The Corpse-Driving Craftsman

When I saw Chapter 9, I couldn't stand it any longer. I could see that the author's level was good, but overall it was quite satisfactory and there was nothing new for the time being. Newbies might find it pretty good, but I think I have a higher threshold. It looked a bit boring. But no matter what, I hope the author will work hard. After all, I still hope that more people can write in the suspense and supernatural category.

Wow wow wow the third part is finally out

The top 10 novels I have read in my life. I started reading them in junior high school and now in high school, I have finally waited for the third one. The public screen was used to make me cry 😭

Prepare to save up to watch 😍 Don't dare to watch too much at one time

It turned out to be an extraterrestrial demon? I was immediately attracted within a few pages of the first chapter. The writing is extraordinary and the dialect elements are also very approachable. Even if the reader is not from Sichuan and Chongqing, it seems to be the potential of the second "Corpse Man".

The third part is finally out. When will the boy's name be announced🤔 (although we already know it's Ting Gong)

I always feel that the plot is a bit watered down compared to the previous two films. It is becoming more and more fantasy and not as scary as before. I suggest you improve the content.

Hurry up and update, Brother Yang, it's not enough to watch

Is there any more plot about the author Xiaoyang?

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Brother Yang, Brother Yang, here I come 😁

16 Years of Three Corpse Talk 21 Years of Yin Yang Craftsman 26 Years of Corpse Exorcist Isn't this guy really going to write more novels after choosing the leader?

I don't know why, Xiaoyang can't write as wonderful scene descriptions and character descriptions as the first one. In the first part, the scene description is simple but very atmospheric. From the weird ghost hitting the wall to the cold basement, every scene is very immersive. I think the most critical reason for this is the point-to-point description, which only describes the weird places and leaves other details to the reader's imagination. The actions and psychology of the characters all serve the rhythm of the plot. The action is scary but not cumbersome, and the psychological horror is not bloated. Moreover, the first and second parts are both better. What happened is separated from the subsequent interpretation and analysis. The advantage of this is that the rhythm of the plot is not affected at all, and the step-by-step suspense solving and plot advancement will not appear to be slow. Therefore, I think this film should be improved from these aspects: 1. Delete too life-like descriptions. For example, if you hit Mr. Peng with a stone, you can change it to picking up the stone and throwing it with your hand. Then simplify the psychological description and highlight the purpose of doing so, which is to wake Mr. Peng up. 2. Place the characters' psychological activities that require careful analysis after large sections of scene descriptions and action descriptions. Because this movie doesn't have a demon guardian like Zhang Hazi, and it doesn't have craftsmanship to solve the puzzle, so this movie should pay more attention to the rhythm of the plot. If the rhythm is slow, it will look boring. To sum up, the most important thing is that Ting Gong is smart and sensible, which cannot be reflected solely by bloated and repetitive psychological descriptions and narrations. The reason why Ting Gong is so awesome in the first part is all reflected by contrast. But since this is a prequel, we need to think carefully about how to describe Ting Gong's power from the front. For example, the description at the end of the first part where the kid is revealed to be carrying the coffin is very good. Since there are many characters on the scene, bloated psychological descriptions have been greatly reduced, and instead character dialogues and actions are used to advance the rhythm of the plot.

The plot is quite satisfactory, neither good nor bad, nothing new and nothing poisonous. But the characters, language, and horror atmosphere are almost uninteresting. It has always been emphasized that the protagonist is sensible but has a tragic fate. To be honest, I got tired of watching it. I could still sympathize with it at the beginning. Later, I repeatedly said that the protagonist is sensible and miserable. It happened too many times and I got tired of it. It felt like a lump in my throat. Also, the words in the book are probably from the Hunan dialect. To be honest, they don't read well and affect the perception. I'm from Yunnan, and I can understand roughly the dialects of Sichuan, Guiyu and Chongqing, but when I read the dialects in the book, I felt stuck. I could understand them, but it just wasn't smooth. It would probably be even more uncomfortable for readers who are not from the southwest region. Finally, the scary atmosphere also feels bad. I can't tell what it feels like, but I always feel it's not scary enough.

