Chronicles of Strange Happenings in the Mountains

The protagonist's name is inconsistent, sometimes Liu Qiang, sometimes Li Zhi, and there's no clear consensus on what he should be called. The author is not serious about writing books and is irresponsible to readers and even more irresponsible to himself.

Dude, do you think the protagonist would encounter so many things in the time it takes to eat a bowl of noodles? You're probably messing up the pacing. Furthermore, modern novels no longer feature plots where the protagonist is coerced. It's not that entering official organizations is forbidden, the main problem is that you don't write it as if the protagonist is being threatened to enter.

Excellent world-building Plot History History of Character Portrayal

Couldn't you have checked and polished it before serving? It has so many minor flaws, the plot is too clichéd, and it likes to act mysterious and keep things hidden.

The protagonist possesses secret manuals left by his grandfather and Li Tengjiao. Learning them would be far better than going to the official level. Why insist on using the old man threatening the protagonist to advance the plot? What era are we living in? They still write like this! 🤮🤮🤮 One minute he says he wants a peaceful life, the next he gets scared and goes into the mountains to rescue people. Li Tengjiao is so powerful, I don't believe the manuals don't contain a solution! 😅

Such an old writing style, I almost thought I had traveled back 20 years.

Handwritten text is not AI text; AI doesn't have as many typos and grammatical errors.

It's a pity they had to bring Ren Yingying in to advance the plot; she just slipped away.

This is so well-written, it's not AI-generated. I don't know why there are so few comments. This story could definitely be adapted into a TV series and become as popular as Ghost Blows Out the Light.

50 Images, not a single flaw. This is better than any platinum-level player.