Pure Yang, the Sword Immortal

Chapter fifty-seven made me laugh. A ray of golden immortal consciousness can destroy a star field from its origin? What about the golden immortal who blew himself up? Just the luck of moving the Donghuang Bell is not as good as the luck of saving a star field? Can you still practice if your merit and luck are negative? Even if you want to suppress the protagonist, you have to think of a reasonable reason, and a scumbag who doesn't even have a golden elixir can refine a magic storage weapon? Is refining a weapon so simple? Can ordinary fire refine divine gold? So many runes don't need to consume your mind? Millions of runes were drawn just like that? The settings are so broken

The creativity of this book is okay, but the writing style is a bit poor. After reading twenty chapters, I felt that the details were inappropriate and the reading felt very messy. For example, after the protagonist casts the Daoji, the scene where a bunch of people fight over the treasures feels messy. A bunch of people talked one by one for a long time, and after a while This character comes and goes, there is no priority at all, and there are too many descriptions of the scenery in the back, and the use of meaningless gorgeous words, a lot of elaboration, makes me feel like I am watching the Dream of Red Mansions. What clothes the characters wear, how luxurious their food and clothing are, it gives me a headache.

All Taoist ancestors call each other by their first names, talk about the secrets of heaven and earth (known through time travel) casually, talk to yourself casually if you have secrets on your mind, it's too poisonous

To know the level of Dao Ancestor, if you talk about it, others will know your existence, and if you talk about secrets casually, you will be speechless.

Half of the first hundred chapters are various explanations and background information, which have nothing to do with the main plot, and are inserted in the main plot chapters. Some people finish the previous chapter and suddenly the next one is the background explanation, which has nothing to do with the main plot before. Zhang Jie does not follow the plot at all, and jumps while watching it. It is quite a test of people's patience.

This is writing a novel with a microscope. It doesn't take several chapters to check the meridians like a war.

Damn it, I looked at him changing from a human to a demon, and he was still giggling. It's hard to tell the difference between dialogue and inner description. A bunch of legends are written after just two sentences. It feels like reading a history book. A little ant is plotted by a saint, or a dancing coquettish is involved with an ancient power.

The writing is on the novice side, so you can read it when you're short on books, but the most important thing is that the ending is a bit of a bummer. It feels like it's an emergency ending, and the setting is pretty good.

It's fairy-like, the creativity is pretty good, and the plot is a little messy. It's much better than those where you fight and kill all day long, but the writing is broken at the end. Come on for the next book!

The creativity of this book is good, but there are too many dramas in some places, and it lacks the charm of classical fairy tales, making it a bit unreadable.