Pure Yang, the Sword Immortal

Chapter 57 made me laugh. A wisp of a Golden Immortal's divine consciousness self-destructing can destroy a star field? What about a Golden Immortal self-destructing? The luck used to move the Eastern Emperor Bell is less than the merit luck of saving a star field? And negative merit luck allows cultivation? If you're going to suppress the protagonist, at least come up with a plausible reason.

The book's concept is decent, but the writing is lacking. After reading twenty chapters, I felt the pacing was off, making it quite disorganized. For example, the scene where a bunch of people fight over a treasure after the protagonist establishes his foundation felt chaotic. A bunch of characters talked for ages, switching between them without any focus.

The Dao Ancestors address each other by name, revealing all the secrets of heaven and earth (known through time travel), and freely sharing their innermost thoughts and secrets with others—it's all too venomous.

You should know that at the Dao Ancestor level, simply mentioning someone will make them aware of your existence, let alone casually revealing secrets.

Half of the first hundred chapters are filled with explanations and background information, which have little to do with the main plot. Moreover, they're inserted into the main storyline chapters, so sometimes you finish one chapter and the next is suddenly a background exposition, completely unrelated to the current plot. Zhang Jie doesn't seem to follow the story at all; it's easy to skip ahead, which really tests your patience.

This is like writing a novel with a microscope; even something as simple as opening a meridian is described as a battle, and it wouldn't take several chapters.

Damn, as I watched, it turned from a human into a demon, and it kept babbling on and on. The dialogue and inner monologues were indistinguishable. It would say a few sentences and then spout a bunch of legends. It felt like reading a history book. A tiny ant was tricked by a sage, and a flea was involved with an ancient power.

The writing style is rather amateurish, so it's okay to read when you're looking for something to read, but the main problem is that the ending feels like a cliffhanger, even though the premise is pretty good.

It has a fantasy feel to it, and the concept is quite good. The plot is a bit messy, but it's much better than those books that are all about fighting and killing. It just falls apart towards the end. Good luck with your next book!

The book has a good concept, but there are too many jarring parts that detract from the classic fantasy genre, making it somewhat difficult to read.