Swords, Magic, and Taxis

I was chatting with the goddess today and had a great time. Suddenly I said: Goddess, be my girlfriend. I can give you everything I have. I will do my best to achieve what you want. The goddess was stunned for a moment, and after about two minutes, she replied: "lZ—np—un6?" If you understand, you will understand what I mean. I thought hard, but I have no idea. Please ask the gods for help! What does this mean? ?

The beginning of the episode was so addicting to me. The protagonist sells salt filtering technology for money, and even thinks of selling a copy in a place. Do you really think others are stupid? You can't even filter that cloth? Are all aliens chimpanzees? Even if it's a chimpanzee, after the protagonist sells his first piece of technology, others will come to buy his piece of technology. Why won't he buy it with others?

If you don't know how to write emotional scenes, just write less. You have so many heroines, Dogian is positioned as the maid queen, Xiaohua is positioned as the cute show, Wonder Woman is positioned as the queen again and Duojian, Satiri seems to be Dogian and Barbara, a tool for giving birth, and there is not much plot but you insist on carrying it. Is it better to have one more person to reduce the number of words? Xiaohua has a lot of plots in the mid-term. When Satiri joins the team, Xiaohua becomes a background. If you can't control a team with so many people, don't write so much. And if you want the male protagonist to have a harem, don't build a loyalty memorial for him. You didn't think much about it when you decided to do it. When you rejected Barbara and opposed the marriage with Diana, you used the loyalty memorial to block it. This makes people feel really bad. The writing in other places is quite good. Several worlds have a sense of being immersed in the original work, and the characters are relatively restored. However, the emotional drama of the male protagonist is too outrageous. If you want a harem, you have to separate everyone's position, and don't build a memorial for the male protagonist.

Seeing the friendship between Zhao Mai and Logan, I suddenly had an interesting guess Could Zhao Mai be Professor X? 1. Because Professor X is bald, our Dragon Emperor is also bald 2. All have psychic powers 3. The relationship with Logan One day in the future, maybe something went wrong with Zhao Mai's leg when he was transforming into a transcendent. While he was recuperating, it would be quite reasonable to set up a school to teach the little mutants : D

This novel is quite torturous. I can't say it's good, but I can't say it's bad. It's rare for a book like this to make me so entangled in reading it, and it makes it difficult for me to write a book review. For this book, if you only look at its outstanding aspects, you will definitely think that it is a fairy tale and a masterpiece. But if you only look at its bad aspects, you will definitely label it as a noob and a canard. Therefore, it is really difficult to make an evaluation. In order to make it easier for everyone to choose, Brother Jiu decided to select a few shortcomings of this book for you to look at. If you are not deterred by these shortcomings, then congratulations, you don't have to worry about the book shortage problem these days. The main shortcoming of this book is that the author does not handle the details properly, and there are many things that are inconsistent with reality. For example, at the beginning of this book, the author explains that the protagonist's identity and background is that he is an online writer and part-time Didi driver, he has a special ability of mental arithmetic and counting seconds, and his family background is that his father has kidney failure and needs money for treatment. I'm not nitpicking this, the author's handling here is really not good enough. Since the protagonist has the special ability to mentally calculate the countdown without any errors, why not write Mao Internet articles, drive a car, accept various entertainment announcements, and then make a name for himself, and be the spokesperson for a village enterprise? In our reality, regarding this ability, Lao Jiu and I have watched this show on TV more than once. It is very profitable, and normal people can imagine it. After going around all the big and small TV stations, it is easy to get 1.8 Million. With such money, let alone the main character's father suffering from kidney failure, even heart failure can be treated. Of course, this is not over yet. The protagonist drove an old man in a taxi one day. The old man felt that he was destined to him. After knowing the protagonist's predicament, he decided to help the protagonist. Then he gave the protagonist a destiny gold coin and told the protagonist that from now on, he would be a taxi driver who could travel through time and space. The fare collected from passengers was the destiny gold coin. Then, the protagonist drove through time and space. I think there are two things that are unreasonable here. First, the attitude of the protagonist is too calm. It is impossible for normal people to be so calm. Could it be that our identity as Internet article writers is just for this purpose? We look down upon our Internet article circle too much. If people in this circle had such a calm and calm temperament, they would have become rich and prosperous long ago, and they would still write Internet articles. In addition, the author's eldest brother, the protagonist's father, is in urgent need of money. Why does the old man's way of helping the protagonist have such a big brain circuit? He is sent directly to another time and space, so that the protagonist cannot find a home, and then leaves his father to fend for himself. Also, the protagonist works so hard to earn money to save his father. He should be a filial person. Then, after traveling through time and space, why does he never mention his poor father again? He is happy every day, no matter what. Your father has kidney failure and will not die in a while. At least think of a way. How about it being simple? Since dad's illness is just an identity setting, then be more generous and get a kidney AI, a stomach AI or something like that. Wouldn't that save you a lot of worry? Also, after the protagonist travels through time and space, he is in danger in the jungle and holds up a tire as a shield with one hand. Forgive me for spitting out a mouthful of blood. It is a tire. It weighs dozens of kilograms. Brother Jiu is in pretty good shape. I am out of breath after walking a hundred meters with a tire. I don't know if using it as a shield will increase the defense. However, as long as the opponent has brains and patience, you will definitely be exhausted first. It can be said that this book has many large and small ones like this. Although it is not a big problem, the details are not handled well enough, which affects the readers' sense of reading. In short, in addition to the detail processing that I have given above, this book is really good in terms of creativity, plot, characters, etc., Especially the early A Song of Ice and Fire and The Lord of the Rings are written to a very high standard. So, now the question is, can you accept this kind of detail processing? ----Recommended by the public account "The Thirty-six Stratagems of the Great Book Desolation" The Book Desolation Comes to Us!!!

I lost my temper when I saw what I said after picking up the second customer Brother, it's normal for you to be rude and careless. What kind of mentality do you have? You are a taxi driver and you just take the customers wherever they go and collect the money. You are bragging and gossiping. What kind of life mentor are you?

Seeing that he was holding back until the end, he wanted to fight against the devil, but he wanted to fight or kill him at will. After gaining strength, he would kill the sand pirates as a game, and he would not fight back if he did not fight. Have you ever thought about what kind of protagonist you want to create? This is time travel, not a game!

I was confused when I saw the name of the protagonist. He has the same name as me. Sorry, sorry, I don't dare to look, I don't dare to look. If I get too involved, I'll be doomed.

A trash like the protagonist is worthy of being a druid. He is a loser with an excessive sense of superiority.

The first part is very good, but the second part is a mess... And the main character is always a virgin, and some of the supporting characters are so disgusting that I feel like vomiting, and I can't stand it anymore.