Prison of Fate

From the roadside stall review circle. First of all, the title of this novel is very compelling. I feel that this is a novel that can make people think, and there are things related to human nature buried in it. Moreover, the introduction of the novel is very informative, and it imposes various conditions on the protagonist as a time traveler, so that he cannot use the golden finger like Shuangwen. But the only embarrassing thing is that the last paragraph of the current version of the introduction doesn't seem to be particularly grammatically fluent. I can understand what the author wants to express, but I can't quite understand it literally... So, there is still a long way to go to change the introduction [laughing] The title and introduction are both above the standard, which directly led me to pick up this review... Even though I only read fifty chapters due to time and energy constraints. Let me explain the setting of this story. The world where the story mainly takes place is a magical world, and magic is so popular in this world that it is almost equivalent to another kind of science. There are several human countries of different sizes in the world, with battles between different parties. There are other species that are different from humans. Those who are stronger than humans will be regarded as enemies, those who are weaker than humans will be treated as slaves, and those who are particularly weak will be treated as pets. Although the place where the main character is located is a remote mountain village, basic operations such as population registration and medical insurance are still popular, which directly led to the protagonist traveling through time and becoming a gangster. Due to an unknown golden finger, the protagonist can understand the local language and can express it after practicing. And this golden finger seems to work sometimes. When it works, it can even translate the languages ​​of other species. And underneath all of this is the ultimate setting for the protagonist, or the entire story, which can probably be expressed as his inextricable connection with the world's biggest villain, the boss. This directly leads to the protagonist being instinctively rejected by the locals, and comes with the magical property of resurrection from the dead - if I understand correctly. This kind of story that artificially sets up many obstacles for the protagonist, weakens the protagonist's halo, and allows the protagonist to complete various challenges in an unconventional way, is quite interesting if it is well written.

[Part-time review] Author of "The Prison of Destiny": Before Life Is Dead Rating: 70 First of all, the title of this novel is very compelling. I feel that this is a novel that can make people think, and there are things related to human nature buried in it. Moreover, the introduction of the novel is very informative, and it imposes various conditions on the protagonist as a time traveler, so that he cannot use the golden finger like Shuangwen. But the only embarrassing thing is that the last paragraph of the current version of the introduction doesn't seem to be particularly grammatically fluent. I can understand what the author wants to express, but I can't quite understand it literally... So, there is still a long way to go to change the introduction [laughing] Let me explain the setting of this story. The world where the story mainly takes place is a magical world, and magic is so popular in this world that it is almost equivalent to another kind of science. There are several human countries of different sizes in the world, with battles between different parties. There are other species that are different from humans. Those who are stronger than humans will be regarded as enemies, those who are weaker than humans will be treated as slaves, and those who are particularly weak will be treated as pets. Although the place where the main character is located is a remote mountain village, basic operations such as population registration and medical insurance are still popular, which directly led to the protagonist traveling through time and becoming a gangster. Due to an unknown golden finger, the protagonist can understand the local language and can express it after practicing. And this golden finger seems to work sometimes. When it works, it can even translate the languages ​​of other species. And underneath all of this is the ultimate setting for the protagonist, or the entire story, which can probably be expressed as his inextricable connection with the world's biggest villain, the boss. This directly leads to the protagonist being instinctively rejected by the locals, and comes with the magical property of resurrection from the dead - if I understand correctly. This kind of story that artificially sets up many obstacles for the protagonist, weakens the protagonist's halo, and allows the protagonist to complete various challenges in an unconventional way, is quite interesting if it is well written. Then let's talk about the story itself. As I analyzed above - if the analysis is correct - the article adds a lot of obstacles to the protagonist's normal life. Personally, I feel that this kind of story should be one where the readers don't know what to do, but the protagonist knows what to do, so it looks happier. However, judging from the current situation, not only does the protagonist not know what he is going to do, but even the author is a little confused - he directly included the words "another bad chapter" in the author's remarks in some chapters, which made me a little embarrassed. Finally, in the world of this story, it can be said that the author has given many systematic settings, such as magic and weapons. Judging from the current settings, it is very possible to write a very good story, but the specific text is a bit uncomfortable. If it can be adjusted slightly, the effect may be better.