In Swallowed Star, Fusing with Linley’s Template

The brilliant creative ideas of Qidian are paired with trashy narratives. I gave you a chance, but you failed!

Such a great subject matter, how could it be written like this? Did someone fall into the sea? Do they drown if they don't swim or something?

If it's still about Earth, does it mean it can't write anything beyond Earth? Just cut it out and rewrite it.

Stellar level research on the laws of wind and sky, nb, the understanding is incredible! Also, does the original universe have a basic-level secret method of fusion of wind and sky? If so, please tell me

What is "wind and air"? Shouldn't it be "wind and time"?

Wind, thunder, and light are associated with time, right? How can they be related to space? Space is associated with the five elements (metal, wood, water, fire, and earth).

Venerable Jiufeng, the cosmic overlord of the human and werewolf races, a candidate for god general, is he alive and well and will leave behind a legacy?

Oh, ocean, you are all water! I asked you to write a fanfiction about devouring, not to copy it!

Good heavens, even the law of wind and air fusion has arrived!

There are quite a few typos, so I suggest you proofread before posting. If that doesn't work, you can get a WPS membership and use the proofreading function in WPS to correct it after you finish writing.