The Fierce Tang Dynasty General

After reading the first dozens of chapters, to be honest, I really disliked the character of the princess, which even made me have the urge to abandon the book. And judging from the comments, the princess is still dead. People who were originally unhappy with the princess may have abandoned the book, but now they are unhappy with the people who like this character. Isn't this a double-edged deal?

1. The description of battle scenes needs to be improved. I feel that the author does not seem to know much about cold weapon combat, and the performance is a bit fantasy and a bit of a trick; we can learn from the works that are generally recognized as good in this aspect; 2. The whole article so far gives me the feeling of watching an anti-war movie with the main theme. For example: it blindly emphasizes the protagonist's overly idealistic belief in defending the country in his two previous lives, and political commissar-like language appears from time to time, which seems to be divorced from reality. The premature stereotype of the protagonist will affect the future process; 3. Some plots and details are questionable. For example, the handling of portable space is a typical solution that sacrifices everyone's IQ, including the cheat-finger setting of a strange body. These are obviously preparations for the protagonist to raid and kill all directions alone in the future. This simplifies the process, reduces the difficulty of writing, and achieves the purpose of being happy and refreshing, but is this really what readers need? It is better to replace the basics with the basics and solve the problem of loyalty together with the system; Finally, don't write emotional scenes.

If you want to travel through history with just a little bit of martial arts, you can do it, but if you want to travel through history, you can't accept anything that involves systems or fantasy.

I don't know what the author was thinking. Although he didn't like the princess many times in the early stage, she would help the pig every time something happened later. She was also a woman who dared to love and hate. There must be many readers who didn't like this princess in the early stage. I don't like it either. But around chapter 100, the author directly kills the princess. You are trying to please the previous readers, but have you considered the readers who will slowly accept this princess with peace of mind. Anyway, I saw that this princess was forced to write by the author and she abandoned the book after her death. Personally, I feel that the author will definitely arrange a Tang female pig's trotter later. Maybe he was born into a noble family and was helpful to the pig's feet. But arranging the death of this princess is really heartbreaking.

After seeing Chapter 929, I just couldn't bear it anymore! I want to say a few words, the emperor is fatuous! Eunuchs are in power! Loyal ministers die! The people are in dire straits! The protagonist, a time traveler, says that the emperor's suspicion is not a reason for rebellion. The question is - is it just suspicion? Are there any loyal ministers left who worked with the protagonist? I want to ask - what is the protagonist insisting on? For the sake of the king, who wants the minister to die, the minister has to die? Are you sorry for your status as a time traveler; for the people of Tang Dynasty? But the people are in dire straits, wars continue, and the number of people is reduced by half! What is the protagonist thinking? The author wants to establish the protagonist as a capable, capable, loyal and patriotic minister! But the country is in chaos and the people are miserable! Most people in the Tang Dynasty lived miserable lives! The country will be destroyed! The protagonist hides in a corner, develops a small kingdom, and defends the ignorant king with righteousness! I'm confused! ! ! What kind of person does the author want to establish the protagonist as? ? ?

I feel that many books are not worthy of a unruly and willful woman, so I would not write them and abandon them.

Tell the truth, Chapter 2: Persuading the Author to Quit. Did you set the protagonist as a military general or a charger? In the first line, Chapter 2 showed up. A wound has healed and the scars are gone. How about leaving a scar? You see that general, with his tender skin and tender flesh. If you tell me, no one will believe that you have been on the battlefield.

The previous chapter looked good, I thought I encountered fairy grass, but unexpectedly it turned into a poisonous weed...,,, Especially when I saw chapters 113...114, Where the princess was written to death, I was not in the mood to read it, it was too poisonous! ! ! ! !

After reading a few chapters, I no longer want to read anymore! Another one with a gold finger and space, it's so fake!

In the early Tang Dynasty chapter, this book was fine, but in Tamar's book, all the mages came out at the end, which was completely random writing.