That Qiushi 1980

It's so stinky and long that I couldn't stand it until chapter 22. I just felt the same way throughout the whole process, I'm screwed.

See the latest chapter. The writing is good, but maybe I'm used to reading cool stories, so it's a bit depressing and aggrieved. I can understand the author's intention to make the plot ups and downs, but by Chapter 47, the protagonist is retired from the army early and can only be the nominal "militia company commander" of the brigade, the awkward relationship with Green Tea's ex-girlfriend, and the disgust of being stabbed in the back by his aunt despite being kind to his uncle. , Sane but frustrated caution, rejected works from past lives, malicious attacks from other brigade communes, bad but pure fellow villagers... To be honest, when I read online articles, I wanted to temporarily forget about the frustrations in life and enjoy some cheap dopamine secretion. I didn't want to really feel the "reality" of that era. I hope the author can have a "refreshing" climax every few chapters while maintaining a sense of time. The protagonist's psychological "Ah Q" will not always feel that this is nothing now and there will be a lot of opportunities in the future, but in reality he continues to suffer and be suppressed. Maybe in your writing outline, the protagonist will develop very well in the future, but you have to consider how frustrated the readers will feel when the protagonist is introduced.

It's too Q. If nothing else, just look at the motivation of the protagonist in the novel. The original owner gave him 5 yuan a month. Then after the protagonist traveled through time, he noticed that Jiang had probably changed his mind, and instead changed the monthly payment from 5 yuan to 10 yuan. Like a clown, he thought he was offering sacrifices to the goddess in a cold manner, and thought the goddess would treat him differently, but it turned out that he was just a passerby, and then he comforted himself, saying that you do yours and I will do mine. Then the heroine saw this letter and the letter of relief he wrote before, and then said wow, it's amazing, two years in the army have changed him. The protagonist is also mentioned in the novel, saying that he is currently carrying more than 300 yuan from his retirement, which is a lot of money. In the future, he can achieve financial freedom by taking some limelight, and then he provides an additional 5 yuan per month to the goddess, and then says that he is the karma. It costs 10 yuan a month for joint writing, and it costs 60 yuan for six months and half a year. This price is not cheap at all. To you, it is just a hair on the body of a cow. The starting point is high enough, there are too many trivial matters, and the suppression is too severe. To be honest, with the starting point of the protagonist, it is considered a good start in a historical novel, right? I have been suppressed all the time, being suppressed at home, and being bossed around outside. This is of course normal, but I have read novels and are all people who have been reborn. Are you here to see what you can only say is correct, but it can definitely be regarded as a bit frustrating? After that, I want to give you some advice. Is this how the superiors came to be? The protagonist feels like a pretentious Ah Q. In these few pictures, he doesn't seem to have any special abilities or any charm. He always comforts himself, I have knowledge that is so many years ahead of me, and I can make a fortune casually. Path dependency belongs to yes, it is written exactly the same as the previous book, and it is not as well-shaped as the previous book. Well, after reading it, I just felt that the protagonist is a Q

I said why this book is so smelly and long, the flowers are blooming that year, the same thing, the number of words is water every day, let's play in my mind, I have read 30 chapters and am still building canals, one word, disgusting

Ha ha! What a death! I asked you to feed me🔟 Please call me the Prophecy Emperor

I couldn't stand it anymore after reading half of it. The author's writing is fine, but the writing is very aggrieved. He likes to suffer the consequences of being a good guy, but he is aggrieved in real life. He still feels angry when reading novels, 666. I guess the author lives a happy life.

How many cowards do people have to be in real life to make the protagonist in a book so cowardly? Author, you are not writing a book seriously, you are pooping hard and disgusting readers, do you know?

Hey, have you opened a new book? I won't even look at it even if it's opened.

Still want to waste money? Dream your dream

Originally, I was thinking about finding an urban novel that I could read, which would be a good source of food, but judging from your review attitude, I feel that you will cut it off soon. My book review is here. Those of you who read it can endure it if you can. If you haven't read it, there is no need to waste your time reading this book.

After reading more than 90 chapters, I felt that everywhere I went there were people making trouble for the protagonist. The second cool point is not enough. The third plot is too slow. You guys, just figure it out.

I said why it looked so familiar, it turned out to be the author of the last novel that I died of poisoning within 3 chapters! Also, after this novel was released, the broken ditch was still being repaired. The water was flooding forever, and then the plot turned out to be about intrigues in the village, which was outrageous. Disgusting, the previous book had the same start, at least it was still pretending, but this book just stopped pretending! Eat bad money properly

I felt really uncomfortable when I saw the flowers blooming that year. They looked awesome, talked awesome, and were awesome in front of my own people. When I had conflicts with others and had conflicts, I could only aggrieve myself. Pig's feet were incapable of solving problems. It can be said that I had no strategy at all. I mainly focused on being aggrieved and incestuous.

If this movie was still a good old man, I would definitely not watch it. I will post it as proof.

The protagonist is so frustrated that after finally winning the first place in shooting, he is even more frustrated than if he didn't win. In the modern fast-paced and stressful social environment, this kind of writing that is not entertaining and irritating will not lead to good results.

It's difficult to stretch "The Legend of Shandong's Human Relations, Sophistication and Laughter in 1980" 👍👍 This is how we Shandong people are

I just finished ordering the latest chapter, and to be honest my unintelligent head is full of questions? You wrote for several days, and spent a huge amount of favors to get the news... What news can my father-in-law explain in two sentences? Is this father-in-law sick? No, I need to grow a brain, let me think about it! His father-in-law knew clearly that his daughter-in-law and son-in-law were going to Beijing to rescue him, so he just gave her a name and didn't explain everything? Does his father-in-law have a deep love for that black land? Don't want to come out? He has a grudge against his daughter? Want her daughter to go to Beijing and get fucked up? Do you think your daughter is a protective color in disguise? Is it possible that the author just wants to improve the word count and doesn't even think about logic? I don't understand it a bit, but I respect it, although I can't accept it. Respect it. Goodbye.

I was speechless when I looked at Caojiawa for a while, Dongjiawa for a while, Yang Lianhua for a while, and Han Lianhua for a while. Can I review it before publishing it? Is this an attitude towards writing a book?

Has the author ever been abandoned? The heroine is all like this

The last book was really poisonous! Groups of mentally retarded NPCs keep trying over and over again to avoid death. Come out every once in a while and then save him? ! This book is already showing signs of development😅

What you said is ironic, right? In the third golden chapter, we saw an idiot-like protagonist. Is the author underage? Is it written by a junior high school student or a high school student for elementary school students?

Your readers have gone a lot because of the last book. Change the subject. Don't write such a frustrating urban romance.

I guess Chapter 300 is about taking the college entrance examination. The previous chapter is about messing with these insects. The protagonist seems to have never met a good person. They are all stumbling blocks for him. The scum have gone to the protagonist's place.

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After reading it for a while, I felt something was wrong Then I looked at the author and it looked familiar Then I looked at the previous works. . Hmm. It tastes right.

The previous book literally turned a story about the development of the automobile industry to the rise of a great power into a turbulent book that featured office intrigues every day, scoldings, trivial matters, and in the end, the rise was only half-finished!

This book is very good, thank you to the author

Just finished watching 1981. Add more more 😁😁😁😁

I've invested a little bit in you. Come on, I enjoyed reading the last book.