The True Martial Demon-Slaying Chronicles

Upon arriving in Nanhua Continent, the main plot and key events at each stage lack focus. Only Xuan Yuanjing's immortal scroll appears intermittently, making it essentially a monotonous narrative. There are too many battles—against monsters, the Flood Dragon King, old women, and old ghosts—but the reasons behind them are unclear, leading to boredom. Now, a new dungeon has been introduced, featuring a completely new cast of characters; frankly, I'm experiencing some aesthetic fatigue…

What kind of writing is this? All this killing and killing, and in the end, they just kill Wumu. It's all the protagonist's fault for messing things up. Is this supposed to be a story that ruins the master's life? After practicing Qi cultivation, he's supposed to form a core? Why didn't he form a core with all that stuff in his belly? Cultivation? They don't even teach him the basics.

What's going on? I've been scrolling through all the reviews for this book, why aren't there any negative ones? This doesn't make sense, it's strange.

The attack by the Southern Celestial Palace on the True Spirit Temple has set the stage for a great calamity in the Six Realms. Judging solely from the circumstances of this attack, the situation is complex, involving various interests and intrigue. Although the True Demon Palace harbors immense ambitions, even the greatest ambitions cannot amount to much without the involvement of other forces.

Now we've entered the Shura instance, with numerous characters and a grand scale. However, the grander the structure, the more difficult it is to write well. I believe Geda already has his own ideas and outline regarding how to connect the elements. Regarding plot progression, I share a view with Qiu Zhichi: unnecessary content unrelated to the main character should be kept as concise as possible.

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One of the books I read when I was a child.

Is the author's pen name a reflection of a troubled love life? Even the female protagonists are portrayed as depressed. From Mei Xian'er to Tie Xintang to Helian Wushuang to Dieyi, what kind of story is this? In the end, she even ends up with a crow named Qingcheng and a mere subordinate named Xuanyuan Jing.

The later plot and writing style are good, but the first three chapters are completely unnecessary! I don't understand why they had to write the protagonist's background like that in those three chapters? Couldn't they just have replaced the hunter couple's background with the protagonist's parents? Why go through all that trouble...? In any case, it seems that deleting the first three chapters won't have any impact at the moment.

I just read the chapter before it was released; Ebony, through his own efforts and with the protagonist's help, ascended to immortality—and died. This was so frustrating... It's not that he couldn't die, but you can't let an old fox die from one mindless plot point after another... I really lost interest in reading the rest.