Super Package

The protagonist's younger siblings definitely went to a high school that was not an aristocratic academy. How could the grandson of a high-ranking official who was disabled go to the same school as them? Nowadays, no matter how important a high school is, as long as it is not a specialized aristocratic school, it can only be considered an ordinary key school at best. The whole country is being monitored, and it is definitely monitoring ordinary people, and it is impossible for high-ranking officials to be restricted. After all, our country's national conditions determine the development pattern of events. The normal process is: the protagonist's brother is caught, beaten and beaten, and sentenced within 3 days and sent to prison. After half a year, the family members bring money to collect the ashes (even if they die early, they will not be notified immediately). From being arrested to receiving the ashes, the family members cannot see him or her. The defendant cannot see the Tianchai information. So, just feel free to write games. I don't have any social experience, but I always have some game experience. Just write what you understand. If you write what you don't understand, it's all wrong.

What's going on?!!! Even my father can be mistakenly identified as Japanese. It's outrageous to be slandered as a Japanese, only to have no reaction at all, and then run away to recognize his father.

I don't know why, but the more I watch it, the more disgusting I feel.

It doesn't matter how much I abuse the master in the past... It makes me sick when I see someone slandering me as a Japanese... Just give up.

Let me start by saying that as a genuine article, there are many redundant and confusing chapters. This is the first time I have sent a single chapter reminder, but it has become commonplace in the future. Let's talk about the content. Obviously, there are many skills and equipment that seem to be useless at first glance, but in the author's mouth, they are just garbage. There are a lot of masters who use basic attacks when fighting. Basic attacks. Where do you think you are, Saitama? Is this because I'm playing less games? The masters in the game before I retired, like the Red Devil, were really low. They obviously couldn't move forward without the protagonist's breasts. How dare you steal the protagonist's skill book just because of that? Qilin and the two are also mentally retarded. Furthermore, the protagonist obviously has so much money, but he can't even think of buying a skill book. It's too cool. In addition to basic treatment and the two magical skills, the only thing left for hitting people is the passive paralysis of the combat doctor. The ring given by the master was nothing but a piece of cake, which obviously had great potential. The same thing happened to the golden demonic body that I had worked hard for for several months, but I just forgot about it. The combination ability of the package is also used for life and death. Equipment with good skills and above dark gold is expensive, although it is not unaffordable, but buying gold equipment is not a problem, right? Tens of billions of players still can't produce a few broken knives? That broken scalpel has been used for so long and you still haven't replaced it? Do you have to wait for the spy? No matter how bad it is, it would be difficult to use Fatty, a professional businessman, to help collect the goods? And it only took three years to receive a high-level expansion and a supreme expansion. Isn't it too disrespectful to businessmen? If you insist on being rare, is it possible that mid-level and low-level expansions are still unavailable? Moreover, other players have no need for package expansion, and other players will not be able to use it if they expand it. Among professions, only giants can carry weight, but giants rely on professional skills to carry weight and do not need large backpacks. Expansion stones are expensive and cannot be stored. I don't even bother to mention the part where the protagonist is framed, because it just disgusts the readers. It was still nothing at the end. Moreover, Liu Shen is a person with a minimum level of 160. He collapses after taking just a few steps. I didn't think about it and didn't try to enlarge his moves. Moreover, the roots given to the protagonist are so bad, but his own body recovery ability is scumbag. After the protagonist returned, he never saw his master and senior brother. Is this the emphasis on love and righteousness that the protagonist said? The strength of the protagonist is even more incomprehensible. The mission of collecting bee stings in the early stage rewards so many attribute points. There are so many "masters" who have played for two years longer than the protagonist. As a result, the attribute points are still not as good as the protagonist, so forget it. The author clearly stated that there is level suppression. Other games are 2.30 Levels higher, with various misses and high damage reduction, and you can't even hit them while standing. How good is this book, level 50 to level 90 in a second? Doesn't level suppression mean 0.000000001% More damage reduction for every 10 higher levels? There are also players whose strength is erratic. That giant teammate who is over 90 levels has less than 100,000 health, but a deputy island owner has one million health? There is also the aura equipped by the giant that reduces the movement speed by 18%. Not to mention 50 per second, how can a giant dare to drive for a long time? Just say that this 18% movement speed can make the opponent unable to walk??? In the games I've played, if I don't move, it's only noticeable if it's reduced by more than 30%. And this is to reduce movement speed, not to reduce IQ. There was also such a two-stroke seal scroll that I didn't use once to reduce attributes, and then suddenly turned into science fiction. Wouldn't it be great to continue writing about games? Digging so many holes without filling them, and writing the science fiction that I want to write, turns out that science fiction is not as good as this game full of loopholes. I spent hundreds of millions on a broken novice planet, right? The economic system is also confusing. The masters are all NT, and it doesn't matter if the premium is hundreds or thousands of times. Many people are stupid with money, and tens of billions of players are dumbfounded because they can't even meet the needs of the masters. Mingming's main city, golden demon body, Liu Sheng, god-level manufacturer, ghost ship, master's affairs and rings, etc., Etc., There are a lot of things that can be written, but in the end, such a broken science fiction is written? I heard that Xiaoxue's brains were poached later and she was given five wives back, which is even more incredible. Is this the science fiction that has been suppressed for so long? Bullshit, I won't accompany you.

