writing style is no longer a problem, the only thing that is faulty may be the story itself; 2. I was late for work, and Didi actually ordered a taxi... Plane? He has a good mind and dares to think; 3. The visual sense is particularly strong, even an ordinary piece of the crew feels real; 4. The characterization is very distinctive and looks just like real people. It feels common and impressive at the same time; 5. The description of the upper class society is easy to read. I believe that as the plot develops, there may be more and more knowledge. Moreover, if you pay careful attention to the details, you will find that most of them are not fabricated out of thin air; 6. The author's professionalism can be felt in every position and division of labor in the crew; 7. The portrayal of the male protagonist has some flaws, but it does have its highlights. At first I thought it was the domineering president who fell in love with me, but fortunately it was not the case. It was still more or less down-to-earth. 3. Overall evaluation Score: [85] (For details, please refer to the second edition of the "Roadside Stall Evaluation Circle" scoring details) Suitable for: innocent girls, non-senior white men, physical publishing, TV series adaptations To be honest, I almost gave it 90 points, but in the end I reduced it. Because I was almost poisoned and bored to death by the story of Cinderella and the pretty boy at the beginning! Because he's handsome, he took him home and slept in a bed on the first day? I hate the handsomeness of flower boys... But this book is very professional and is indeed written as a screenwriter should. It also writes about a lot of knowledge and fields that I am not familiar with. Of course, most of them are about the film and television industry, online novels, and entrepreneurship. In addition, the author should be very knowledgeable, and I secretly speculate that the author is also a very wealthy person, because poverty has limited my imagination, and the luxury revealed between the lines has scared me. Of course, maybe the author has just seen this kind of luxury (manual funny). I hope that the subsequent plot will not be boring, but sweet! In addition, I have a heartfelt request: There is a book that I like very much, and I would like to ask if it can be adapted into a screenplay? (The level of passers-by is limited, and the comments are purely amateur, based on personal preferences, for reference only)

[Roadside stall evaluation circle] "Evil God Cultivation Manual" Score: 80 points Good-looking, really good-looking! Fantasy + supernatural + Sherlock style detective elements. Well, the main character's name is Sherlock. When the dark wizard took Sherlock's body to sacrifice to the evil god, he pulled the protagonist's soul over, so the protagonist merged into Sherlock's body and became the agent of the evil god. There are only twenty chapters, and I won't introduce the plot. In short, it is a detective-style supernatural novel in a fantasy world. Defects The writing style is still good, but it needs continuous practice. Come to think of it, this kind of novel requires very high writing skills. The style must be stable. I am worried that it will turn into a struggle among gods for hegemony in the later stage. It is recommended to weaken the gods. They are just embellishments of the world's North Pole. No, I'll look at the author later. There was no investment when it was 10,000 words, and I felt like I missed out on 100 million.

The overall rating is 80 points - from [Roadside Stall Review Circle] Li Disqualified Review. 1. Book title. The name of the book is "Dang Sword Killing Demons". When I hear this name, I feel an aura of awe lingering in my chest. Personally, I think it's pretty good, and it suits the appetite of a pseudo-literary like me. 2. Advantages of books. 1. The world view of the book is very grand. Famous decent sects, evil sects, imperial courts, Jianghu forces, etc. Are each distributed on one side of the earth. The entangled interests of all parties and the love and hatred of the characters all make readers think a lot. 2. The author's writing style is good and has an ancient charm. 3. Disadvantages of the book. 1. Some plots in the book are really not rigorous. For example, in the wedge, the scene between the protagonist's parents and Japan. The Japanese pirates didn't know that the protagonist's parents were in the village. They just wanted to attack an ordinary small fishing village. They brought so many people and weapons to capture each fishing village with more than a dozen households. The Japanese pirates came out in full force. It was really wrong. I dare not delve into the dialogue after meeting the protagonist's parents, and the dissuasive effect is quite strong. 2. The connection between the story of the book and the story is not good, and the jump is too big. For example, in the first chapter of the book, three or four stories from different places are told in succession, and the transitions in between are too abrupt. 3. The world in the book. Obviously, the author of this book wanted to write about Jianghu, which is similar to the Jianghu written by Jin Yong and Gu Long. However, I personally feel that the Jianghu in the book is too monotonous and does not have a strong sense of substitution. For example, in the opening chapter, the only thing that can be seen as a bit of a charlatanism is a brief introduction to a character's past deeds. However, those fragments that focus on pen and ink description have no chivalry or charlatanism. Moreover, at the beginning of the book, there is a lot of text saying that the world is very chaotic. Once you enter the world, you cannot help yourself. Once you enter the world, you have no time to wait. This is undoubtedly inappropriate. I secretly believe that the world that most people yearn for should be one of pleasure and revenge, rather than hardship. Although the nature of rivers and lakes is indeed as deep as the sea, I think the author does not need to write it directly. He should reveal it from some happy and grudge events so that readers can experience it for themselves. 4. World view. The grander the worldview, the higher the requirements for the author's writing skills. Personally, I think it would be better if the author didn't involve so many big backgrounds, so many sects, characters, etc. At the beginning. He could start from a small point and then go into detail, adding elements of the story step by step. 4. General comments. Overall, this book is still a traditional martial arts work worth reading and worth reading carefully. This book has exceeded one million words. I think it is quite amazing to be able to write a work with one million words. I sincerely admire the author! I think the purpose of the author's request for review should be to get some opinions or suggestions on the plot. However, in this regard, my ability is limited and I really cannot provide random ideas. I am extremely sorry. Okay, let's stop writing here first. The above comments are all my humble opinions and are for reference only. If you have a venomous tongue, please forgive me. Let's encourage you all! Slip away.

