Looking North from Yuanjia

The latest plot is unreliable. It should be a product of the environment. Jiaozi was born only because of the trade conditions in the Song Dynasty. It's not like someone only thought of this thing in the Song Dynasty. In the environment of the Southern and Northern Dynasties, if you live today and will be gone tomorrow, how could Jiaozi become popular, not to mention that the protagonist's current status is too low, with a few shabby settlements and a county governor endorsing paper currency. I feel that this plot is still a bit too taken for granted. Let's see how the author handles it later.

In the second half of the 25th year, under the guidance of a group of outstanding authors, a number of excellent works about the Southern and Northern Dynasties began to emerge. The content of this book so far, I personally think, is above average among historical novels in the past year or two. 🎭 Character design: The protagonist belongs to the Du family of Jingzhao Prefecture. He is currently working as an official in the border area. His behavior is logical and his outlook on life is normal. He has not committed any controversial behavior yet. ✒️ Writing style: I personally think it is fresh and elegant, without any pretentious content. Although I did not compose ancient poems by myself, the application of poems fits the plot and gives people a natural feeling. 🎬 Plot: The plot is smooth and there are not many logical errors. The whole story is very smooth and does not exceed the limitations of the characters in the era. Good review, this is a historical book worth recommending. I hope it can keep this status. If there are no eunuchs who write more books, it may be the next rising star in historical content.

It looks pretty good, there are no major problems, and the writing is pretty good to read. However, during the Southern and Northern Dynasties, paper money or deeds were promoted. Will the audience really accept it? Do people who use their property to do business not consider the risks? This would be okay in peacetime, but if it was a pioneer in the Northern and Southern Dynasties, would the people at that time be able to accept it? Why should the protagonist, a low-ranking official, be trusted by others? The endorsement of the Du family is not that useful.

It's quite good-looking. It's probably the starting point of the reincarnation of the great man from outside the world. The writing style is smooth and natural. I finally saw a book written by a human being.

I don't understand how many authors use AI to write according to templates and make the protagonist a fool.

There is really no need to add a historical paragraph at the end of each chapter. Originally, there are only a few words in one chapter and the plot is slow, so retelling it in classical Chinese will make it look even better.

It's a solid start, the writing is good, and it's worth collecting.

I don't like deleting book reviews, but the book friend who made the suggestion obviously has some book friends who haven't read the book at all and just want to show off their profound knowledge. I will explain it out of a responsible attitude. 1. It is not Jiaozi, but I borrowed the concept of Jiaozi, but I know very well that the time points in the book cannot be fulfilled, so don't worry; 2. The Lantian Ticket plays the role of connecting plot forces and bets; 3. It is not done without logic in a few chapters. This is a long-term plot that will not have any effect until later in the book.

Isn't it a pseudo-historical style?

It's manageable, but the pace is slow in the first ten chapters, and the writing gets better as you go on. After twenty chapters, it starts to feel a bit like a provocative novel. I feel like in Chapter 16 or 7, I compressed the plot and accelerated it, and I was conquered all at once.

The introduction style is funny and has nothing to do with tradition.

I looked at this book and sighed three times after reading it three times: I was astonished when I read it the first time, I was stunned when I read it the second time, and I burst into tears after reading it the third time! Which one? I wish I didn't meet you when we were young, and I wish everyone in the world could see it! If such a wonderful book is only hidden in a corner and only few people know about it, wouldn't it be the greatest injustice in the literary world? ! I don't care about my face now, running around and shouting, just to make more like-minded people not to pass by this masterpiece! If you don't agree with it after reading it, just come and scold me; if you are so impressed after reading it, please spread the word to your colleagues so that the pearl will no longer be covered in dust!

Yes, the writing is good, the logic is online, and it is in line with the times.

Can't it be set directly?,

Good looking, please read "Chen Shang Sword Journey"!

Is there Shennong? How about it? I'm too thin to look at it.

The monthly vote has been cast, please keep writing and don't stop updating.

The cruel reality of that era must also be written down.

Let's change the introduction. Dry and unattractive is a bit old-fashioned 🙂

It's so well written, and that's the pace.