From the Start in Industry

The description is really discouraging! Step 1: If you don't have start-up capital, hire some kids to run errands, and then hire others to do other things. You'll have start-up capital soon. Step Two: Once you have the start-up capital, immediately open a brokerage or sales company. Regardless of whether you close a deal or not, provide a base salary plus all the benefits.

The protagonist's rebirth and system already make him invincible. The "tenfold return" trope is unappealing in a commercial context. The story is already overpowered; adding tenfold returns is excessive and doesn't fit the realistic setting of a business, especially the kind that involves salary rebates.

Judging from the author's over ten years of writing experience, the plot is indeed too exaggerated. It's somewhat plausible to offer higher salaries to manual laborers and skilled workers, but a HR person couldn't possibly earn 30k unless it's a very large company. If a startup offers such high salaries, what will happen as the company grows? The source of funding becomes difficult to explain.

It's too tedious; the story is exactly the same for every new technology that comes out: outsiders question it, subordinates are shocked, and then it's a slap in the face after successful development.

This is another example of a story where you don't want to read it after just reading the synopsis. This plot twist is so extreme that all real-world development, business acumen, and strategic thinking become meaningless. Even in a novel, it's too exaggerated. I can't understand how anyone could possibly relate to it.

To be honest, it has no world-building background, it's pure wish-fulfillment fiction, but there's absolutely no enjoyment in it. It's completely illogical.

I've recently discovered that many level 5 authors write incredibly toxic books. I don't know how they even reached level 5; if you can't write well, being level 100 is useless.

If you only read the synopsis without reading the book and expect a tenfold return, especially if it's about real-world business, then money will just become toilet paper. Even if you have a system that can cover up enormous wealth, if you grow too big and conjure up that much money out of thin air, the national economy will collapse.

With this system, why would I need to time travel? With this system, I'd be a king wherever I am!

This is giving away way too much money, and the salary is too high too. Is it a joke that a regular worker gets a monthly bonus of 10,000?