Hidden Ice

[From the cowardly Wei "Roadside Stall Review Circle"] - The lofty sentiments of troubled times and the integration of military skills are indeed the best! 1. Basic perception History, fairy tales, martial arts, military art, and romance novels are five in one. They are integrated and integrated. They have already far surpassed each separate category. The application of knowledge is as pure as the Golden Liang. This book tells the story of a generation of famous general Zuo Beihou who was brutally wiped out and left behind a posthumous son. His beloved general and his son risked their lives to cross the Changjiang River and survived. A few years later, he traveled to the snow-capped mountains to visit elves, opened his eyes to wisdom, bravely braved Xiaogushan to save his brother, memorized 100,000 Taoist classics, shook the hidden ice ruler in the mountain, revitalized the Cangbei army, attacked Dulang City at night, competed with swords in Meizhou City, the heroine was born, and practiced medicine to save the people... The scenes were magnificent and heart-stirring. 2. Highlights of this book 1. For the first time, I feel disgusted with long paragraphs of text that are not divided into paragraphs. I feel that if I don't write like this, it is not enough to describe the vivid panorama. It turns out that it is not that too many words are not suitable for online articles, but that people who are incompetent should not write too much text, which will only leave a laughing stock. The correct way is to speak meaningfully; 2. The writing flows smoothly and is completed in one go. This has reached the master level. The environment, scenes and characters are lifelike and appear on the paper without any abruptness; 3. Poems and allusions can be picked up at your fingertips, and you probably don't need to look up too much information, let alone Du Niang's help; 4. The characters have distinctive characteristics, whether it is Zhou Qing and Xun Zhou in their childhood, Zhou Yan who regains his glory, the scheming Xianwen of the state government, the chronically ill Xuan Li, the Taoist Chen who sweeps the floor all day long, the dead tree springs up Long Yanyi, the old god who predicts the future, the unknown unknown heroine who is shocking... All of them are impressive; 5. The explanation of Taoist theory is very profound. This is a comprehensive expression. Without skills and experience, it is difficult to understand so deeply; 6. The Wise Eyes have far-reaching meanings. I am very much looking forward to breaking through the first one as soon as possible. What will the fourth Wise Eyes look like? Break into a cold sweat. 5. Overall evaluation Score: [91] (I leave the peak of online literature to 95 and above, and the peak of traditional literature to 90 and above, which may be a bit too precious) Suitable for: (senior) Lao Bai, physical publishing, adaptation of Xianxia TV series It turns out that Qidian also has such works, and I am still worried about whether I can sign the contract, but fortunately, these top works have gradually joined the ranks of online articles; online articles are indeed inclusive, and Big D has broadened the writing form of traditional writers. I hope to boldly write about immortals and heroic heroes. Who said that "xiaxia" is dead? I hope there will be more and more articles like this and the road will become wider!

[The temple is high, the rivers and lakes are far away, the world is unfair, chivalry is at heart] In Tiannan Mountain, in the palm of the Five Peaks, there is an authority on swordsmanship. He stands by and watches the changes in the world and the vicissitudes of everything. In Daliaoyuan, on the Wanli River, there was a sage with a sword, who used to enjoy the light of day as he explored his handwriting to write military books. When I was sleepy in Longzhong, I was lying on a fairy hill. There was a pen-writing scholar who raised his hand to compose a divine song handed down from generation to generation, expressing his madness to the fullest. Yun Mangke, a young dragon and phoenix, there was an infatuated prodigal who tried his hand at dancing with the sword and admired the heavenly Tang Dynasty drunkenly. Washing the sea of ​​flowers, in the medical hut, there was a beautiful girl in a thin skirt. She took action to help the poor in Xuanhu, but she had no intention of taking power. In the future, the sea disaster will wipe out hundreds of states, swords and swords will rise in ten countries, the snow city will finally become ancient, the iceberg will be buried deep in the dome, the young man will come out of the mountain with his sword, his father's will will be remembered when he dies, and the horse will roar in the rivers and lakes. It's not a noob, it's not cool, it's not cliche, the writing is average, and it's suitable for book lovers who like plot flow.

