The Dream of Aviation

It is recommended not to write urban novels, but to write in the direction of business war, entrepreneurship, and large industry. Do not write about personal grudges, personal nouveau riche enjoyment, etc., And reduce unnecessary chat conversations and emotional disputes. Don't write about conflicts with people when going out to eat, etc., As they will be ruined on the street. Since the author has certain technical skills, he writes along the technical path and the aviation industry. Scenarios such as making a fortune by selling diamonds, buying a villa, and picking up girls have greatly damaged the overall structure of the book, and the content and plot are also in a mess. If the author has time, he can go back and delete or simplify these. Nowadays, urban life is easy to write about but difficult to write excitingly. Anyone who writes about it will be rejected. On the contrary, those writing about entrepreneurial technology can easily attract readers.

I stopped reading after reading a few chapters. It was about the protagonist who went to a wealthy community where he accidentally met, and then the rich man kicked the security guard. I don't know if the author has a wrong understanding of rich and powerful people. Probably because of the environment I live in, my classmates include many second-generation officials (above the main hall) and second-generation rich (above one billion). They and their parents are polite, and the more they treat the lower class, the more amiable they are. If it is this kind of community security guard, then he has a very good attitude. Because although these people are inconspicuous, they can sometimes cause serious problems for them. Those who are truly hierarchical, rich and powerful are not the ones who care about everything and bully the weak as you imagine! What you wrote proves that your layout is too small and your vision is too narrow. The protagonist's final achievement can only be your pure obscenity, and the peasants think about the emperor hoeing the ground with a golden hoe. There must be a lot of logic errors and trial and error! Moreover, my education level is too high and my knowledge is a bit broad. I will definitely be disgusted when I see these mistakes, so I give up the trap as soon as possible.

Let alone the two heroines, can they still coexist peacefully? Got married without noticing? I've missed it all! And when it comes to making engines, I really don't understand. I just don't think there's a wind tunnel. How did you measure so many of your data? Do you remember every data after rebirth? Are there any supercomputers? How do you calculate the amount of data? Abacus or manual work? Could it be that it was made by trying the materials over and over again?

Military factories are not suitable for urban routines. They have very strict systems. If an employee suddenly has a large sum of money and a luxury car, do you think the country will investigate? Will you say it or not? If you tell me, it's a fraud. If you don't tell me, where did the diamond come from? This is a very real problem! It would have been better if Director Huang had planned it from the beginning and kicked the pig's feet away!

I've read this book before, but I couldn't stand it anymore when I saw that pig's feet were going out to rent factories and make money. I won't talk about the unreasonable things at the beginning, but I decided to set what I wanted to do to make money and then develop an aviation empire. The pig's feet are planning to rebel. The aviation industry in that country is purely private and only focuses on personal development. Readers should think that they are all fools. Can you buy advanced equipment privately and recruit advanced talents? The other one is that you work and open a company at the same time, and become the breadwinner of the National Security Bureau. You can go in in a minute. Even if there are no problems, it is unclear how to use national technology to make money. If the national military factory is like the author's setting, the country cannot have secrets at all. I can tell the intelligence after get off work. Who can guard against it, unless each staff member is assigned a National Security Bureau.

I transferred from an industrial owner, and this aviation book has many poor logics, such as drinking and working in military factories. The most important thing is that pig trotters can rent factories outside and sell bricks and stones for more than 10 million. As a powerful figure in a military factory, it cannot be said that being specially investigated by relevant departments will at least attract a lot of attention! So if this money suddenly comes out, it can be considered a crime such as treason!

You can touch fighter planes and many things in the aviation industry. There are too many unreasonable things to explain one by one. They also have a harem. I found that many people who write novels can't write without a harem or messy things.

After reading the introduction, I lost interest in reading it. Do you want to build your own aero engine? I wonder if the author had some basic information before writing the book. Not to mention other things, just manufacturing an aero engine of a mainstream third-generation aircraft verification model. If you don't gather all the world's first-class machining machinery, you will not be able to produce it, let alone material research and development. Aviation engines are not only hundreds of times more difficult but also dozens of times more difficult than launch vehicle engines. Among the developed countries with incomplete industries in the world, if you look at anyone who can manufacture modern aero engines, let alone an individual, even if they give you a ready-made design, you will be confused. How else to call it the crown jewel of industry? It is the highest achievement in human industry.

In fact, the writing style is very good, and the subject matter is also my favorite type. The problem is that some childish operations cannot be ignored, unless you voluntarily reduce your intelligence. How can a mortal become an idiot again? Han Yione

This book is too loose, and the security department can also come out and do external processing.