Immortal Dynasty of Humanity

Popular recommendation: This is a fairy tale about fighting for hegemony. Through the setting of the Five Elements and the background of the story before the Qin Dynasty, the male protagonist obtains the luck of the Five Elements by marrying wives, taking concubines, and attacking cities and territories, and successfully cultivates and ascends to the throne. Although there are not many words in the work, the story shown by the author now allows me to see the author's level. Whether it is from the macro background or the detailed settings, it proves the author's intention and is worth recommending. Work panel: [Author] Chen Cang [Bookmark] Time travel, system, ancient history [Rating]🌸🌸🌸🌸 Content review: I will test the novel, and review good books here. Hello everyone, I am Jiang Liuer, an ordinary book friend. Let's get back to the book. What I bring to you today is a 70,000-word new book that is on the new book list. First of all, the author was attracted by the introduction. This book tells the story of a male protagonist who accidentally traveled through time. After getting familiar with this world and cultivating immortality through the Five Elements, the male protagonist began to marry wives and concubines, and obtained a formal identity. Later, he used this identity to conquer cities and lands, obtain other jade seals of luck, and successfully ascended to heaven. Secondly, it can be seen from the above plot that the author combined the five elements with the Qi Refining and Immortal Cultivation System, and also used the background setting of the struggle for hegemony to combine the original single and cliché writing method, and combined it with a new story to create a new feeling. Although the overall feeling is good, as other book friends said, I personally think that there are certain bugs in the setting of Yuxi, and the setting of the male protagonist's training is also a bit simple. Therefore, the author hopes that by spending some time on these details later, the author may make it more beautiful. In terms of character portrayal, there are actually not many main characters currently appearing. As for the settings of the male and female protagonists, the author may not have looked carefully. The female protagonist is a bit biased towards a tool person. As for the male protagonist, I think it is not very full and vivid, and it is worth using more detailed details to fill in the multi-faceted nature of this character. Finally, the author knows from the known content that the work is an experimental work that combines multiple fairy tale techniques. The content of the work is worth recommending, but the only drawback is that there are still bugs in the setting, and the characters also deserve improvement. However, overall it is still worth recommending. {"TopicId":"804728532092780544","TopicName":"Book Famine Terminator"}

I just finished watching it and realized that I am familiar with it. I have also watched The Road to the Nine-Pin Immortal. Now let me evaluate it. Take a look at the author. The book is good, creative and thoughtful, and the writing level is pretty good. It gives me a better feeling than Jiupin Xianlu. Then let me talk about the shortcomings. The lack of exposure means that the recommended starting point is less. I discovered it in the limited-free version. Second, there are few updates. The only way to get exposure is to get it. No matter what recommendations you have, don't dislike it. The second one is updating. I haven't finished reading the Nine-Pin Immortal Road and there are still more than two hundred chapters. At first, I was catching up on the update. Then I found that the update was too slow and I wanted to put it away. As soon as I put it up, it was completely finished. I forgot about it. When I thought about it, I saw this book and it felt familiar. After reading the chapter reviews, I realized that it was written by an acquaintance. But now you ask me to watch it again and I don't feel it anymore. Therefore, the author should be diligent and update more, and contact the editor more for key recommendations. Even if it is a mosquito recommendation, it will be enough to get one.

I remember that Emperor Wu of the Han Dynasty said that he was a mixture of kingly and domineering. The protagonist just inherited the Blackwater Kingdom and his strength and prestige were not enough. However, he has inherited the kingdom for a long time and his status has been stable. For Jiang Hanzu's family, Ming Yang's war arrangements at this time are very risky. Isn't this a good place? Someone has to guard the dangerous area. Someone is secretly arranging for the leader of that group of guys to be destroyed. Is the protagonist really a gentleman who can be bullied and has nothing to do? He clearly knows that he has embezzled a lot of resources and is still getting stronger.

"Human Emperor's Five Supreme Opening Manual" Build the foundation and practice the strength to change the shape, the five strength became the elixir, the innate has no leakage, the Tao body is perfect, the acquired nature is washed away, the innate baby is restored, not bound by the acquired cage, the inner breath turns into the true qi, the five qi are refined internally, the five elements are refined externally, the Tao embryo is formed by nature, and the emperor Make the true essence of the five elements of heaven and earth, finally bring the five qi to the origin, practice the qi to perfection, the Tao is formed in nature, the human body becomes the world of its own, the internal and external interactions, the skills are endless, the five elements of creation are cast into the dharma body. The five qi are perfect, exercise the path of the five virtues, and cast the five gods of Yin, Shen, Yang, Yuan, Shen, Jade, Holy God, and combine the innate five qi and the five virtues to develop the five emperors and great supernatural powers. Authority is added to the body, and the great power of human nature is blessed in the body, and the body of the true god of the emperor's path is cast. In the beginning, there was the Tao, God and the Tao are the same, transcending the distinction between ordinary races, the kingdom of God is immortal, and it forms its own reincarnation. Ascension to the throne of the human being is one with human nature and becomes invisible and insubstantial. In fact, the human emperor transforms into all living beings. All living beings are human emperors, and the human emperor is also a living being. His realm is comparable to Taiyi.

