Super Package

Let me start by saying that as a genuine article, there are many redundant and confusing chapters. This is the first time I have sent a single chapter reminder, but it has become commonplace in the future. Let's talk about the content. Obviously, there are many skills and equipment that seem to be useless at first glance, but in the author's mouth, they are just garbage. There are a lot of masters who use basic attacks when fighting. Basic attacks. Where do you think you are, Saitama? Is this because I'm playing less games? The masters in the game before I retired, like the Red Devil, were really low. They obviously couldn't move forward without the protagonist's breasts. How dare you steal the protagonist's skill book just because of that? Qilin and the two are also mentally retarded. Furthermore, the protagonist obviously has so much money, but he can't even think of buying a skill book. It's too cool. In addition to basic treatment and the two magical skills, the only thing left for hitting people is the passive paralysis of the combat doctor. The ring given by the master was nothing but a piece of cake, which obviously had great potential. The same thing happened to the golden demonic body that I had worked hard for for several months, but I just forgot about it. The combination ability of the package is also used for life and death. Equipment with good skills and above dark gold is expensive, although it is not unaffordable, but buying gold equipment is not a problem, right? Tens of billions of players still can't produce a few broken knives? That broken scalpel has been used for so long and you still haven't replaced it? Do you have to wait for the spy? No matter how bad it is, it would be difficult to use Fatty, a professional businessman, to help collect the goods? And it only took three years to receive a high-level expansion and a supreme expansion. Isn't it too disrespectful to businessmen? If you insist on being rare, is it possible that mid-level and low-level expansions are still unavailable? Moreover, other players have no need for package expansion, and other players will not be able to use it if they expand it. Among professions, only giants can carry weight, but giants rely on professional skills to carry weight and do not need large backpacks. Expansion stones are expensive and cannot be stored. I don't even bother to mention the part where the protagonist is framed, because it just disgusts the readers. It was still nothing at the end. Moreover, Liu Shen is a person with a minimum level of 160. He collapses after taking just a few steps. I didn't think about it and didn't try to enlarge his moves. Moreover, the roots given to the protagonist are so bad, but his own body recovery ability is scumbag. After the protagonist returned, he never saw his master and senior brother. Is this the emphasis on love and righteousness that the protagonist said? The strength of the protagonist is even more incomprehensible. The mission of collecting bee stings in the early stage rewards so many attribute points. There are so many "masters" who have played for two years longer than the protagonist. As a result, the attribute points are still not as good as the protagonist, so forget it. The author clearly stated that there is level suppression. Other games are 2.30 Levels higher, with various misses and high damage reduction, and you can't even hit them while standing. How good is this book, level 50 to level 90 in a second? Doesn't level suppression mean 0.000000001% More damage reduction for every 10 higher levels? There are also players whose strength is erratic. That giant teammate who is over 90 levels has less than 100,000 health, but a deputy island owner has one million health? There is also the aura equipped by the giant that reduces the movement speed by 18%. Not to mention 50 per second, how can a giant dare to drive for a long time? Just say that this 18% movement speed can make the opponent unable to walk? ? ? In the games I've played, if I don't move, it's only noticeable if it's reduced by more than 30%. And this is to reduce movement speed, not to reduce IQ. There was also such a two-stroke seal scroll that I didn't use once to reduce attributes, and then suddenly turned into science fiction. Wouldn't it be great to continue writing about games? Digging so many holes without filling them, and writing the science fiction that I want to write, turns out that science fiction is not as good as this game full of loopholes. I spent hundreds of millions on a broken novice planet, right? The economic system is also confusing. The masters are all NT, and it doesn't matter if the premium is hundreds or thousands of times. Many people are stupid with money, and tens of billions of players are dumbfounded because they can't even meet the needs of the masters. Mingming's main city, golden demon body, Liu Sheng, god-level manufacturer, ghost ship, master's affairs and rings, etc., Etc., There are a lot of things that can be written, but in the end, such a broken science fiction is written? I heard that Xiaoxue's brains were poached later and she was given five wives back, which is even more incredible. Is this the science fiction that has been suppressed for so long? Bullshit, I won't accompany you.

