Taoism Becomes Immortal

He has become a goddamn immortal, and has become a real son of one yuan. He still has the mentality of a grandson. He greets everyone when he sees him, and it is natural for him to be threatened by the maid. He has no temper. It is of no use to you to cultivate like this.

The story is very good and exciting enough, but why it is so difficult to attract people. It may be because of the writing style. The description of the characters is very poor. A good author can describe the psychology and personality of the characters in just a few paragraphs, but the author must not have reached this skill!

Abandon it, it's too poisonous. I have cultivated to the point of transcending tribulations in the Dharma-ending world of the earth. My xinxing is still several levels higher than my peers, but I feel like a fool after traveling through it once.

The idea of the novel written by the author is very good, but the plot is average. I only read about 60 chapters of the book, but the protagonist is always being troubled by people. He is hunted in the mountains and held hostage to lead the way. He is looking for herbs and is captured by the foundation warriors to dig mines and learn formations. I won't go into details here. I went to fetch spiritual water with my senior sister and offended the Shui family and was offered a reward. After entering the sect, I was troubled by the children of the family and was sent to the battlefield. On the battlefield, I was in trouble because the formation was criticized. Even for the protagonist, this trouble is too much!

Attention readers, a weakling with horns can be bullied by anyone. He never considers revenge. No matter how high his cultivation level is, he will repay evil with kindness😆😆😆

I haven't read the book, but I was offended by the protagonist's cowardice after reading the reviews, so I didn't dare to give it a try. I don't know if the author is really capable of writing such cruelty or if someone is taking advantage of it, but it really doesn't suit me. I have a bad temper and I'm afraid the anger will get over me.

Damn it, damn it, you damn it, you really deserve to die, what else can you do? You'll die if you don't move, fuck your mother

Although the protagonist is a bit unsatisfactory, it is normal for people to have shortcomings. But. . What's going on with your prices? The section of Yiyuanlou really makes me vomit blood. Author, can you please do some mental calculations? Kindergarten math won't be so broken, right?

After reading more than a hundred chapters, I feel very boring and without any passion, like running water. A novel only needs to write several stories. To arouse the reader's interest in reading and capture the reader's psychology, it is nothing more than fame, wealth, power, family and friendship, other ways of doing things, or some novel knowledge and plots. I hope the author can grasp it well.

The day after tomorrow, he was held hostage to lead the way at the peak of Qi training, he was held hostage to mine in the early stage of Qi training, and he was targeted and assigned when he entered the sect in the later stage of Qi training. He was such a doormat that everyone kicked him.

A very interesting book. Not to mention the setting crash. Every time the protagonist encounters an enemy that is stronger than him... Even the one who was bullied later went crazy, realized the importance of strength, and wanted to take revenge, so he broke through to the foundation building stage. The result is revenge! Forgot... It really is a cartilage that is being carried forward.

Except for the golden bell that comes with the protagonist, which is a bit new, other aspects are still the same old routines, the upgrade flow, the murder and treasure grabbing flow. There must be a secret realm when you go to a place, and it will not be opened unless the protagonist appears. My personal suggestion is that the author let the protagonist explore more of the golden bell that comes with it. There are actually some interesting things to see, such as using the golden bell as the basis for fusion skills, such as integrating formations into the golden bell, and for example, in terms of sonic skills, the lion's roar from Xingye's "Kung Fu" can be incorporated into it, and the bell can also be used to trap people. This aspect can also be explored...

People who read books can read without using their brains, but those who write books must use their brains to write. Everything is what you think. The protagonist's IQ is touching. Even if you read without using your brains, people will be worried about his IQ.

This novel doesn't look like it was written by the same author at all. It has as many loopholes as a sieve.

After reading more than a hundred chapters, I got all kinds of insults, pig's feet were completely out of temper, I was passively beaten, I felt sad, and I got negative reviews.

The setting of Admiralty is quite good, but I didn't see much of it later.

The greatest use of the golden bell was ignored and abandoned

The 13-year-old book, He Ma Breaks the Sky, Douluo Batch, now seems to be all about poison, but at that time it was fairy grass

Please, I took one look at this book and my eyes filled with tears. I was so touched! A Qi practitioner who has been targeted by so many foundation builders, a protagonist who is constantly being repaid with kindness, and a novel with an extremely exaggerated world, can still write so many words to torture us, the author is really bullshit🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂

Stop watching! I can't stand it anymore! The setting can be used with intelligence-reducing strikes and spiritual stone strikes.

Reading the book feels like reading a primary school student's composition

After reading some public versions, I found that the author's purpose in writing the book was incomprehensible. A lot of side plots and irrelevant plots have been written, but where are the pig's feet? Some of the stories about the bitches were written cheerfully, but the pig's feet were not mentioned at all. What we want to see is the story of the pig's feet, not the story of the supporting characters. I was writing about this war, that war, and then I occasionally mentioned pig's feet. I was speechless while reading this book.

How many tiger demons, pig demons, monkey demons, snake demons have been harmed since the beginning of cultivating immortals? They were repairing their company in their own territory, provoking whomever they provoked, and being feasted on by the protagonist. 😅😅😅😅

After reading part of it, I felt that the author was a bit idiotic in writing the protagonist. He was completely being played for fun or he posted it without any brains... I was very sad after reading it.

Don't listen to them, it's very well written, keep it up.

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No wonder it's so popular, the road is ruthless, I'm so sorry to give it back to my family

I have never seen such a one-sided review 😁

I can't stand it anymore. After reading 6 chapters, I'm tired. Let's destroy it. Too brainless and a waste of time.

The content of Chapter 324 repeats the content of Chapter 323! I discovered it after I uploaded it, and then modified it before publishing! But why hasn't the content of Chapter 324 been changed? Does the background need time to react? Also, will book lovers who subscribed be affected in any way? How should I modify it? Does anyone know, can you tell me? I'm a newbie and don't know much about these...🥺