The True Martial Demon-Slaying Chronicles

After arriving in South China, the main plot or the core events of the stages are not prominent. Only the fairy scroll of Xuanyuan Jing is looming. To put it bluntly, it is basically a running account; fighting monsters, fighting with Jiao King, fighting with old women, fighting with old ghosts, there are too many fightings, but I don't know why, it is boring. Now we have dived into a new dungeon, and a bunch of brand new characters have come out; to be honest, I feel a little tired of looking at it...

What is this written? Killings come and go, and Wumu is killed in the end. It is still the protagonist's fooling around. Is this a trick to deceive the master? After practicing Qi, he will form elixirs. How can he not form elixirs with so much in his stomach? He has no basic knowledge about cultivating immortals. The teacher is just a pair of stupid masters and apprentices. Come on, the apprentice uses Zhenqi to heal the master. You are the Jinshui Zhenqi. You clearly know that the master is earth Zhenqi. Isn't this nonsense? There is medicine in the Qiankun bag and you don't need to use Zhenqi. There is really no article to write.

What's going on? How come there are no negative comments on this book after reviewing it for so long? This is unscientific, strange

The Nantian Immortal Palace attacked the True Spirit Temple, which opened the prelude to the catastrophe of the Six Realms. Judging from the situation of Nantian Immortal Palace attacking the True Spirit Temple, it is complicated, with various interests and intrigues. Although the True Demon Palace is extremely ambitious, no matter how ambitious it is, it will not accomplish much without the participation of other forces. But if other forces are involved, things get quite complicated. This time the Nantian Immortal Palace attacked the True Spirit Temple. On one side, the Nantian Immortal Palace was the main force, with the masters of the creation realm of the True Demon Palace, and the traitors from various forces such as the Nantian Immortal Palace and the Western Heaven Immortal Palace in the True Spirit Temple. On the other side, the True Spirit Temple also had undercover agents in the Nantian Immortal Palace and other places. This is also in line with the forces of all parties. You are among me, and you are among me. Judging from the initial situation on the battlefield, Xitian Immortal Palace is the scariest. While the main force of the True Spirit Temple is in the Sunset Mountains, send out the elite main force to capture the foundation of the True Spirit Temple. If successful, the benefits will obviously be greater than those of those participating in the battle at the front. Not to mention other things, the secret realms and treasures of each True Spirit family are more than those of the people participating in the battle at the front. Moreover, the main force is in the front, and the strength in the rear is not strong enough. If Shui Sheng and his party hadn't arrived by chance, the White Tiger clan would have been wiped out. Then the one who takes the blame is Nantian Immortal Palace or True Demon Palace. But the Xitian Immortal Palace is in quite a decline this time. When the protagonist gets angry, he kills the three masters of the Creation Realm at once, and also takes out the undercover agents of the Xitian Immortal Palace and the Nantian Immortal Palace who know that they are in the True Spirit Temple. A large number of traitors were eliminated. Of course, Nantian Xiangong is still quite skilled, and there are still a lot of traitors that they don't know about. This can be seen when the Evil Slaughter King's clone and some masters from Nantian Immortal Palace entered the True Spirit Formation and those who were adding fairy spirit stones suddenly stopped adding spirit stones. For this war, Nantian Xiangong put all the undercover agents it had operated for many years to use. Judging from the results of this war, only against the True Spirit Temple, all forces in the fairy world were involved. There were people participating from all the Celestial Palaces in the East, West, South and North as well as the True Demon Palace - Shuisheng was from the North Celestial Palace and Quzhao was from the East Celestial Palace. Although except for the South Heaven Immortal Palace and the West Heaven Immortal Palace, other parties are almost symbolically participating. This was just a battle against the True Spirit Temple, with both sides dispatching nearly 2 million monks. Normally, some high-ranking masters of the Creation Realm could not save their own lives - and in the absence of the Immortality Realm, before the arrival of Shuisheng, one of the masters of the Creation Realm on both sides died in battle, and the other body was destroyed. Judging from Shui Sheng's current strength, it should be at the same level as the Immortal Realm - it is the pinnacle of the Creation Realm, with three great Nascent Souls, Tiangang Evil Qi, a large number of treasures, the law of turbidity, the best laws of light and darkness, Nuwa's guidance, etc. With such conditions, it would be too much to be unable to fight against the Immortal Realm. After Shuisheng participated in the war, most of the monks in the creation realm were reduced to scum, and 8 people were directly killed. There are three people from the West Heaven Immortal Palace and five people from the South Heaven Immortal Palace. For the two Immortal Palaces, the blow was quite severe. Judging from the Creation Realm monks in the True Spirit Temple, there are about 20 to 30 Creation Realm monks on this side. The Nantian Immortal Palace may be stronger, and there should be no more than 80 at most. One-tenth of them were wiped out this time, which can be said to be a heavy loss. Under normal circumstances, as long as Shui Sheng is here, there won't be any big waves; but other forces may continue to cause chaos. In addition, this catastrophe is a catastrophe of the six realms. Whether it will involve the Cold Underworld is not clear to the human world, and it is estimated that the human world cannot escape. Finally, to use a common saying: If you want to know what happened next time, please explain it next time.