I was so disgusted when I read Chapter 232. I have been reading novels for 6 years, and this is the most disgusting one I have ever read, bar none.

I wanted to read the novel that I wanted to read about the data stream. But the data is not rigorous and the tasks are not clearly explained. It happens all the time that I write 1, then change it to 2, and then change it to 3 again The novel has nothing to do with the game before it is halfway through, and it becomes another novel The switch between this is a direct change of one chapter, all the previous settings are reset. , It's like reading halfway through the author's work and then switching to watching fan creations, which is very uncomfortable After almost 500 chapters, I left the game and abandoned it, and I became the author. I admire those who can finish it

The first part feels okay, but the second part ends too fast and doesn't feel like much. The author probably wants to start a new book.

The protagonist's younger siblings definitely went to a high school that was not an aristocratic academy. How could the grandson of a high-ranking official who was disabled go to the same school as them? Nowadays, no matter how important a high school is, as long as it is not a specialized aristocratic school, it can only be considered an ordinary key school at best. The whole country is being monitored, and it is definitely monitoring ordinary people, and it is impossible for high-ranking officials to be restricted. After all, our country's national conditions determine the development pattern of events. The normal process is: the protagonist's brother is caught, beaten and beaten, and sentenced within 3 days and sent to prison. After half a year, the family members bring money to collect the ashes (even if they die early, they will not be notified immediately). From being arrested to receiving the ashes, the family members cannot see him or her. The defendant cannot see the Tianchai information. So, just feel free to write games. I don't have any social experience, but I always have some game experience. Just write what you understand. If you write what you don't understand, it's all wrong.

What's going on? ! ! ! Even my father can be mistakenly identified as Japanese. It's outrageous to be slandered as a Japanese, only to have no reaction at all, and then run away to recognize his father.

I don't know why, but the more I watch it, the more disgusting I feel.

It doesn't matter how much I abuse the master in the past... It makes me sick when I see someone slandering me as a Japanese... Just give up.

Xiaobai's novels, if you haven't read them, don't read them... Urban novels under the banner of games, fairy tale novels under the banner of science and technology, they are all wrong. Have you ever seen people on a technologically advanced planet bowing to each other and calling each other brother? The person holding a machine gun bomb calls himself Mr. X, Aunt X drives a high-tech spaceship, and Brother Do you still need to summon a pangolin to dig a hole when you are so powerful? The characters are basically named in a fairy-tale style, and the game skills are fairy-like. The characteristic of online game writing is that the game content should try not to involve reality... This little white writing subverts everything. The protagonist is a badass. He is obviously very weak but he pretends to be tough in this world where strength is respected. He gets slapped in the face and loses money and property. He is very despicable and shameless. He bullies the weak and fears the strong. He is just a savage with a low spirit and has never seen the world. He is petty and petty. He will never achieve great things if he fights for every cent. He does not improve his strength honestly and relies on props to rob. The author is really able to keep the plot going without saying that the boss is being hunted for offending him. The values of socialism with Chinese characteristics and the traditional Chinese culture that have been passed down for thousands of years permeate the entire multiverse. It seems awkward no matter how you look at it. There is no tiered combat power system at all. I was confused when I saw it. What a mess of earth and gods. What an eighth-level empire, a ninth-level empire. There is no explanation at all about what each level represents, why the eighth level and the ninth level are like aboriginals, and the aboriginals offend who... The author can't even distinguish between a low level of civilization and aboriginals, a term for aboriginals, and he is drunk.

