Zhou Tianxing Lord Era

The author should describe more about the characters' personalities and give these characters some relatively independent expressions. The author's story-writing ability is already very strong. What is lacking is the description and portrayal of the characters. The characters are not vivid. The readers have no sense of identification and have no motivation to follow. Of course, the author's settings, worldview construction, and plot shaping are remarkable, and this is also the author's competitiveness.

I think the setting is okay, but the writing is too bland and there is too little excitement. Ninth Grade actually feels like this, but the setting of Ninth Grade is better and the suspense setting is better. If 10 points is considered a perfect score, I will barely give this book a pass. .

I suggest the author to read novels of the same type. After reading the first few chapters, I found that they are too cliche. Bringing a dragon soul and a snake turning into a dragon are all routines from many years ago. In addition, in the first few chapters, there is no sense of the role of the natal stars, and there are no special talents at all. In this case, it is just the creation of the world and the race. In the end, there is no difference in the creation of the world. , There is no difference in race, so everyone is the same. How do you let the protagonist rise? This is pure resources, explosive soldiers, without a background, it will definitely be cool, and the protagonist's golden finger is not good. After all, the dragon soul is not unique to the protagonist. People with a good background can directly use the dragon race, which is better than the mutated snake people. You brought the wrong golden finger.

After reading about a hundred chapters, I feel it's a bit bland and not very exciting. I personally don't like it very much. I've read a similar one before, Age of Global Gods. If you like this type of genre, you can check it out.

So far so good, keep up the good work

The cheats are good, but the protagonist is portrayed as someone who can only rely on cheats, which is annoying. Judging from the content of the article, no matter how amateur you are, you have to think of ways to do it. If you don't have money, think of ways to have money. If there is no battle formation, some basic formation and batch attack training will be beneficial and cost-effective. It is also good to buy any necessities that will be used in the next step of practice in advance. It is also good to buy an extra day or two. If it is a dependent family, it will take one or two thousand years to develop. The necessary demon pill can still be used until it is restricted before you can buy it? The portrayal of the protagonist has no plan at all, and it is obvious that he has no vision or talent. The poor can't just rely on mutation! If the words go outside the novel, outside the dimensional wall, then it is the author's problem. It's obvious that many of the settings were thought up on the fly, and there was definitely no planning. It is too obvious to use the demon pill setting for the development of spiritual veins. I thought of it the day before and used it the next day, but it turned out to be a plot where the protagonist was not prepared for the necessities I mentioned above, which was a big failure. Can you spend more time to think through the details of the next development and the setting of the development, so that this kind of failure will not happen again? I understand that the author of the novel wrote the novel. If the strength of the character's basic attributes is not mentioned, then the combat power can be said nonsense. Whether these things are written or not does not affect the presentation of combat power. To put it bluntly, if I used the demon pill two days earlier, would it affect the family members' height later on to reach two meters? It doesn't matter! The author speaks nonsense, what can't he write about? The problem is that you have to convince the readers. The protagonist who has nothing, not even micro-control, does not show the sense of urgency that every second counts, and does not even have a plot to sell iron. It really gives people the feeling that you are not good enough to make progress, that you are not worthy of this, or that there is nothing else besides being good. It is too detrimental to the portrayal of the protagonist's image.

So many gods and goddesses are based on changing maps and cheating and upgrading. In the world of gods, there should be business streams, family streams with many children, urban streams with early marriage and early pregnancy, father, son, mother and son each having their own two-part story, and so on. There should even be the ordinary demigod true god's body, how to dedicate himself to the country, how to raise his children, and how children are the sociological stream of time-travelers, how to inherit their legacy and strive to climb up. It is a good high-end era theme that is currently too shallowly explored. Another cheating point is that the protagonists are all trying to pull off the tricks. While they admire how great the gods and soldiers are, they are "free by nature" and refuse to join the army. Why can't there be a protagonist who joins the army and retires with meritorious service, returns to his hometown to teach in a middle school, becomes a teacher, and educates children, and eventually enters the officialdom of official literature where he was born in a public family and is good at spiritual practice 🙂. Seeing that this good subject of gods and gods has been ruined in this way 😜

