Fishing for the Heavens in Swallowed Star

"Under One Person, Six Treasures Immortal Thief, Death God Hogyoku? What kind of trash is this that dares to compare itself to Swallowing the Starry Sky? Can't you just start cheating from a world of the same level that you've already swallowed?"

What a brainless synopsis! The infinite evolution is just a bloodline stream ruining everything? You might as well have written that being stabbed by a Stand Arrow and learning the Stone Mask allows you to follow a gene-based path. Ultimate life forms do have brains; they truly evolve, absorbing everything they've preyed upon from their primordial cells to evolve themselves.

Generally, if a story doesn't leave Earth within 60 chapters, it's not very interesting!

Damn it, even Zi Yue and Dong Di can come out and fight the protagonist. Author, have you even read the original work?

What's most off-putting about this book is that the protagonist shouts "I'm activating my cheat system!" Right at the beginning, and he says it out loud, not silently. He even shouts it twice!

The author must still be a student, because the portrayal of the protagonist's relationship with his family feels disjointed. Given the protagonist's current status—probably among the top 100 globally—he's treated like a doormat at home. In reality, the higher one's achievements and the greater one's status at home after adulthood, the less likely they are to pull someone's ear in public.

A relatively mature and complete worldview like this is ideal for fanfiction. It's best to assimilate it; don't try to create something else entirely. Trying to create something else is like comparing apples and oranges – utterly meaningless.

Devouring, Immortality, Saint King, Dragon Talisman—don't bother with low-level cheats. Low-level martial arts are also unacceptable. Either play with concepts (even those that grow with your own abilities), or use items several levels higher than your own, or you have exceptional comprehension. Otherwise, you'll never even get a piece of the action.

The training camp was somewhat interesting at the beginning, but became completely pointless and tasteless afterward. The so-called "effortless mastery" and "effortless mastery" were just pure skill-based things. You can learn tons of those things once you enter the universe, so why waste time trying to understand them on Earth?

The latest two chapters are a bit far-fetched. The breakthrough to true godhood, the evolution of the divine kingdom, and the evolution of the laws of chaos all take place within the divine kingdom/mini-universe, and you even created a phantom image! The evolution of laws is a unique opportunity for everyone who can break through to true godhood—it's like a one-time private lesson.