Although I had a premonition, I was still poisoned by Chapter 44. The general idea is that the protagonist gets married, and then after the marriage is successful, the woman who married the protagonist, and the people in her lineage, concealed some secret things, and then they couldn't hide it anymore. He told the protagonist that a broken ship was left for him, and that the blood sacrifice was done by him. Then the protagonist generously forgave him, because he had a golden finger. It was considered a desperate situation for others, but not for him. It made me laugh. My understanding is that although it is not actively harming others. Yeah, but someone left a trap for you, and then you didn't get it, and then you said that it was okay if you didn't get it, and then you gave him a benefit (if you understand what I said, you can think about whether it is poisonous or not). I even turned over a dozen chapters to see if the protagonist had any feelings for the woman and her clan. Someone punished her, and then told me that she didn't, hey, she also had to share the benefits of the golden finger, which made me laugh. My suggestion is that if you can't accept the protagonist's "generous" forgiveness, I suggest you don't read it. It's already around 40 chapters, and there will probably be more in the future.

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Is the author planning to arrange for the protagonist to take the path of becoming a human emperor? The words on the jade seal need to be changed. The Human Emperor is the lord of the world, much more powerful than the Emperor.

Good guy, keep the enemy here and the country is disgusting, right? The hostility towards you is written on your face. I won't kill you as the protagonist if I can. Hey, it's just for fun. Can't you find a reason to kill? Also, when the king asks a question, the subordinates are secretive here and avoid answering. If they cause problems, the king not only asks the master to wipe their butts, but also rewards them. It's really poisonous. No wonder this book has such poor results.

After reading Chapter 20, I have written the plot of the protagonist exploding to kill the enemy three times. I was thinking, isn't this kind of plot of the fantasy genre written ten years ago, in which the protagonist explodes and kills the enemy? Why is Dynasty Hegemony also written like this? Strategy and suppression? Also, the plot is too watery. I would like to call the author Emperor Shuitian.

You have the strength but do not deal with the enemy and allow trouble and obstruction. This is a big poisonous point.

No wonder the exemption is limited. In the first chapter, there is a marriage. The woman has not yet reached the foundation and cannot lose her virginity. The protagonist is a time traveler. I don't want to commit a crime? It would be better if you used the woman's excuse that she didn't break through the foundation building and couldn't break her body. Are you making this excuse? Do you think that marriage in ancient times really just meant that both the man and the woman got married? The main thing is that two people need to have a child, preferably a boy, especially the monarch's wife. The sooner she has a child, the better. The author doesn't know what he thinks. He got married at such a young age. He doesn't want to have a child early to consolidate his status. I can't have one on the wedding night. Broken virginity, you might as well get one. I can't have children for the time being. After all, giving birth to a child consumes too much energy and delays her cultivation. You have done nothing when you get married, and your virginity is not broken. You just make a decoration and put it here, and you have to use the cultivation resources of the man's country. What's the point of your marriage? The protagonist's parents are not very capable to get the protagonist to get married so early. They mainly want the protagonist to get married early and have children early to stabilize the country. The reason is that the protagonist becomes a monarch as soon as he gets married. (Of course, if the subsequent development of this novel is that the woman's side is more powerful, that is, the natal family is more powerful, then just pretend that I didn't say anything)

This novel really made me laugh to death... Immortal dynasties rely on blessing ghosts and gods or incense and fire gods to establish their ruling system. They are not immortal cultivators, let alone those who have become immortals. You might as well kill others. This is what the heavens in ancient myths and legends did... Immortal cultivators established a court? You don't need time or enlightenment to break through, but others can? Which fairy treats others as a dog and a human being? Immortal cultivators are all pursuing a happy and immortal life and competing with heaven for their fate. Not only are you a person who is ordered by heaven, but you also write about being a cultivator of immortality. This is directly blocking the possibility of becoming an immortal. Don't you know that blocking people's path is like killing their parents? Cultivation of immortality relies on enlightenment (a brain that can solve mathematical conjectures). It is not about killing and killing, nor about worldliness, but about doing what you should do and others disturbing me in retreat

Compassion does not govern soldiers, righteousness does not govern wealth, emotion does not establish affairs, kindness does not govern officials. I hope to see a different person in power, instead of relying on the spirit of a king, with a group of holy gentlemen under his command. Such a group of people cannot govern the country.

