I Become a God Through Folk Games

Author, your writing style is not as good as that of the game console author. Don't copy blindly. The first thing you need to know is that in addition to what readers want to read, there are also things that readers should never read! ! ! The author of Game Console is already on his fourth book, and compared to ordinary people, he should have certain attainments and understanding in the field of classical mythology before writing a book. Therefore, you cannot compare with his writing skills and skills. However, his first, second and third early books have problems with plot rhythm, super stream of consciousness in the middle and later stages, and too much space to introduce non-plot content. He has experienced it, so you should not step on these pitfalls. Basically you can pass. What you need to prioritize now is that there are no problems with characterization, writing, and plot rhythm, and that you should expand yourself by reading more.

(My folk game console) He started as a corpse stitcher They all entered the game The writing was okay But the fighting and fighting techniques were too bland Basically there were not many fighting and fighting scenes I don't know what your book will be like

I've almost read the latest chapter, and I feel that the protagonist's mentality is wrong. Although he has some abilities, he doesn't have much, and he feels a bit condescending.

The writing is good, the writing is imaginative, and the protagonist has to find ways to learn other things besides making incense. He doesn't want to think of other ways after being rejected once. In the game world, the protagonist can spend money, beg people, or use his knowledge in exchange.

Apart from the Qidian official and the author, I am the first post. I want to be a real veteran and follow the author. Liu Ming is not a good friend.

The villain is a bit witty. There are not many characters who have a neutral attitude towards the protagonist. As long as there is no continuous kindness to the protagonist, they will fall into the villain camp, and the end will not be good. The rhythm is not very good. Some places are very confusing and long-winded, and some places are very fast. Is the author misogynistic? He has only updated more than 130 chapters, but most of the supporting characters who appear in the book are female, and most of them have a bad attitude towards the male protagonist. It feels very subtle. I feel that the protagonist is very arrogant, and some of his actions are illogical. He just comes up with one idea at a time, and there is no sense of continuous development and gradual growth.

The writing is good but there are few updates🙂🙂

When I first entered the game, the first story was so boring.

Author, your story has a good sense of immersion, but the pace is too slow.

Does anyone really call a cousin a cousin?