Among the Tombs, I Am the Chief of the Xieling Raiders

The Tomb Raider Chronicles are full of old silver coins. If you were to write a Tomb Raider Chronicles story for Ghost Blows Out the Light, you'd at least need to know how to set up a plot and break through obstacles. Even if you don't, you should at least be able to use the backend system.

The first few chapters were too intense. The protagonist encountered Hu Bayi and not only gave him money but also helped Hu Bayi's friend find a job. The most outrageous thing was that he even wanted to rob tombs with Hu Bayi. Someone you've only known for two or three days invites you to go tomb raiding? And Hu Bayi actually agreed? Unsolicited kindness is always suspicious.

I've read 170 chapters and here are my thoughts: the writing is decent, with no major logical flaws. The downside is the weak flow; for example, the tomb raiding process, which should have been described in detail, is only briefly mentioned, losing its tension and excitement.

The author's idea is quite good. Unlike other tomb raiding fanfictions that marginalize the tomb raiding trio to highlight the protagonist, turning them into mere atmosphere-building duo, those fanfictions make the protagonist seem like an all-rounder. But the essence of tomb raiding is teamwork. If the protagonist is omnipotent, what's the point of teaming up? One person is enough.

Starting from the Jingjue Ancient City, it felt like a completely different author wrote it. When Fatty saw Hei Xiazi, he took a musket, which I just didn't understand. There were so many guns at the Kwantung Army fortress, why didn't he take one? The protagonist isn't without a personal space, and he's a transmigrator who knows how dangerous tomb raiding is, so why didn't he take a gun? Is it better to fight zombies and monsters with bare hands?

I added this book to my bookshelf halfway through reading it and have been following it ever since. I'd like to share my thoughts briefly. Author, please take a look and use what you find useful. If you don't, just ignore what I said. These are just my personal opinions, so please be gentle with your criticism.

Judging from the title, I thought the protagonist would be the leader of the Unloading Ridge faction, leading his brothers into tombs. Unexpectedly, the system chose Unloading Ridge for him. If you were already a descendant of Unloading Ridge and had a choice system, that would be fine. But in the first choice, he chose the most ordinary Unloading Ridge. Anyway, I have no desire to continue reading. Writing a book is not easy; I hope the author's writing improves.

I have no idea what the author is writing. It's all so idiotic, with characters dragging their feet and being indecisive. Is this some kind of detective novel?

In terms of writing style, the author's writing style is quite perfect. The problem now is that the plot is neither detailed enough when it should be detailed enough, nor concise enough when it should be concise enough, and the plot is incomplete. What does "tailless" mean? The first part isn't finished yet.

I can't keep reading. First, it's too padded. Maybe the author wanted to plant foreshadowing, but you should at least tell a good story first. Second, the updates are too slow. It took almost a month to write "Catching a Spider," I can't keep up anymore. See you later.