The Jiang family villains didn't deal with the supplies in Heifeng Village and Tun? , Luck is leaving the villain to celebrate the New Year🤔

The first chapter was unbearable, now I can write a novel alone

The balance between cultivation and management is obviously a failure Others will not be able to see the obvious abnormalities in the cultivation system, so the way of writing that treats others as blind is a failure, and there is no cover at the very least. The best way to run a country is to snowball with high efficiency and then use force to overwhelm others. This is basically not reflected in the settings in your book. Other countries are benchmarked against the output rate of families. If you follow the people's line, a situation will inevitably occur. The grassroots and middle levels will crush other countries. The high-level combat power of other countries cannot beat others in the early and mid-term. One country supplies one family. However, what you wrote is very confusing and petty. It is ridiculous that you allocate the resources produced by the national system downwards like raising a son. If you want to stand out, you have to fight for your life. It is said that talents are talents. Those who stand out in rounds of development are talents, and the rest are just consumables. The biggest feature of the people's system is the endless supply of reserve talents. How can the people behind move up if the people in front don't move or die? Only fools believe that there are enough resources, and it is even more impossible to satisfy everyone.

Recruiting talents. The strength of the fantasy fairy is important, and wisdom is equally important. If there is a group of counselors like the Three Kingdoms, it can also play a big role in the development of the country. When the strength cannot be improved quickly, wisdom must be used. It is used in the country's business development and management. Ordinary people may not have as much knowledge as the protagonists in the vassal family, but in terms of wisdom, they should be able to find various talents in management and development to help the master. The country is developing rapidly, and more should be written about the improvement of the protagonist's strength. He should also improve through various opportunities, gain enlightenment and gain a certain strength. The foundation stage is still too weak. In fact, it is good to add a Zifu stage like some novels in the middle. In this realm, you can accumulate and develop your power while improving your own potential. At this stage, the strength is okay in the world of immortality and can be developed for a long time. After all, there are much less golden elixirs and Yuanying.

There is no mention of developing the technology of cultivating immortals. It feels a bit boring to just rely on human nature energy to transport Tiger Balm.

I didn't write that feeling, it was just like playing house, not rigorous at all, there is no so-called military career system, everything has been ruined, there is not even a decent army, it is purely about the peak of personal force.

I would like to give a suggestion to the author to strengthen the description of the fighting scenes. You can learn from other novels or watch anime to develop ideas. Fighting alone is like Wangyu. Every battle has a concept, and it is written in detail without being repetitive. Your book is about dynasty cultivating immortals, and there may be team battles and military formations later on. I don't know if you have any special settings. Fighting scenes are the highlights in all immortality novels. If they are well written, they are very attractive, but if they are not well written, they will be jarring.

There are too many differences. To be honest, there is not a single outstanding minister. My sister-in-law's only outstanding performance feels a bit stiff. Writing a fortune depends entirely on one emperor? War generals, diplomacy, economy, strategy, no outstanding talents

Only the sword has the Tao? Are there any other weapons? It's not like the immortal is bound to the sword. This really doesn't look good.

Let's just say that the early stage is a lot of poisonous points. You all know that the person is going to kill you but you still keep it for the New Year, and you only promote the foundation of the Jiang family. To put it bluntly, the Jiang family is really kind and they didn't kill you. Finally, there is Yun Chao who practices cultivation for her mother's family but does not give it to the family, and then she goes to the family for help when something goes wrong. She is such a filial protagonist.

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Compared with the ninth-grade immortal road, this is far behind

Oops, the more I love it, the more I love reading it, which has solved my book shortage problem! The writing and story are much better than those of Qinglian Peak!

The writing is better than The Top of Qinglian!

The pinnacle of Yunchao-ryu! The writing style is very good, often foreshadowing, and the management is challenging. It is not like those childish cool articles written specifically for primary school students!

To put it simply, the biggest poisonous point in the early stage is that the Jiang Liangyuan family is not of the same mind as you, and they have always wanted to rebel. They also know very clearly that the result is not decisive, and it is still there later. The disgusting person said that he had no money, and then said that he was corrupt and kept mentioning it. It is simply disgusting to the audience. If you have no money, why don't you confiscate your home? You have strength and righteousness, why don't you confiscate your home? Their corruption has caused so many casualties. If you take them down directly, you can win the hearts of the people. Just let the disgusting people go. This is the education in your family. Let's educate you.

The settings are fine, but I can't stand it.