Now that I have read Chapter 95, I have the following doubts. 1. The Star Lord and the Familia are training outside. How does the Star Lord know what is happening over there with the Familia? How to direct? 2. When the Familia go out to war and only focus on the numbers, won't some more talented Familia be born? The kind of elite template or hero template that can be much more powerful, etc. At present, it seems that the internal force of the half-dragons can be divided, but the external individual combat power is basically the same. 3. This aspect of commander-in-chief is basically not covered. 3. The biggest question is the flow rate of time. If calculated as one to hundreds of years, one simulation test will take hundreds of years. Will there be no changes on the natal planet? And regarding lifespan, what is the lifespan of the Star Master? Why can't you practice on your own planet (I haven't seen it so far)?

I always feel that Chen Cang's condition is not very good during this period First point, when the protagonist's realm improves, the pleasure of defeating monsters and upgrading is not written. The second point is that the characters are not full. There are now more than 200 chapters, and I feel that there is not even a single outstanding supporting character in this book, let alone the heroine with good image, temperament, good family background and ability that we expected, and there is no foil to support it. The third point is that the upgrade system of Star Master is not perfect, it can even be said to be very vague. There is no clear and complete Star Master promotion system in a planned way, and there is no large-scale system for other realms such as ghosts, immortals, etc.

This introduction is nonsense. You don't even need to read the content. It also integrates the natal stars, cultivates the dependents, and upgrades the stars through the path of immortality. Are you here to be funny, author? Do you know what the setting of Tianxian is? You are obviously following the Earthly Immortal Path, so you have to say it is the Celestial Immortal Path. The Celestial Immortal Path is obviously about attributing great power to oneself, pursuing one's great freedom and freedom, what about the natal stars, cultivating dependents, and relying on external forces for promotion? Can this be the Celestial Immortal Path?

I think the author should read some basic information about military command. What he is describing now, let alone military command, is worse than a primary school student who has been playing games like StarCraft for a year. I won't talk about the main character. There are all kinds of new information to learn at the beginning. The teacher's so-called battle formations are simply amazing.

Looking at it now, I feel that if you have resources, you can improve quickly, and tactics and the like are secondary. It would be disappointing if the college entrance examination is just a competition for combat power. As for the next Academy Chapter, I suggest you not to make knowledge free. This is too boring. You should learn from wizard novels in this regard.

More than 80 photos are still being transferred in the first level! Does it take thousands of copies to reach the ninth level? ? This is a crawler dragging down the plot and the word count!

Let's complain, this combat power is really amazing 1. Human immortals can single-handedly challenge the Void Demon Clan, and then the Star Lord's dependents will have to pay hundreds of thousands to defeat a demon Clan of the same level, and there will be casualties. 2. It has always been said that the Star Lord is invincible at the same level and can fight across levels. However, human immortals can single-handedly challenge monsters of the same level. To kill a monster of one level higher than the Star Lord requires hundreds of thousands of dependents to attack suicidally, and his own magic weapon will break under the slightest obstruction. I don't know if this level-up means that you can laugh to death at a higher level. 3. The weapons of the dependents are already the pinnacle of magic weapons, but the protagonist's natal tower is only an intermediate magic weapon, and it can be called a sacred weapon by the dependents. I wonder if the dependents will want to laugh when they worship. 4. The author really has no idea about numbers. He spends millions to defeat a demon clan of the same level. The protagonist is not much better than the dependents of the same level, and the magic weapon is not as good as the dependents. The more I read, the more fascinated I am.

Which studio is this novel from... The small test, the big test, the star promotion test~all are real people, and they are real killers... They say they will be born in a few days, I am speechless. The top elites in this life are all dead here, how can they develop, and let those inferior products who have not gone there be left?

