My Journey at the End of the Ming Dynasty
我的明末之旅
- Status
- Completed
- Length
- 761k Words
- Genre
- Historical
- Subgenre
- Song-Yuan-Ming Dynasties
- Updated
- 10y ago
- English
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254Chapters
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This is so unreasonable! The steam engine just appeared out of nowhere, without any industrial foundation whatsoever!
Don't make me laugh. Even if I gave you a factory, would you be able to build a loom? And a steam engine? That's ridiculous. It's a limitation of the times. It's like Iron Man's father knew how to make reactors and new elements, but he couldn't actually build them. Compared to his father, Iron Man was just an apprentice.
Applying modern thinking to ancient times would be suicide.
The author's novel outline is good, but Chen Yuanyuan and the Donglin Party are somewhat disliked. You could have used subtle writing techniques to include more schools providing talent (government officials and military officers). Few members of the Donglin Party at the end of the Ming Dynasty were good people either, so don't select officials from the Donglin Party.
One chapter is about a cripple who immediately establishes himself as a top scientist, yet behaves like a loser.
It's not badly written, but there are many illogical parts. Keep it up! 😄
However, there are many illogical elements. For example, the protagonist is supposedly able to design and improve steam engines, and even design guns. If he were truly that capable, why didn't he just design internal combustion engines? He also knows how to build steam trains. The story involves alloy materials, but none of this is mentioned.
WhatThe effective range of a rifle during World War I was 400a 600meters u>, the effective range of the Mauser rifle is 800 meters! Did the author check military historical information?
The protagonist is such an idiot, couldn't he have found a bigger island to hide his troops?! Doesn't he know about assembly lines? Are flintlock rifles made of tungsten, manganese, and chromium alloy steel? Or is he a mechanical engineer?
I recommend a good book called "The Road to Hegemony at the End of the Qin Dynasty". Those who like books about the Qin Dynasty should check it out.