The Wandering Daoist Immortal

The writing is pretty good. Except for women, just writing about women makes people sick to their stomachs.

The writing is good, but I have no desire to read it anymore. I say goodbye.

This book can be read as a fairy tale more than ten years ago, and I still enjoy it now. Pure classical fairy

One routine after another, endless pretense and slaps in the face, but also the fairy grass?

When I was young, I read one of Gu Long's novels, "Huan Hua Xi Sword", which, like "The Iron-Blooded Banner", is a mid-term work of Gu Long's gradual transformation. Although it is immature, I was extremely impressed by the protagonist's cultivation method in the work. The protagonist seems to have never had a master who taught him systematically. During his travels around the world, he learned about all things in nature, watching wind and thunder, goshawks, peaks, and streams. Because of his sudden enlightenment, he touched a trace of the truth of heaven and earth, and thus established his own martial arts cultivation model. When I was young, I liked Jin Yong, and no matter how old I was, I liked Huang Yi. But when I reached middle age, I suddenly discovered that Gu Long was the master of martial arts novels. His greatest characteristic is that he dares to innovate, reveals human nature, and has a strong love for life that cannot be surpassed by other masters. Although, he writes about martial arts. Huang Yi later took Gu Long's concept a small step further, and his most classic character is Chuan Ying. This was the first time he proposed the ideal figure who would break the void after practicing martial arts to the extreme. But recalling those classic characters in his works, such as Lang Bianyun, Pang Ban, Evil Emperor Xiang Yutian, or the fairy Cihang Jingzhai. The smarter they are, the more beautiful they are, what they pursue in the end is the path of heaven and earth. In the end, these stunning and stunning characters cut off their worldly thoughts and pursue the pursuit of the broken void as their highest ideal. Although the ending is beautiful, it leaves readers with infinite melancholy. The reason why we talk about these two people is because they are both very pioneering masters. Their descriptions and imaginations of martial arts and heaven should give us some special inspirations to today's authors. However, what will you find when you open our fantasy books about cultivating immortals? 1. Infinite spiritual stones, infinite elixirs, infinite magic weapons, and the image of a nouveau riche. At that time, the sword demon was lonely and seeking defeat all his life. He searched for masters all over the world, so that he used a sword at the age of twenty, a heavy sword at the age of thirty, a wooden sword at the age of forty, and after fifty, he had no sword in his hand. . What a state this is, it makes people fascinated just thinking about it. Blindly relying on external things will lower your realm by three points. When I first read this book, at the beginning of the book, the protagonist spent all day practicing a secret sword move. The so-called initial solution to the sword was mastered by the protagonist into a sword technique that returned to nature. That sword already had a trace of the way of heaven. At that time, I almost got excited. I thought that the author and I had the same aesthetic, but later on, the author seemed to be more inclined to Lin Jingtang's brilliant swordsmanship. Therefore, the kendo at the beginning was abandoned. However, Lin Jingtang will always be Lin Jingtang, and he cannot be imitated by the protagonist. This kind of character cannot last forever in a work. He is the brightest shooting star in the sky, giving endless inspiration and understanding to those who follow. Therefore, the author should write him to death before the protagonist surpasses him! He was written to death by plots such as challenging Dao Ancestor with the Golden Core Realm. How shocking that would be. 2. Infinite Academy. I don't know who originated this writing method. A boy from a mountain village, a boy whose family is in trouble, a boy with a deep hatred, a boy from a small family, all kinds of boys, they go to take the exams of several major academies, pinch a spiritual stone, test their spiritual roots, and then they start to become outer disciples step by step. After seeing the opening chapter, I suddenly felt aesthetically exhausted. 3. How can a Taoist without cultural accomplishment cultivate immortality? In this type of novel, no matter what level the protagonist is, the enemies he encounters are all gangsters with rough language and shallow ideas. How can a person with a low spiritual and spiritual level and insufficient cultural understanding understand the way of heaven and himself? You can write the bad guy with a dark soul and loss of humanity, or you can write a different dark character or a scheming, sinister and sinister character, but can the basic language expression and behavior of the character be a little stylish? At least, this is a group of extraordinary cultivators. The above type of writing can be seen in many great works. What kind of books on immortality can become classics? In my opinion, it can be condensed into one phrase: "immortal energy + popularity" This "immortal energy" is not the flavor of the first-generation immortal novel The Master Huanzhu Louzhu. This ray of immortal energy can actually be found in "You Fang Dao Xian"! Keep up the good work, author!

It ends today. It was very enjoyable to read from beginning to end, and I was afraid that the author's second book would become the popular immortality novel today. Since the introduction of mortals cultivating immortality (not that mortals are bad, I have read it from beginning to end and subscribed), a bunch of imitation books about mortals cultivating immortality have begun to appear, and the setting of spiritual roots has been ruined. Then there is the sect competition, the auction, and the registered disciples of the inner and outer sects. The fight for the Foundation Establishment Pill. A sect competition can often write 100 chapters. I really can't stand it anymore. I came across this book by chance. It has a refined writing style and I really like it. In my mind, this is how cultivating immortality should be. I like the author's line "Senior, I'm here to kill you." I really like the style of this book, please keep it up. As an old reader, I will always support you, come on!

Why do I always feel uncomfortable reading this book? I originally thought that through thousands of mountains and rivers, I would search for immortals and visit the Tao, leaving some legacy behind. Heaven and earth would be my teachers, and the Tao would be born on its own. What a happy immortal! As a result, he was entangled in personnel matters, even failed to break off the engagement, was dismissed with a few words, and even got arrested, which may have brought another opportunity. But I'm sorry, it's too different from my expectations. Maybe it's because of my reputation. I really thought it was full of fairy spirit.

The ending seems to lack some explanation? Is it time for the protagonist to repay the sect? How is the tenth pulse of Yandi now? It seems that after hundreds of years, there is still no clear explanation of who will be in charge? Initially, I attached great importance to the protagonist's inheritance of Taoist swords. Without the guidance of the protagonist, it seems that it cannot be passed on? How is the protagonist's son doing in Yandi? It seems that they have never been told to take care of it. Don't let people say that they just plant seeds and don't care whether they grow or not or what they look like? The Moral Immortal Sect is also one of the two major helpers that gave the protagonist a major inheritance and achieved enlightenment. Without considering rewards, it seems a bit heartless to just end it like this, right? Don't just focus on your own cultivation for hundreds of years. Once you reach the highest level and become a legend for future generations, it's over... Life seems to have a beginning and an end... The elites of all sects should still consider giving back to the sect, not just what they get from the sect... Like those occasional small favors or major human events, everyone will try their best to do it... Haha, a little suggestion... Please forgive me for any mistakes...

Shit, the most important thing. The sea and your spring are water

It was at its peak when it debuted, but the subsequent films were a bit unsatisfactory.