Do You Want to Be My Capture Target Too?

Author, can you close your eyes when typing? I have a virginity complex and don't want to read second-hand words.

Even if you want to attack your younger sister, shouldn't it be enough to just kiss her? The sisters actually want it together, how brave they are! The key is not to let go of their mummies. They are so naive and must be criticized carefully.

That's great, the perfect male protagonist, versatile (cooking, filming, singing, studying), high IQ, high EQ, handsome, good physical strength, caring and gentle

There are a lot of things I want to write, and I have buried a lot of points, such as how Su Wan will wrap up the plot, and how his sister will take on the role of the heroine... Those who like a faster pace will most likely not be able to accept such a long run, because it seems that the progress is not going well so far, and many plots are just daily stories The most likely person who cannot accept it It's probably the character of the male protagonist. To be honest, I'm a little disgusted. The society's shrewdness is too strong, but it makes the subject matter that should be light-hearted become inexplicably heavy. Moreover, his words are childish and pretending to be mature. For example, in the paragraph about rejecting Su Yao, I also commented on it. The preaching cannot support the plot and will only increase the discomfort. Of course, I didn't criticize this kind of writing that contains personal information. After all, it is normal for literary youth to be written in a way and, with this kind of male protagonist, the explosive points of the plot of Shen QG chasing her husband will be much smaller. Because the male protagonist himself has a purpose, the emotional gap will not be that big. In other words, it will not make people feel stomachache or feeling Come on, if the outline allows, perhaps adjusting the male protagonist's character will make it more acceptable to readers. Oh, by the way, the senior has done a good job. Although the progress is too fast, the combination of senior + pure love + high basic favorability + weak gravity can hit 80% of the readers.

The sparse shadows are slanting across the clear and shallow water, and the faint fragrance is floating in the moonlight at dusk.

It feels like I'm back more than ten years ago

The author is a bit ambitious to write about so many mothers.

Has the introduction of this book been changed? I remember it was not like this before...

✒️Writing: The writing is good and very logical. 🎬 Plot: The plot is quite typical, a routine template 🎭 Character design: Each female character has her own characteristics

Some small details are unreasonable, but others are fine