Emperor of Qin

Ten chapters can't advance a single plot. They narrate the same thing over and over again. I'll say goodbye.

The protagonist is in a hurry to be reincarnated, but if the protagonist slows down, he will die?

I have read all of Chen Cang's books, from the Nine-Rank Immortal Road to the Era of Zhoutian Star Master, and the Humane Dao Immortal Dynasty. After reading several books, I feel that the author is getting more and more resting on his laurels. Most of the settings in the latter book are from the previous one. Old readers can understand it, but new readers will find it confusing. Moreover, there are too many levels in the recent books, and the maps are not changed. The gap between levels is too small, and even if the protagonist can cross levels and kill enemies, there is no sense of satisfaction. Why so many people like the ninth level, and why the mortal stream is all set in the mortal world, the spiritual world, and the fairy world, is because a large map of the Xianxia novel can accommodate up to four or five realms. In the Qi training period, you are cautious, in the foundation building period, you initially control your own destiny, in the golden elixir stage, you become a master, and in the Yuan Ying stage, you are a boss everywhere. You divided it into nine major realms. As a result, except for the spiritual light stage, which is cultivated step by step, in the soul condensation stage, although there are three stages of virtual soul, real soul, and real soul, they are basically skipped without any description. I think this will still be the case in the later stage. So what is the use of making so many settings? It is easy to cross two or three large classes to kill enemies. The result is that the reader does not feel happy. This has begun to appear in the Immortal Dynasty of Humanity. I still hope that the author can calm down and polish a book. Don't pursue quantity but pursue quality. If the next few books are at the level of the Nine-Rank Immortal Road, great gods can expect it.

Prices collapsed immediately at the beginning. . . What are the first and second levels? They are all veteran players who have written several books, and the terms are so confusing. Second-level items and levels have become a common currency for you. You can buy the bandit magic gate at will, and there are only a few second-level talismans. Are you a county policeman enough to kill them? One hundred gold is directly equivalent to tens of thousands of spirit stones. An awesome financial linkage system 🙂🙂🙂

There is a problem with this setting at the beginning. The article is about cultivating qi. What is your article? Why is it called Wenxiu? What is the attack method? You can also draw talismans, refine weapons and so on. Shouldn't this thing be easy to cultivate only when you are a god? And cultivating the gods through law is a spell, so what is the energy of this spell? Shouldn't the practice of cultivating the gods be mind power and spiritual power? Is it illusion and spiritual power? This setting of literary and legal cultivation is simply contrary to common sense, it's just nonsense! Are you doing the wrong thing with your literary and legal cultivation?

The setting is not good to read. I didn't want to read it after reading the first chapter. The author's previous book The Road to Immortality and the Road to Ninth Grade Immortal was quite interesting.

There is a problem with this introduction. Monks are supposed to be aloof. Is there a problem with being aloof?

The more I write about it, the worse it gets. At first, the 9th-grade Immortal Road was okay, but now it's about a father kneeling on his knees. . .

Throw it away like chicken ribs, tasteless food, too much explanation, 80% of one chapter is just water. There is basically no plot advancement. It seems like I didn't watch it.

The author has opened a new book, support it.

There are inconsistencies in many places, or the supporting characters seem to be incapable of thinking and cannot see other places. Only the supporting characters that the protagonist pays attention to can know, and the supporting characters that the protagonist does not know also have inexplicable ignorance.

No wonder it's limited to free, the plot is bland and boring. After reading the previous free chapters, I came to this conclusion. Also, the title introduction is really just the title introduction and has nothing to do with the content! And the younger sister and mother created have no personality charm and no positive feedback.

The concept and setting are still innovative, but the writing style is not very good, and the starting point and transition are very blunt.

Can crossing the tribulation and Hedao be interchanged? I feel Hedao is more awesome.

I looked at dozens of them and I have a question. I can't take my place, I have no intention of staying here, it's a pity to abandon it

Don't, don't repeat a sentence twice, don't repeat it twice, even if you have a beautiful scenery, a short family, or a workplace relationship, don't repeat it twice twice.

Dragon Court should not be cooperating with Da Qin. It can easily be connected with the Dragon Court Law that was established not long ago and expose the identity of the protagonist.

No, has the author done a good job setting it up? Dharma cultivation can practice demonic techniques. So can civil and martial arts be practiced at the same time? I feel that the cultivation system is very messy and has no characteristics.

Broken, there are three books from Ninth Grade to Zhoutian, Star Clan, and Humanity Immortal Dynasty. I know that the writing style is generally good but I have to read it. Now I am used to reading this book. Even though there is no climax, I can read 😭 four books of Lao Liang.

There are not many updates, and it gives people a very strange feeling. It seems that he is not good at all, but it seems that he is not good at it, but it feels like there is nothing in one chapter.

I don't understand why this book feels like a waste of food and a pity to throw away?

Change it to "The Growth of the Demonic Way". The protagonist practices his own modified demon and ghost skills. The realm is also blurred and the plot is not good.

From your profile, I can tell that you are still the emperor of humans and domineering. You are not the emperor of earth, nor the emperor of dogs.

I hope I can write about the style of the Nine-Rank Immortal Road

The subject matter seems okay, but the author's writing is too bland. The plot structure is obviously okay, but the mood seems to have no ups and downs, and it is a bit wordy.

Why are there so many quotation marks that affect the perception?

I have written 1,700,000 words. Save it.

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