Honghuang: Starting from Mount Putuo

What are you writing about? The measurement units used in ancient times were feet, days, years, and months. . . Are you afraid that you are not writing about sewers? ? ? ?

After stepping on all the pitfalls he could, Da Luo went to become a teacher of his own generation, and then played the clone style, ugh

I haven't read them all, but only the first half. There's nothing bad about it, but it's not exciting either. Overall, it's just too bland, with training, apprenticeship, travel, adventure, and then training again. The content is too homogeneous. In less than forty chapters, how many times have you traveled? But the process was very general. As I walked, I found a treasure, but it was gone. The only twist and turn was the treasure hunt, but it was only a few strokes. In my opinion: the protagonist is set to be Cihang who travels back through time, which is considered a failure. What does Cihang say? The force level is very high, but not high enough. Especially when you want to become an apprentice, it is too restrictive. First of all, as a chess player, the protagonist is not strong enough, but as a chess piece, the protagonist is too strong. The strength of the quasi-sage is considered to be the first echelon under the saint. Those who are not strong enough do not dare to provoke the protagonist, and those who are strong enough do not dare to provoke the protagonist (Sanqing's talk comes as he says). In this case, the conventional murder and treasure grabbing project cannot be carried out at all, so I can't write anything after traveling many times. The identity of the key protagonist is still here, and if he can't do anything worthless, the conflict incidents will be reduced by half. For example, you have to set the qi of yin and yang and the five elements to have no spiritual wisdom. In addition, the timeline is also very awkward. In order to improve the protagonist's heel, the chapter starts too early. Combined with the above content, it will enter a strange state - the main plot is advancing and the protagonist's realm is also improving, but the protagonist is hidden. To put it simply, the story has no new ideas and no content. I have three suggestions for the author's reference. First, let Kunpeng or Styx appear, or simply find some villains. In short, the strength should not be too weak, and it must conflict with the protagonist. It doesn't matter about spiritual treasures, spiritual roots, opportunities, etc. The key is to have conflicts, to have fun, and to promote the plot in a bland way. After writing it, some people will watch it, but no one will follow it. Second, let the avatars of Yin Yang and Five Elements appear. You can intervene in the Lich War, you can also travel to the ancient times, and it doesn't matter if you go to the West. To be honest, this pit is really good and should be used earlier. The longer you delay the protagonist, the stronger it becomes and the more useless it becomes. Third, push the timeline directly and enter the main line of Xuanmen development. The protagonist cannot be idle all the time, as this will only wear down the readers' patience

I have no desire to read this introduction.

I have no confidence in this book. It is difficult to write "Honghuangliu".

This is the third book that is exactly the same. Is it the same author who has republished it under a different name? Don't you realize that the biggest poisonous point is the rebirth of the natives? It would be better to travel through another time than to be reborn as a native.

At this point, I would like to summarize Cihang's current status for book friends who are following the update: His cultivation has reached the quasi-sage level, and his true body is a willow tree with pure innate spiritual roots. In terms of magical treasures, the top-grade twelfth-grade pure white lotus and glazed jade purifying bottle are in the array, and the supreme treasure of acquired merits and virtues, the Hongmeng Heavenly Ruler, is in hand. In addition, the Tai Chi talisman, the hollow willow branch, the innate five-element spiritual beads and other top-grade innate spiritual treasures are also in place, and there are a few medium and low-grade spiritual treasures and spiritual roots. The disciples have now taken in Xuangui. In terms of identity, Cihang is a disciple of Chan Sect, the great disciple of Yuanshi Tianzun, and the first disciple of Sanqing. Thank you book friends for your support during this period. We will continue to update it steadily in the future. See you in the main text. PS: The above is all information that has appeared in the updated chapters. There are no spoilers, so read with confidence.

In the future, it will take hundreds or thousands of years to create people and become saints. This is too low-end.

If you come here for no cp, it's best not to be ambiguous...

In fact, in the first battle of the Conferred Gods, Cihang was already destroyed by the Five Qi and Three Flowers. After reincarnation, he will be the Great Merciful and Compassionate Bodhisattva. After reincarnation, he is actually no longer the same person.

I just read the first few chapters, but didn't get into it. Personally, I prefer to start at a young age. This starting point is a bit high, and I've reached Rome at the beginning.

It's quite good. It's not so hateful and painful to read, and each character, such as Ran Deng, needs to change well, unlike other facial expressions.

As the title suggests, the protagonist Cihang still apprentices himself to a teacher. If you don't like this setting, you can just turn it on without clicking it. Stop cursing after clicking on it. Thank you for your understanding! 🌹🌹🌹

It's better to divide it into paragraphs. There are so many words piled together that I have no desire to read them.

I'm not very optimistic about Honghuang, because the requirements for good writing and character description are too high. If you can't write the style of a mythical character, the prehistoric times will be just a mess. The Lord of the World is written in the style of a mythical character, and the other 99% of the ancient world is written in the style of high martial arts and fantasy. If you can't write in the style of a mythical character, then writing about prehistoric times is just like rushing into the streets.

There used to be a book called Rebirth of Cihang Pudu

The poor Kong twins are just gone.

Author, your protagonist, if the plot is not changed, is destined to join Buddhism in the future, but it is better not to add Buddhism, so I have an idea here. Based on the development in the prehistoric novels and real-life mythology, the Western religion in the prehistoric novels is Buddhism, and Buddhism will eventually be squeezed out by Hinduism and driven out of India. In other words, Hinduism is the Western version of the answer. Is there no way to make a plan now? After all, Hinduism is the father of Buddhism🤓🤓🤓

The top Daluo Jinxian transformed into a disciple, and then went to become a disciple. The upgrade pace should be very fast, a bit like Shuangwen? I haven't read much yet. I just read the first few chapters. If you are really short of books, you can collect it and read it. If you can't stand the small flaws from time to time, I don't recommend it.