Prison of Eternal Life

After reading a few chapters, I can only say that the most attractive part is the introduction 😭

It's a bland account, with a preface that doesn't match the subtitles, no logic, and a lot of awkward lines. I couldn't bear it after seeing a few chapters where the word count was too much. Shennong is dead and slipped away.

It's extremely poisonous. It's full of poison points. The equipment skills don't consume or cool down. When you hit someone, your blood will be forcibly deducted. It's a joke. You can still play the protagonist stream. You don't need more than 20 people in a team. All these equipments are so stupid that everyone will kneel down. IQ.

Looking at the introduction collection, I saw that Qianzhang Shu was a first-class author, and I was a little panicked. When I went to the book review area to take a look... I lost the motivation to even take a look.

The data is confusing, the logic is confusing, and there are many poisonous points!

Running account, very boring, junior high school level!

More than 2 million plus more than 1 million is the first level. You can imagine how many options there are.

I just started with 60 gold coins and it takes half a year. I don't care about hundreds or hundreds for a few days. It's hard to explode the bronze skill after a while. After dozens of chapters, I exploded many times. It's inconsistent and logically confusing. I'm persuaded to quit.

After reading some of the previous chapters, I feel that there are still many problems with the structural details of this book. First of all, what kind of water and soil raises what kind of people. In this kind of game where you have to start over once you die, and after years of hard work, the more things a player has, the more careful they must be. The author obviously didn't pay attention to this, and wrote that the players in the game are just like the players in ordinary games, seeking death at every turn. Secondly, the protagonist's character is very annoying, and it's normal to have pursuits. However, the protagonist's brain is always crazy, and he has a strong desire to gamble, and he often goes to extremes. Take for example the plot after the resurrection skill is upgraded to silver. Why do you have to risk offending a powerful guild to catch the leopard? Did the protagonist have any reason to capture the leopard? Shouldn't we prioritize finding other large numbers of elite monsters to raise their skill levels? It can be seen that the reason for this choice is far-fetched. If you want to write about big scenes, you need to have great insights. If you want to write about deep settings, you should have deep emotions. If you want to write about grand backgrounds, you should have grand thinking. The author of this book is clearly deficient in many respects. Of course, this is a common phenomenon in the online literary world, and many authors lack the precision and breadth of their thinking.

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