A Mortal’s Journey: Cultivating the Arts of Mount Shu

In addition to using a bit of the setting of Shushan, this book is actually still a nanny style in essence At the beginning, when meeting the supporting role, I covered it up a little, but when I met Han Li, he immediately transformed into a money-spreading boy A mortal is already an underworld cultivator, and the protagonist has no trace of a mortal, does not cover up treasures, does not speak to the door, and has great value for resources Without evaluation, pills that can enhance two realms are sent out like sheep shit balls In today's Internet universe, if you change to a black-spot world of cultivation, your soul will be searched hundreds of times on the first day of landing The problem is that Shushan is not an innocent world of Datong cultivators, so it created such a protagonist. So, to put it bluntly, it is a templated nanny flow. If the golden finger is replaced, it will be the same. Even if there is a 10,000 times critical hit system, the content will be the same, and the homogeneity is serious

Awesome, there are too many flaws in the Bloody Forbidden Land and Nangong Wan, and the author is invincible. Why can't he write it well and choose the way of writing that has the most contention? Seriously, I suggest you change it.

Since they all have pseudo-spiritual roots, why not just use the five spiritual roots? What's left is to practice the Shushan method and balance the five elements.

I couldn't stand it any longer. I was confused when I saw it. I really couldn't understand the protagonist's operation. If you want to bring Nangong Wan and Han Li together, then there are not enough boiled egg materials for Han Li to collect in the Bloody Forbidden Land. This is the normal process. If you want to accept Nangong Wan, then let the protagonist do it. The character follows Han Li's process. If you don't want to recruit Nangong Wan or win over her, then write that Nangong Wan got rid of Mo Jiao by herself, but the protagonist's operation is like Pan Jinlian stunning Wu Dalang, and then Ximen Qing came and went crazy to steal Wu Dalang's sesame cakes.

Seeing that the Bloody Forbidden Land could not hold on any longer, the author acted on both sides of the fence, offending both sides.

When I saw the plot of Forcing Mo Jiao and the whole Xin Ruyin dragging oil bottle, I was very confused. You practice the Shushan method. You don't practice it well and don't focus on accumulating merits. What are you doing? You have practiced the Baiyang True Knowledge and you are just a fledgling cultivator. And this and that feeling of being more powerful than the human Yuanying. In turn, you forcibly robbed Nangong Wan. It's inexplicable. You don't know that Shushan has to guarantee a virginity before becoming an immortal? The big guys in Shushan have to reincarnate and become cultivators. Why are you going around playing with women?

From Forbidden Land to the current writing of 2 Save Nangong, the protagonist created is like a singer in a brothel who talks about selling her art but not her body, and the pure and good leader in the club. Pretend to be noble and talk about not touching women. As a result, I met Nangong Wan in the forbidden area. He knew clearly that there was a trap, but he didn't run away and wanted to get closer. Forcibly pull the whole relationship. Then the cool operation came 1. I also know the method of cultivating immortals in Shushan, it is best not to break Yuanyang. 2. Even though I knew there was a vaginal cyst, I still didn't make it clear when I was reminded. Then when Nangong Wan was poisoned and pulled the protagonist, the protagonist was still there saying that it was a human robbery. Just because of your saucy operation, I said you are a Litai, do you admit it or not? What are they writing about, and when I was able to run away, I happened to meet Nangong Wan who was being hunted, and happened to attract the Yuanying old monster, and played tricks in front of the Yuanying old monster. Are you, the protagonist, qualified to practice the Shushan method? Is it worthy?

The small head controls the big head, I can only say this, or the author himself has a repressed personality, a single dog, and has never touched a woman.

The second one is poisonous. Practicing Shushan Kung Fu and fighting with demon cultivators will pollute your own magic power.

He was poisoned to death, which was fine at first, but I had to make up the plot. One Nangong Wan can be poisoned twice. I thought he was Shushan Sword Immortal, but he turned out to be a bastard. Especially when Yuan Ying came after him and asked if he wanted to go together, is it possible that the opposite teleportation array was disabled due to the butterfly effect? He was so calm and asked twice, are you being hunted? You have opened God's perspective! Who doesn't run away in embarrassment when being hunted?