I am also a student now, and the first time I came into contact with a novel was Brother Yang's Three Corpses. I have to say that Brother Yang's writing is really good. I remember that I was very attracted when I first read it. I read it as soon as I had time. During the last 2.3 Days of the summer vacation, I read Yang Ge's novel on my phone. I listened to it when my eyes were tired, and read it when I was tired of listening. I finished it in just one week. I later learned that there was a second part, so I caught up on it on the 6th. It took me a long time to finish it, and I also entered the book at a good time. Just a year later, I found out that Brother Yang had offline activities and was going to write the third part. I was also very excited. I will definitely go to meet Brother Yang offline when I have the opportunity I hope Brother Yang is in good health!

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After reading thirty chapters, it can be said that there is no progress in the plot. The protagonist has no ability to fight against ghosts at all. The dialogue in the accent is too slow and not interesting. It is not fun or scary. I think this kind of opening story can be solved in a night or two. I keep wandering around during the day and at night, taking Mr. Peng around. The main plot is completely invisible. I really can't stand it anymore.

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In the first three chapters, the protagonist's name is not even revealed. It's just a boy. He's a boy. It's outrageous.

Dear Teacher Luo:                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                           but the most arbitrary and unreasonable things in this world said. You are the extraneous branch in my stable years, and the sun, moon and stars in my ordinary life. Whether it's the sunrise in the morning, a nap at noon, or a night filled with stars, I want to spend it with you. Don't doubt why I like you, just like fish fall in love with the sea, birds fall in love with the sky, I don't quite understand what this means, I think it's like breathing, no need to practice, just because it's you. By the way, if you have any more articles, please remember to post them.

It's been 26 years, and you're still doing that trick of pretending to be a pig and eating the tiger.

King Gugu is here to report! ! !

I also accidentally came across this novel by the author. It was quite scary, a bit tense, and the pace was very good. It's a pity that it was too short and I finished reading it in just a few days. I was just checking my homework to see if there were any other novels, and I came across Three Corpses. What did you say about the Three Corpses Language? Just after one round ended, another round started. Not even a day had passed, and it felt like there were true, false, false, true, false, true, true, false, true, false, true, true, false, true, false, true, false, true, false, true, true, false, false, true, true, false, true, false, true, false, true, true, false, true, false, true, true, false, true, false, true, true, false, true, true, false, true, false, true, true, false, true, true, false, true, true, false, true, true, false, true, true, false, true, true, false, true, true, false, true, false, true, true, false, true, false, true, true, false, true, true, false, true, true, false, true, true, false, true, true, false, true, true, false, true, true, false, true, true, false, true, true, false, true, true. Then, when comparing the two works, we can see the author's progress, and the rhythm of "The Exorcist" is very good. After all, a long time has passed since the last film, and the points of view were different then and now. Very understanding. The subject matter is very novel and the story logic is good. You are the best writer of supernatural novels in recent years.

I don't want to say more

I still have one word. Resurrection Ling Jiang

It's like bumping into ghosts all the way to the finale, I'm speechless

I am a loyal fan of Three Corpses. From what I have seen so far, the overall plot has the style of Three Corpses. I like it very much, but I hope that the details in the plot are not too outrageous. It is okay for a 10-year-old child to be very smart, but don't be too smart when dealing with supernatural events. Readers' fear will be greatly reduced, and it will be like eating fried chicken without beer. Then please carefully set the strength that a 10-year-old child should have in terms of physics. Why can he still carry a coffin with Mr. Peng? Then when the coffin was pressed on the child, Mr. Peng pushed the coffin and plowed a ditch directly. I can't imagine what kind of power this is, so I can't imagine what kind of scene it is. It is these two suggestions that I hope will be seen by the author. 1 Please don't make 10-year-old children too smart, at least not too smart when facing supernatural events. 2 Please carefully set the physical strength that a 10-year-old child should have

The main text "Three Corpses" is also ready to be put on Qidian. It's super good-looking.

There are too many details, maybe I want to write a masterpiece. After reading too many cool articles, I really don't have the patience to read this stuff. Simple things are made complicated through description. One thing is delayed for too long.

I asked, is it necessary for this sensible person to keep talking about it? He said it several times in one chapter, and it always shocked people. Did you learn this way from the corpse collectors? That book keeps writing about their status over and over again. Don't you feel uncomfortable?