Li Fan Ji

[Passenger's Comments] Passerby's Comments: "Li Fan Ji" Overall Rating: 70 points At first glance, the title of the book seems unremarkable. To be honest, a book title like this is a bit cliche. It lacks something that attracts the attention of ordinary Internet articles. I guess the title of the book means leaving the mortal world to cultivate immortality and ask questions. After reading the content again, I found that the original male protagonist was called Chen Lifan, well, he escaped from the mortal world. When I thought about it, I felt that the title of the book was quite good. The name not only echoed the title of the book, but also provided the reason why the male protagonist entered the world of cultivating immortals. Although most people do not recommend using character names as book titles, I personally think it is okay. If there is no more attractive title, it is okay not to change it. The text begins with the reference to the patchwork stone left by Nuwa under Qinggian Peak in "Dream of Red Mansions". Although this is not a new idea, it is still interesting. Anyway, I like "Dream of Red Mansions" and I was attracted to it. The first chapter describes the male protagonist Chen Lifan, who is an ordinary white-collar worker in the city and is tired of his boring and meaningless life. He takes a tour bus to the north nakedly, but encounters a patchwork stone blocking the road near Mohe, and is attacked by vampire bats and blood dragons. The description of this paragraph is very visual, and it is very interesting as far as the first chapter is concerned. The Sky-Mending Stone described by the author has a special mission. Nuwa sealed the souls of evil beasts and raptors in the Sky-Mending Stone and left a legacy in it. The Tianbu Stone, which lacks spiritual energy supply, knows that its end is coming. In order to prevent Nuwa's inheritance from being cut off, it tears apart time and space and brings the male protagonist into a world rich in spiritual energy. Since then, the male protagonist has started his journey of cultivating immortality and upgrading from Novice Village. Advantages of this book: 1. The details of this book are well described. The villagers' inadvertent actions are very touching, reflecting their integrity and kindness. The plot of the male protagonist picking wild flowers to give to the little sister next door is also very heartwarming. 2. The suspense foreshadowing is good. The Novice Village that the protagonist travels through turns out to be a peach blossom garden of a large sect. The protagonist and the tiger are together, and it turns out there is a demon mistress... These should be big stories in the following chapters. 3. There are descriptions and quotations from "A Dream of Red Mansions" and "Journey to the West" in the book, and small plots can become laughable if used properly. 4. The author's writing style and conception are worthy of praise, and he has a good grasp of the rhythm, and the plot does not drag out at all. 5. The paragraphs are well divided and suitable for the reader's reading experience. These are the highlights of this book. If the author has a complete outline before writing the book, then the story should be more exciting as it goes on. It took me a whole morning to read 67,000 words in one go, and so far I am looking forward to the rest of the book. If we can continue to maintain this level in the future, the score will be 5 points higher.

The title of the book is not eye-catching, but the content is amazing. The opening chapter borrows the legend of mending the sky from "A Dream of Red Mansions", which is considered the first big easter egg of the book. From the very beginning, the plot breaks away from the cliche plot of entering a sect and starting training as an outer sect disciple, which is refreshing. The compact plot coupled with better writing style makes it very attractive to read.

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