Now entering the Shura dungeon, there are many characters and a relatively large scale. But the grander the structure, the more difficult it is to write well. I believe that Liao Da has already had his own ideas and outlines on how to connect them. Regarding the advancement of the plot, I have the same opinion as Akira Chi on one point. Non-essential content that has nothing to do with the protagonist should be kept as concise as possible. Some parts can be summed up in one stroke using the Spring and Autumn style of writing, and some parts can be briefly introduced to make the main lines clear. Liao Da is not a professional writer now, and typing every day is very hard. But as a newcomer, you should be happy. Now there are more than ten thousand readers of your book. Although there are not that many people subscribing here, as long as you continue to work hard and promote it more, I believe you will attract more and more readers. Of course, you must develop your own style in writing. Secondly, the number of updates is also necessary. Each chapter used to have about 3,000 words, but now it only has 2,500 words. The word count of two chapters updated every day is still not up to the standard of dragging the gods and forgetting the words. Although he only has two chapters, each chapter is about 3,000 words. After all, in online novels, updates are king. Although it is hard to code while working, but since you like it, you can only work hard. For a professional writer like the third young master of the Tang family, he has never stopped updating a day in eight years. In addition, he is a great writer. Although his writing is average, his popularity is quite good. The writing style of this book is inherently good, and the relationship between people is much better than that written by Wangyu. It is no longer for personal gain and does not care about anything. There is friendship and family affection, not just cold and cold interests. This is also one of the highlights of the book. But regardless of family and friendship, some should be based on the principle of being reasonable and natural. Mao Ni's kind of making enemies of the whole world for one person is really not advisable. Nowadays, more and more people are reading this book. As long as you persist and ensure the quality and quantity, more and more great people will be attracted to read the book. Xiang Yuanzhao, a pig with a bastard temperament, a cheap character, etc. Might all come to see it.

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One of the few books I read as a child.

Does the author's name reflect the rough road of love? Even the heroine was written in a depressing tone. From Mei Xian'er to Tie Xintang to Helian Wushuang to Die Yi, what can I write about? In the end, I actually accepted a crow Qingcheng, a pure subordinate Xuanyuan Jing. If you want to say that you like someone who has feelings for you, wouldn't it be bad for Mei Xianer and Helian Wushuang? Want a crow. When it comes to what is good for her, Tie Xintang is so infatuated and dares to express it, Dieyi goes through life and death along with him without even giving an explanation.

The subsequent plot and writing are both good, but the first three chapters are completely unnecessary! I don't understand, why should the protagonist's life experience be written like that in these three chapters? Can't you just replace the setting of the Orion couple later on with the protagonist's parents? Why is it so unnecessary... Anyway, from the current point of view, deleting all the first three chapters will have no impact.

I just happened to see the chapter before it was released, in which Wumu ascended to immortality with his own efforts and the help of the protagonist ~ died. This tone makes me choke. . . It's not that he can't die, you can't let an old fox die from repeated mindless plots. . . I really didn't care to watch it later