I just want to ask the author, if human beings were enslaved and would be mobilized for war at every turn with heavy casualties, would you resist? The so-called star masters are fighting against each other for some high school final exam. All their subordinates have activated spiritual intelligence. Which group of idiots who have activated spiritual intelligence are willing to do this to you? One death after another, oh sorry, just die for my final exam, don't be sad, don't be sad, this is just a game and a dream. Oh, I also discovered that the author is still the author of Jiupin Xianlu. Your book is much worse than Jiupin Xianlu.

One moment, you have a glimpse of ten thousand years, and you are the master of a planet. The next moment, you are practicing Niu Mo Fist at home and training your skin. If you want to practice new tricks, you can't be too ridiculous.

It doesn't take a million or a few million to kill a little monster. I just want to know how you stand when millions of people come to kill a monster. The author, did you pass junior high school mathematics? . . . .

The running account is full of water even if I jump to read it, which is not that exciting.

Isn't this Star Master's way a pure Krypton gold cultivation stream? Then what's the use of studying and rushing for mock exams? If you don't have money, you won't be able to develop in another hundred years.

This Peng Yue makes me feel uncomfortable. It was okay to help the protagonist in the early stage. I can accept her in the Penglai Star Territory later, but after leaving the Penglai Star Territory and having her, is it a bit hard to praise her? It was painful to watch. What I disliked the most was that the author forced the supporting characters. Peng Yue's three models are not as strong as the protagonist. What can I compare to the college entrance examination? There are more people, but not too much. The early stage of Nine-Tailed Snake is not good, and they are all remote. How can she pass the tenth level with all her efforts? At least hundreds of thousands of her family members died.

There is a good inheritance, but the inheritance with the greatest side effects is chosen, and the family members are consumed. This is the last thing that should happen. This is also a common problem with many authors. It is meaningless to force the protagonist to obtain abilities with serious side effects to suppress the author.

I published this book before Jiupin finished the book. When Jiupin Lao asked for leave, he was scolded for not having a long memory. He wrote it like a bird, with no IQ at all. Everyone has run away. If he directly left the human world and the Immortal Dynasty, would he be like this bird? You have lost your popularity. You have been beaten to pieces by a good card.

Plant a picture and receive millions! ! !

Judging from the current progress, excluding the factor of external krypton gold, the protagonist has no outstanding advantages compared to others in the class. After all, he is a time traveler, and he hopes to improve in some aspects. (For example, combat command or family guidance and training)

The setting of this book is flawed. The system is going to collapse. This book often describes the huge gap in combat power between Star Palace monks and Academy monks, but it is inconsistent. I can understand being invincible at the same level, but in Star Lord's system, wouldn't it be crushing if one level of combat power is lacking? What's the difference? Upgrading requires all your efforts to surround and kill a high-level life. But with the star master's human sea tactics, wouldn't the sea of ​​family members who are one level higher be completely killed instantly? The content is contradictory in many places.

How about this for dragon people? Pictures searched on Baidu.

There are 6 people in one city who have been admitted to the Star Palace, there are 72 cities in one Serpentis star, there are no one knows how many Serpentis stars there are in one Penglai star field, and there are no one knows how many Penglai star fields under the Star Alliance. The Star Alliance only has eight star palaces. Each star palace can recruit up to 1,000 people. It's so unreasonable. There are many unreasonable things in this book.

Let me give you a suggestion. The protagonist bought so many spiritual roots, but the effect is hardly reflected. This is not good.

I almost fell asleep while reading it. I only read the first part. The competition is about whoever has the money wins. There is at least a change in understanding of those who are cultivating immortals and high martial arts, and there are various technical operations. This book is purely about comparing who is rich. The dragon soul of the protagonist is also a kind of money from a certain angle. It just needs the environment to exert power, and it is still simple and crude.