The Confucian Sage of the Primordial World

The three ways of heaven, earth and man exist equally, and the establishment of the way of humanity is recognized by the great road, not the way of heaven.

Suitable for students below third grade

Is this author planning to write a prehistoric pirated version? Otherwise, you are very different, which proves that you want to create a new prehistoric era. Otherwise, you are very different. Readers, you can see for yourself. Your difference is too bad...

I always feel that it is not written in a prehistoric way, and has no flavor of the prehistoric era at all.

The protagonist is too servile. The Lich Catastrophe is the saint's action to clean up the human masters. The Three Sovereigns and Five Emperors are the means by which the saints share the fate of the human race. As a protagonist who is close to the strength of a saint, it's enough to think of ways to weaken these methods. It's enough for him to actually help others.

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The name of Confucius cannot be repeated more than a hundred times in one chapter, and the fourteenth chapter directly goes to travel to the ancient times. I am an otaku and don't like to go shopping. I just like to live in a snail's nest. Why are I running around? Are you a flat-headed brother?

There are too many grammatical errors. After you finish writing a chapter, can you read it yourself first to see if it makes sense? I feel upset after reading it.

Suggestions to the author: There are too many repeated words in the paragraph, which makes it not easy to read. For example: "I am Confucius. Now that I have become a human being, I should preach to the human race and perform the work of enlightenment." After Confucius finished speaking, he sat directly on the ground, closed his eyes, and stopped paying attention to things outside. Kong Ru's voice spread throughout the human tribe in an instant. After hearing Kong Ru's voice, the human tribe quickly became excited one by one. They stopped what they were doing and moved quickly towards Kong Ru's tribe. It has only been a year since the human race. The reputation of the fourth ancestor of the human race can be said to be very huge among the human race, and everyone is very clear about it. Although during this year, Kong Ru was in a state of cultivation and did not appear among the human race, but in the first seven days, everything Kong Ru did was directly integrated into the life of the human race. In these few days, the thunder and lightning gathering in the sky completely attracted the attention of all the human race, and Kong Ru's name was once again spread among all the human race. In this paragraph, the author uses 8 "**", and does the protagonist's personal pronoun only use the name "Kong Ru"? Don't you know how to use "he"? Both are third person, so it's easier to pronounce when used together. Don't always: Confucius…,…Confucius, and then Confucius…! Maybe you don't look at it carefully and just glance at it and you don't think it's weird, but if you listen to it with headphones, it will feel very awkward!