Xiaobai's novels, if you haven't read them, don't read them... Urban novels under the banner of games, fairy tale novels under the banner of science and technology, they are all wrong. Have you ever seen people on a technologically advanced planet bowing to each other and calling each other brother? The person holding a machine gun bomb calls himself Mr. X, Aunt X drives a high-tech spaceship, and Brother Do you still need to summon a pangolin to dig a hole when you are so powerful? The characters are basically named in a fairy-tale style, and the game skills are fairy-like. The characteristic of online game writing is that the game content should try not to involve reality... This little white writing subverts everything. The protagonist is a badass. He is obviously very weak but he pretends to be tough in this world where strength is respected. He gets slapped in the face and loses money and property. He is very despicable and shameless. He bullies the weak and fears the strong. He is just a savage with a low spirit and has never seen the world. He is petty and petty. He will never achieve great things if he fights for every cent. He does not improve his strength honestly and relies on props to rob. The author is really able to keep the plot going without saying that the boss is being hunted for offending him. The values of socialism with Chinese characteristics and the traditional Chinese culture that have been passed down for thousands of years permeate the entire multiverse. It seems awkward no matter how you look at it. There is no tiered combat power system at all. I was confused when I saw it. What a mess of earth and gods. What an eighth-level empire, a ninth-level empire. There is no explanation at all about what each level represents, why the eighth level and the ninth level are like aboriginals, and the aboriginals offend who... The author can't even distinguish between a low level of civilization and aboriginals, a term for aboriginals, and he is drunk.

What are they all comparing to each other? This is a novel written in 2014. If you look at a 14-year-old novel with the perspective of a 22-year-old novel, will it be good?

Trial reading experience: Poison accidentally entered I came here to read it after seeing the recommendation, but after reading dozens of chapters I just couldn't stand it anymore. The character structure is too small, and the psychology is very immature, and they still pretend to be mature. The descriptions of other characters are also too unrealistic, as if they are all mentally retarded. He keeps describing poor families and rich families, but has no idea what the two lives are like. He imagines too much and is completely out of touch with reality. For an online game novel based on reality to a certain extent, it is a failure. After reading other people's book reviews, I can imagine how bad it will be later. After reading dozens of chapters, I don't even understand the background of the game world. The description of reality is also very outrageous. The simplest example is that no idiot would mess with others or make fun of others. If you show discrimination against other people when chasing a girl, no matter what the girl thinks, it will give a discount to this person's impression. For those rich people (non-nouveau riche), the mentality is not as bad as you describe. Even if you take revenge when you are killed in the game, you will only stop there and ignore it, because you think you can make others care about you by killing them once? Friends are not so easy to make. Others don't care about the money. If you want to return it to others, it is more likely that they think you are bored. Instead, it will look childish based on your description of the protagonist's repayment behavior. What do you mean by not taking what you shouldn't take? This is not clear at all. In addition, the college entrance examination is very important, but it is definitely not the only one, whether it is for the poor or the rich. For the rich, the college entrance examination is less important because they have more choices. Taking the college entrance examination as the only one is enough to show how small the protagonist's situation is. And will the second generation go to the same high school as the children of migrant workers? Even if you have never seen the world, after so many years of work, you should understand a lot of things, but you just don't, and instead show a kind of pitiful naivety. In virtual games, another point is not to care about other people's reality. Why are you going to care about others when you have nothing to do? Since there is no description of the purchasing power of money in the book, I will assume a realistic equivalent. Where can I make a down payment of 120,000? What other gaming equipment can you buy for 2,000 yuan now? No matter how rich you are, you won't just give tens of thousands of dollars to others, and money doesn't come from the wind. In short, the book is too childish and cannot bear to be read. It has been poisoned and is extremely poisonous.

The first book I read, Souvenir.

Silence is great. The following plot is still unpackaged. I propose to make a more awesome package in the "soul". It will not be dropped after death, regardless of weight, optimization, manufacturing... Some things that can be set in the "promised land" are saved in the sea of ​​​​consciousness of Little Bala, and then opened by an opportunity. Little Bala can also have a body in the game. I hope it will be adopted. Long live Silence!!