
Naruto: From the Start, I Destroyed Konoha
火影:开局毁灭木叶
- Status
- Ongoing
- Length
- 175k Words
- Genre
- Light Novel
- Subgenre
- ACG Fanfiction
- Updated
- 1d ago
- Source
- Qidian
Synopsis
78Chapters
95Votes
567Recs
43Fans
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Reader comments 30
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Just read the introduction? At the peak of Konoha, wasn't it the period when Uchiha Madara and Senju Hashirama were there? During the third generation, they were beaten every day
A bit like this
Survive those who want to die the most, kill those who want to live the most, the most optimistic die in the most miserable way, the strongest die in the most shameful way, the proudest one kneels down to beg for mercy, the brightest person sinks into cruelty, the most self-respecting person loses all face. The most selfish one sacrifices for the sake of justice, The most sincere one is buried by lies, The most fearful one suffers the punishment of Ling Chi. The most calculating person has a backlash, The most protected person dies on the spot, The most lonely person seeks reunion, The most greedy person lives a life of poverty, The person who values the most important relationship becomes a demon and eats his relatives. Write about the bravery of the coward before death, Write about the powerlessness of the strong as he watched his friends die one by one, Write about the little sister who was most afraid of pain when she died, covered with scars, but said nothing, Write about the betrayer's last loyalty, Write about the most narcissistic and proud one, who usually shouted, everyone's eyes should be on me, and finally died in a deserted corner. Write about the person who has the most face, and in the end, like a dog, he knelt down and begged to spare his companion. Write about the man who kept talking about how to live after victory, and finally fell before dawn. The youngest one finally said in front of a pile of tombstones, I am older than you all now. Leave one more protagonist half-dead and all readers will be satisfied.
While I haven't written much yet, let me say a few words.
The most important thing about a simulation novel is the idea. You can boldly try the plot without any reason. The gimmick of destroying Konoha is full of it, and it can be seen that a lot of effort has been put into it. Although there are some plots that are deus ex machina and controlled by God's will, overall it is very good. Looking back is a kaleidoscope, the ability is perception and curse. At this point, many people say that you are overpowering, but I believe that you, the author, have your own ideas. Maybe this skill set will be of great use later, but the rhythm in the current online environment is not like this. What everyone sees is fast pace and fun. The difficult part is not the plot, not how to upgrade the protagonist, but being able to keep writing while having fun, at least you can't cut it openly. Okay now, the beautiful three-axe is established. You have completed a very important task in your first simulation, completed a big job, won the first place on the Hokage's must-eat list, Tsunade, and received a reward for completing the task. The upcoming crisis is to deal with real people who have acquired simulated memories. Then let's take a look at what is the final reward after such a big job, so long preparations, painstaking efforts step by step, and using one's body as bait to plot against everyone? Oh Senju Uchiha bloodline, the Uchiha bloodline side is a kaleidoscope, and the Senju side may be upgraded with Hashirama cells in the future. So what are the abilities of this kaleidoscope? Oh, one is perception plus mind reading, and the other is curse. The left and right eyes can be used together to precisely curse the enemy to gain advantage in battle. You must know that Naruto fans either don't write Sharingan. If they write Sharingan, the unique ability of self-awakening is one of the important and exciting points. How good the idea is and whether it is enjoyable or not will completely determine whether the power configuration can make readers buy it. To put it bluntly, this is not the configuration of the protagonist, and the effort and reward are not proportional. Whether you want to suppress the combat power, or have arrangements for this ability configuration, the final result is an anticlimax, and it takes a long time to hold it in for something that can hardly satisfy the reader.
I can't stand this type of simulator article, which is all about simulators and has almost no real-life plot. In fact, the rewards after the simulation are not important at all, because the next simulation will be carried out immediately, and the cycle will repeat, simulating for the sake of simulation. What exactly does this kind of simulator article that is full of simulations hit these readers? Don't understand
I can destroy peak Konoha, but I still need Uchiha and Senju bloodlines?
After getting high-profile, it starts to suppress the combat power. The kaleidoscope can give a close-range Byakugan + Kagura Heart's Eye, which is comparable to the two-pillar kaleidoscope.
It's a simulator, and it's reality. Can you please stop doing this weird thing and just simulate it? Give it a plug-in and it will be disabled.
Grain and grass can be read
Appraisal completed In summary, there are three advantages and two disadvantages. Advantages: 1. The settings are quite rigorous and there are no inconsistencies. 2. I have never seen a Naruto story written on a simulator before. The advantage of the simulator is that the main line is clear and it will basically not be interrupted or unfinished. 3. The protagonist's IQ is online and has a clear purpose from beginning to end. He is not just a fun person or a cerebellum controlling the brain. Disadvantages: 1. The connection feels a bit strange, which doesn't matter to people who like to read quickly. It's influential if it takes ten minutes to read a chapter like me, but there are probably not many who are as slow as me. 2. Same as advantage 23, some people don't like simulators, some people just like the protagonist as a pure fun person, it all depends on personal preference. Summary: It's a new theme that I haven't seen for a long time. In fact, I was looking forward to Xiaonan becoming a yandere in the introduction. It's readable.
It took me a long time to set up the hydrological setting of the simulator again.
Your simulation process is so detailed that I personally wrote it for you. It's so tiring to read. Shouldn't the simulation skip life and get rewards directly?