Zhutian Temple

From the roadside stall review circle. Overall, it is a happy novel for beginners, which is not easy to collapse and is relatively popular. Basically, the protagonist traveled through time and inherited a college that was about to close down. Then the spirit of the college woke up and told him that this was the super awesome Zhutian Temple, so... Goldfinger is particularly clear. He is a variant of the old man with the ring, the spirit of the academy, but he wakes up suddenly for some unknown reason. Xiao Yan's Yao Lao also said why he woke up. In short, Goldfinger is a bit abrupt. Then the protagonist has studied for decades in a time-stagnant space with a lot of knowledge. To be honest, you might as well design a search engine that you can carry with you. This weakling's way of learning is just... That's it. Anyway, the protagonist became more talented, and later obtained the Divine Art of All Heavens... It was so smooth. After that, the courtyard spirit took on the functions of the system, issued a task, and then slapped Mr. Zhou in the face. This golden finger is quite big, and the tricks are very popular. In the process, I gained a powerful disciple~~Of course this disciple is the precious daughter of a certain family. The whole process is quite good even though it is cliché.

[Roadside Stall Evaluation Circle] The score is about 73. Not responsible for the advantages, only responsible for the poison... Overall, it is a happy novel for beginners, which is not easy to collapse and is relatively popular. Basically, the protagonist traveled through time and inherited a college that was about to close down. Then the spirit of the college woke up and told him that this was the super awesome Zhutian Temple, so... Goldfinger is particularly clear. He is a variant of the old man with the ring, the spirit of the academy, but he wakes up suddenly for some unknown reason. Xiao Yan's Yao Lao also said why he woke up. In short, Goldfinger is a bit abrupt. Then the protagonist has studied for decades in a time-stagnant space with a lot of knowledge. To be honest, you might as well design a search engine that you can carry with you. This weakling's way of learning is just... That's it. Anyway, the protagonist became more talented, and later obtained the Divine Art of All Heavens... It was so smooth. After that, the courtyard spirit took on the functions of the system, issued a task, and then slapped Mr. Zhou in the face. This golden finger is quite big, and the tricks are very popular. In the process, I gained a powerful disciple~~Of course this disciple is the precious daughter of a certain family. The whole process is quite good even though it is cliché. After that, the rhythm got a little messy. There are too many scenes with the Bai family who play the role of comedy. Although it is indeed very happy, there is always a sense of emptiness. Please remember to increase the depth of the article in the future. The number of characters gradually increased, and the role of the protagonist suddenly decreased. The plot around the protagonist was about the training and daily life of female students, which was very bland... The focus of the story was on the Bai family's search for a girl. Then until 80,000 words, the Bai family finally found their daughter, and they directly robbed her... By the way, is this Bai family really just here to make fun of her? I feel like there is something wrong with their IQ and their ability to make up their minds is too outrageous. Then... Have you thought of the main plot? If so, try to do it as quickly as possible. Pay attention to adding some frustration to the protagonist to bring the reader's attention back to the protagonist.

[Roadside Stall Evaluation Circle] The score is about 73. Not responsible for the advantages, only responsible for the poison... Overall, it is a happy novel for beginners, which is not easy to collapse and is relatively popular. Basically, the protagonist traveled through time and inherited a college that was about to close down. Then the spirit of the college woke up and told him that this was the super awesome Zhutian Temple, so... Goldfinger is particularly clear. He is a variant of the old man with the ring, the spirit of the academy, but he wakes up suddenly for some unknown reason. Xiao Yan's Yao Lao also said why he woke up. In short, Goldfinger is a bit abrupt. Then the protagonist has studied for decades in a time-stagnant space with a lot of knowledge. To be honest, you might as well design a search engine that you can carry with you. This weakling's way of learning is just... That's it. Anyway, the protagonist became more talented, and later obtained the Divine Art of All Heavens... It was so smooth. After that, the courtyard spirit took on the functions of the system, issued a task, and then slapped Mr. Zhou in the face. This golden finger is quite big, and the tricks are very popular. In the process, I gained a powerful disciple~~Of course this disciple is the precious daughter of a certain family. The whole process is quite good even though it is cliché. After that, the rhythm got a little messy. There are too many scenes with the Bai family who play the role of comedy. Although it is indeed very happy, there is always a sense of emptiness. Please remember to increase the depth of the article in the future. The number of characters gradually increased, and the role of the protagonist suddenly decreased. The plot around the protagonist was about the training and daily life of female students, which was very bland... The focus of the story was on the Bai family's search for a girl. Then until 80,000 words, the Bai family finally found their daughter, and they directly robbed her... By the way, is this Bai family really just here to make fun of her? I feel like there is something wrong with their IQ and their ability to make up their minds is too outrageous. Then... Have you thought of the main plot? If so, try to do it as quickly as possible. Pay attention to adding some frustration to the protagonist to bring the reader's attention back to the protagonist.