The combination of heroism and military skills in troubled times is indeed the best! 1. Basic perception History, fairy tales, martial arts, military art, and romance novels are five in one. They are integrated and integrated. They have already far surpassed each separate category. The application of knowledge is as pure as the Golden Liang. This book tells the story of a generation of famous general Zuo Beihou who was brutally wiped out and left behind a posthumous son. His beloved general and his son risked their lives to cross the Changjiang River and survived. A few years later, he traveled to the snow-capped mountains to visit elves, opened his eyes to wisdom, bravely braved Xiaogushan to save his brother, memorized 100,000 Taoist classics, shook the hidden ice ruler in the mountain, revitalized the Cangbei army, attacked Dulang City at night, competed with swords in Meizhou City, the heroine was born, and practiced medicine to save the people... The scenes were magnificent and heart-stirring. 2. Highlights of this book 1. For the first time, I feel disgusted with long paragraphs of text that are not divided into paragraphs. I feel that if I don't write like this, it is not enough to describe the vivid panorama. It turns out that it is not that too many words are not suitable for online articles, but that people who are incompetent should not write too much text, which will only leave a laughing stock. The correct way is to speak meaningfully; 2. The writing flows smoothly and is completed in one go. This has reached the master level. The environment, scenes and characters are lifelike and appear on the paper without any abruptness; 3. Poems and allusions can be picked up at your fingertips, and you probably don't need to look up too much information, let alone Du Niang's help; 4. The characters have distinctive characteristics, whether it is Zhou Qing and Xun Zhou in their childhood, Zhou Yan who regains his glory, the scheming Xianwen of the state government, the chronically ill Xuan Li, the Taoist Chen who sweeps the floor all day long, the dead tree springs up Long Yanyi, the old god who predicts the future, the unknown unknown heroine who is shocking... All of them are impressive; 5. The explanation of Taoist theory is very profound. This is a comprehensive expression. Without skills and experience, it is difficult to understand so deeply; 6. The Wise Eyes have far-reaching meanings. I am very much looking forward to breaking through the first one as soon as possible. What will the fourth Wise Eyes look like? Break into a cold sweat. 5. Overall evaluation Score: [91] (I leave the peak of online literature to 95 and above, and the peak of traditional literature to 90 and above, which may be a bit too precious) Suitable for: (senior) Lao Bai, physical publishing, adaptation of Xianxia TV series It turns out that Qidian also has such works, and I am still worried about whether I can sign the contract, but fortunately, these top works have gradually joined the ranks of online articles; online articles are indeed inclusive, and Big D has broadened the writing form of traditional writers. I hope to boldly write about immortals and heroic heroes. Who said that "xiaxia" is dead? I hope there will be more and more articles like this and the road will become wider!

[Roadside stall evaluation circle] [Passenger's Comments] "Hidden Ice" - heroic emotions in troubled times, combined with military skills, is indeed the best! 1. Basic perception History, fairy tales, martial arts, military art, and romance novels are five in one. They are integrated and integrated. They have already far surpassed each separate category. The application of knowledge is as pure as the Golden Liang. This book tells the story of a generation of famous general Zuo Beihou who was brutally wiped out and left behind a posthumous son. His beloved general and his son risked their lives to cross the Changjiang River and survived. A few years later, he traveled to the snow-capped mountains to visit elves, opened his eyes to wisdom, bravely braved Xiaogushan to save his brother, memorized 100,000 Taoist classics, shook the hidden ice ruler in the mountain, revitalized the Cangbei army, attacked Dulang City at night, competed with swords in Meizhou City, the heroine was born, and practiced medicine to save the people... The scenes were magnificent and heart-stirring. 2. Highlights of this book 1. For the first time, I feel disgusted with long paragraphs of text that are not divided into paragraphs. I feel that if I don't write like this, it is not enough to describe the vivid panorama. It turns out that it is not that too many words are not suitable for online articles, but that people who are incompetent should not write too much text, which will only leave a laughing stock. The correct way is to speak meaningfully; 2. The writing flows smoothly and is completed in one go. This has reached the master level. The environment, scenes and characters are lifelike and appear on the paper without any abruptness; 3. Poems and allusions can be picked up at your fingertips, and you probably don't need to look up too much information, let alone Du Niang's help; 4. The characters have distinctive characteristics, whether it is Zhou Qing and Xun Zhou in their childhood, Zhou Yan who regains his glory, the scheming Xianwen of the state government, the chronically ill Xuan Li, the Taoist Chen who sweeps the floor all day long, the dead tree springs up Long Yanyi, the old god who predicts the future, the unknown unknown heroine who is shocking... All of them are impressive; 5. The explanation of Taoist theory is very profound. This is a comprehensive expression. Without skills and experience, it is difficult to understand so deeply; 6. The Wise Eyes have far-reaching meanings. I am very much looking forward to breaking through the first one as soon as possible. What will the fourth Wise Eyes look like? Break into a cold sweat. 3. Overall evaluation Score: [91] (I leave the peak of online literature to 95 and above, and the peak of traditional literature to 90 and above, which may be a bit too precious) Suitable for: (senior) Lao Bai, physical publishing, adaptation of Xianxia TV series It turns out that Qidian also has such works, and I am still worried about whether I can sign the contract, but fortunately, these top works have gradually joined the ranks of online articles; online articles are indeed inclusive, and Big D has broadened the writing form of traditional writers. I hope to boldly write about immortals and heroic heroes. Who said that "xiaxia" is dead? I hope there will be more and more articles like this and the road will become wider! (The level of passers-by is limited, and the comments are purely amateur, based on personal preferences, for reference only)