Trial reading experience: Poison accidentally entered I came here to read it after seeing the recommendation, but after reading dozens of chapters I just couldn't stand it anymore. The character structure is too small, and the psychology is very immature, and they still pretend to be mature. The descriptions of other characters are also too unrealistic, as if they are all mentally retarded. He keeps describing poor families and rich families, but has no idea what the two lives are like. He imagines too much and is completely out of touch with reality. For an online game novel based on reality to a certain extent, it is a failure. After reading other people's book reviews, I can imagine how bad it will be later. After reading dozens of chapters, I don't even understand the background of the game world. The description of reality is also very outrageous. The simplest example is that no idiot would mess with others or make fun of others. If you show discrimination against other people when chasing a girl, no matter what the girl thinks, it will give a discount to this person's impression. For those rich people (non-nouveau riche), the mentality is not as bad as you describe. Even if you take revenge when you are killed in the game, you will only stop there and ignore it, because you think you can make others care about you by killing them once? Friends are not so easy to make. Others don't care about the money. If you want to return it to others, it is more likely that they think you are bored. Instead, it will look childish based on your description of the protagonist's repayment behavior. What do you mean by not taking what you shouldn't take? This is not clear at all. In addition, the college entrance examination is very important, but it is definitely not the only one, whether it is for the poor or the rich. For the rich, the college entrance examination is less important because they have more choices. Taking the college entrance examination as the only one is enough to show how small the protagonist's situation is. And will the second generation go to the same high school as the children of migrant workers? Even if you have never seen the world, after so many years of work, you should understand a lot of things, but you just don't, and instead show a kind of pitiful naivety. In virtual games, another point is not to care about other people's reality. Why are you going to care about others when you have nothing to do? Since there is no description of the purchasing power of money in the book, I will assume a realistic equivalent. Where can I make a down payment of 120,000? What other gaming equipment can you buy for 2,000 yuan now? No matter how rich you are, you won't just give tens of thousands of dollars to others, and money doesn't come from the wind. In short, the book is too childish and cannot bear to be read. It has been poisoned and is extremely poisonous.

Silence is great. The following plot is still unpackaged. I propose to make a more awesome package in the "soul". It will not be dropped after death, regardless of weight, optimization, manufacturing... Some things that can be set in the "promised land" are saved in the sea of ​​​​consciousness of Little Bala, and then opened by an opportunity. Little Bala can also have a body in the game. I hope it will be adopted. Long live Silence! !

What are they all comparing to each other? This is a novel written in 2014. If you look at a 14-year-old novel with the perspective of a 22-year-old novel, will it be good?

The first book I read, Souvenir.

I thought that Shennong, who had been poisoned to death, had mastered the art of abandoning the brain of the walking dead, but I was wrong. This plot was so broken in the early stages. The storyline was like a master from the upper class of kindergarten who suddenly entered the small class of kindergarten. After being praised by the classmates in the small class, it exploded and started to claim that he was the best in history. I deserve to beat you to death because I am a poor man and you are a rich man. I am the number one hater of the rich in the world. This is not an online game, this is a doomsday novel where everything from plot to society to data and finance collapses.

I also think it is extremely poisonous. Is there only one person who knows that Japan has this technology? Are you kidding, Americans can really use it like this for a long time. I feel very poisonous when I see being wronged. The protagonist has always been a waste and has no hidden profession. Moreover, anyone with any brains will not sign an unequal treaty. If I can't do it, I can't negotiate this condition. Anyway, if the smart brain will maintain fairness, why can't we still play? Don't do this if it's really just to create a weakness for the plot, and just apply for a brain check to see if he is Japanese.

Why, the first chapter also introduces the use of "reason" to stabilize right and wrong in the game, which corresponds to the words of teammates, "the strong is respected". . . So, the author's setting is: a real and reasonable game. It is still a game where the strong prevails. Or based on the actual society, whoever is stronger will make the rules. However, no matter how strong the players in the game are, they cannot be stronger than the system, which means that the players have no say. The last two items are not true. . . But the system is set up according to reason. It is wrong for the protagonist's teammates to force him to sacrifice. Why doesn't the system punish him? If you are actively attacked by teammates, the reasonable system will not punish you, so it is different from reality. . . How did the definition of "real game" come about? After all, the word reasonable has been defined by the author as part of reality.

I just exploded on the spot, the protagonist is so stupid. How did you survive until now? . I won't say anything about being written as a Japanese. The country ran away in a hurry without even giving an explanation. I have never seen the reorganization of such bugs. I think it can be at least 10,000 levels. I'm really a drug.

