Marvel: Draw Atomic Breath at the Beginning

What kind of happy power does this system actually collect? I'm so fucking funny, even if we don't use our brains to watch it, we won't be so insincere.

The conversation with the system at the beginning is unbearable.

There is too much bullshit in the system. If you write this just to improve the word count, then just pretend I didn't say it.

I don't understand the main character's behavior, it's like a primary school student and I want to scold him directly.

There is something wrong with the introduction. The Chitauri soldier pointed his gun at the protagonist, and then he remembered a voice, "Ding, the Great Carousel of All Realms is at your service." This sentence was enough to kill him several times.

How can you write this kind of novel for people? Can you read it yourself? Don't imitate adults in writing books.

Is it a Renaissance? Who is watching this bragging and spanking system?😰

I can no longer read novels like this. A passionate young man risked a nuclear explosion to save the American people who were in dire straits. Afterwards I was bullied. 🙂🙂🙂

Nowadays, it is rare to find someone who can talk to the system.

Just write a new book with a dialogue system. Not many normal people can read this kind of novel now.

Was this written by that primary school student?

The biggest problem is that the protagonist's power has increased dozens of times, his speed has increased dozens of times, and he has more skills. But you tell me it's no different than before. He still fights back and forth. Everyone has 50-50 skills, right? Dozens of times the speed of sound plus the amplification of the rabbit talisman to achieve this, I can't even put my brain down.

I could still see it at first, but the back was exposed and my knees were weak.

Author, are you trying to compete for the throne of my milk dragon by writing such a treacherous article?😡

I thought my writing was bad enough until I read this book

It's been years since I've seen a book with such white writing 😂

The system talks a lot of rubbish, even though it knows that Hydra is still being tricked by Hydra, it still refuses to settle the score. The protagonist's combat power is the same as the decorations, and even a space grenade can't deal with it.

Can you please stop writing pig's feet in such a childish way? We are all adults. What kind of happy power does Tongzi collect? This is too poisonous.

It feels like I'm trapped in an infinite void...

The writing style is not as good as that of primary school students. It ranks last among primary school students. I don't blame the author. Which NC editor recommended it to Daily Guide?

Why are you here and not anymore🍅

There are plots of Hell Godzilla fighting the Living Tribunal, Singularity Godzilla and Reality Control Thanos fighting each other, in the future

I've tasted it, it's super sweet and very tangy, don't look at it.

Although I read a lot of negative reviews in the comments first. However, because I was more interested in this kind of subject, I clicked in and read it. I saw The Amazing Spider-Man and Gwen, and I thought it was okay. I guess the author also saw comments saying that talking to the system was silly. In the middle and later stages, there were a lot less such dialogues, and the plot was well connected and I could follow it. It's not really that poisonous. Put it on the bookshelf first. Come on

I can understand that liberal arts students are scumbags in science, but if you don't understand the author, you can ask Ai. The starting weight, thrust and explosive speed make me bored. This data is too contradictory and the experience is very poor. I hope the author can pay attention to it.

The artistic content of this book is too high Belonging to the most abstract abstract painters in the world, after reading it, they all had to sigh: "This is too abstract!"

Don't go into martial arts, fantasy, or domestic movies, TV series, mythology, etc. If you want to write American comics, go for American comics. Even if you go into horror or apocalypse, it's fine. If you write about foreign countries, just write about foreign countries. Don't talk about domestic ones. It's too dramatic!

No, I just want to say, if you don't grab the Infinity Stones, how can you save Tony Stark?

A happy story, very good.

OK, the appraisal is completed. The writing is terrible, but it is very funny. It feels like twenty years ago. I miss it.