[From the "Roadside Stall Review" Circle, Li Disqualified Review] Overall rating: 80, a relaxing martial arts work worth watching. First of all, the author of this book is a senior who already has excellent books. Such a senior is very decent in the details of writing, and there are no flaws such as uneven writing and ink. It can be said that there is no problem with the structure of this book, so in the following book review I will start from the deficiencies in the plot and content of the book. Let's go straight to the topic and start using venomous remarks, please forgive me. Disadvantages of the book: 1. The name of the protagonist, Cai Yunjie, and the name of the protagonist's mother, Qian Duoduo, personally feel that such names are too local and have no characteristics, or they are too distinctive, which is a bit bad and affects the sense of substitution. 2. Some plots in the book. For example, in the first chapter, the protagonist met a girl. Due to system reasons, he was rude to her and was beaten. The girl wanted to kill the protagonist, but after seeing the gold card given by the system, she quickly changed her attitude and became extremely affectionate towards the protagonist. Later, there was another system task, which required the protagonist to be beaten many times, so he found the girl again. As a result, because of something not too big, the protagonist was almost beaten to death and was in a coma for a month. These two plots, I personally feel, are too deliberate and bloody, and have a strong dissuasive effect. 3. The system in the book. The systematic tasks in the book are all forced to be accepted by the protagonist, and the punishments for the tasks are very serious, ranging from the abolition of cultivation to the obliteration of the most serious. I personally think that such a system will not be very likable and will also have a dissuasive effect. 4. There are not enough highlights in the book. This book is the author's first attempt at a light-hearted humor genre, but I didn't see much of this feature in the book. In my opinion, the highlight of a book in the so-called lighthearted and humorous genre should be the plot and some words. For example, "Your Majesty, My Majesty, Spare Your Life" by Elbow D, uses everyday words such as Lu Shu or Xiaoyu to create interesting and laugh-provoking effects. There are also plots. Some of the plots that make people laugh out loud are still like Elbow Big D's book, which is about the little fat man's endorsement, and the plot of the little fat man being pranked by Lu Shu when he goes to the toilet. I believe that a good light-hearted novel must have something interesting in both language and plot that can make people laugh and make people want to continue reading. Of course, it is not enough to have funny plots alone. Some thought-provoking and profound plots are also needed. For details, we have to refer to the plot of "My King, My Majesty, Spare My Life", which deals with Lu Shu's growth and changes. As for this book, I secretly feel that it is lacking in the above aspects, and there is no desire to attract people to continue reading. First of all, the author's last book was a high-quality book, so this shows that the style and subject matter of the previous book were extremely successful and recognized by the majority of book lovers. But according to the author, the book was blocked for some reason, which I still don't know.

Book review: The writing is indeed good, a little ambiguous, but doesn't the immortal just want to play with the world? If you go around fighting and looking for trouble like a little hooligan all day long, then your style is too low. The author writes about the indifference of an immortal, with a feeling of watching flowers blooming and falling in front of the court, and looking at the clouds rolling in the sky. Although he has the demeanor of a hermit, he is not out of touch with society. Don't worry about having no friends in the future. No one in the world knows you. This kind of invisible pretense is even more deadly. I like a peaceful social environment, which allows me to play with peace of mind, so I like this type of book. Besides, an immortal must have the character of an immortal. If a tiger or leopard doesn't show its claws, whoever sees the big boss will end up personally. I hope that I can write better and better, and I look forward to the light of God shining here. Introduction: This article tells the story of how an immortal person should live a correct and active life in modern human society under the guidance of the core socialist values. I hope it can inspire other immortals, people with special abilities, cultivators, aliens, and non-human creatures to share their experiences in building a stable and harmonious life in the country.

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