Please tell me how to block this person while sitting

I read the 14-year-old novel in about 17 years, and it was almost the first novel I read. It may have some preconceptions. Even now, I still feel that this is one of the few novels that I think is pretty good. This is the only novel I have read six or seven times. The worst part is the Japanese part. It makes me feel uncomfortable every time I read it. But the way it switches to aliens I think is very well written. I personally like it very much.

I can't stand it anymore after reading more than 400 chapters. 1. The protagonist mistakenly thought he was Japanese, and no one proved it for him until the interstellar chapter. 2. The protagonist offended countless people, and he did not get any benefits. . . If Brother Tianlong hadn't reminded him at the beginning, he would have fought to the end with the two major corps. Later, he still didn't remember Tianlong's words. If he didn't accept it, he would do it. He destroyed the base and was "banned" for three years. 3. The team that offended him in the first place seems to have never taken revenge, and the matter has just passed. Summary: As mentioned in the introduction, he is a really hard-working protagonist🌚. He talks a lot, but none of his ideals have been realized. The legion belongs to his friend and has nothing to do with him. The base is gone (I don't know if it will be taken back in the future), and the Sea Emperor cannot become a God-level manufacturer. Only by sealing himself can he avoid the penalty of account deletion. This is even more frustrating than a son-in-law article 😡

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I can't stand it anymore after reading about 40 chapters. Let's talk about a small problem first. 1. A mercenary group (Bikong) invested by a consortium invites an individual. If you don't join, you will offend me, the Blue Sky mercenary group, and wait for death! I was speechless at the time. Is that mercenary group so hateful? 2. A wife with a net worth of 500 or 500 billion is no different from a shrew described in the article (she yelled at the door of the public security bureau, and even shouted for revenge on the protagonist in public). Let's talk about a big problem: the article said that a silver scalpel requires level 5 equipment, but it turns out that the protagonist can still equip it after he dies and reaches level 4. Well, this It's not very obvious. Let's say that the general gold-level sniper rifle requires 50 strength and 30 agility. Let's not mention that the sniper rifle does not require any physical strength. Let's just say that the 300 attribute points obtained by the protagonist from an A-level transport mission have not been added at all. Then, the combat medic definitely does not have 50 strength (when the protagonist is level 9), and the protagonist is equipped with it. I don't know if the author doesn't know how to count or something.

The biggest poisonous point of this novel is that the protagonist turns Japanese inexplicably. Xiao Baiwen is not happy and abuses the protagonist all day long. It is so disgusting.

I skimmed through it briefly and made a brief comment. The author started from games and wrote about science fiction interstellar. From science fiction to games, and finally to fantasy. The mind and imagination are not small. First, there are a lot of typos. This is the starting point, not a pirated novel. Secondly, the plot logic is unclear, the twists are abrupt, and it also contains unrealistic fantasies. Thirdly, I found this novel for free using my membership. If members receive free recommendations of this quality, I believe it is not far from bankruptcy. To put it harshly, I hope the author can survive. If you like reading, you must have a good literary quality. You shouldn't have the minimum logical thinking and the minimum typos, right? It's better to improve your literary literacy, read more about other people's plot designs, and see more about the way of thinking of great masters. If you don't know how to study, don't waste your time.

A cool article is a cool article, write a cool article well, there must be something wrong with it, 340 abandoned it, the more I read it, the more disgusting it becomes.

As far as high school is concerned, this book was considered relatively good at the time, but of course it cannot keep up with it now. The early setting was particularly good, but in the later stage it was true, it was a bit broken and could not come back to its full circle.

I miss it very much. I read it in the second grade of junior high school. Now that I have graduated from high school, I suddenly remembered that I didn't expect to find this book. It was very good in the early stage. However, in the later stage, the two heroines were a bit uncomfortable. Of course, this is also my personal opinion. In the end, I was very happy to find this book again.

The part where I became Japanese was so disgusting that I opened the door to disgust. It was so disgusting. The protagonist neither argues nor refutes. He just accepted it. Later he even visited the grave of his Japanese pretend father. The author's solution turned out to be to change the map. Direct universe chapter. It's even bigger.

The book only has five chapters. Why? Because I can't stand it anymore. I wrote it for children, right?

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