Marvel: Starting with the Sparkling Fruit

If a new author doesn't know how to write an introduction, you can read the introduction of this book. Yes, this is a negative teaching material.

This introduction feels like the novels I have read in Luzi before.

The latest plot is no longer worth looking forward to. It has no rhythm at all. It feels like the author himself doesn't know how to write it. I found that the common problem of many authors in Qidian is like this. If the book has some achievements, they will crazily fill it with water. I wish I could write thousands and tens of thousands of chapters in a book, and just rely on one book to make ends meet. Sometimes the author himself doesn't even know what he is writing. This book is okay overall. There are not many books to read in Marvel recently. It started to fall off a cliff after establishing its power. There were only a few people and there was no big territory, and it started to rival the Emperor. To be honest, it was very low. His subordinates were inexplicably loyal, as if they were ill. He found a bunch of female subordinates, and then started all kinds of ambiguities, renting a house and going to school with the girl he just met. Is the author showing off his depression? If you don't know how to write it, just start a unified war and open up the multiverse. Who wants to read the obscene things written by a little virgin like you?

When I saw the artificial sun, I was a little confused. The author didn't think that oil was only used as an energy source 🙂

Let you write an introduction, not an outline

I just want to ask, what kind of incredible brain circuit can prompt the protagonist to waste a precious fruit slot to eat a thunder that overlaps with his own ability as much as 90% on the premise of having the ability to shine. If you eat a fantasy beast species, you can continue to increase the value or eat a I can understand if the Superman type strengthens the mechanism, but why do you want to eat a natural type, or a thunder fruit that overlaps with Winky? , No one who has seen Pirates can come up with such a useless combination of abilities, and they also say that the Surgery Fruit and Darkness Fruit abilities are of no use to him and are not necessities. Why, the electromagnetic ability of Thunder is a necessity with a high upper limit, so can the Gravity Fruit, which can also be forged. Refining the body, the fruit of surgery is still a noble space system, and the dark fruit can also develop black hole gravity. To be honest, what the author wrote before is okay, but the logic of this wave of fruit selection is completely incomprehensible. Of course, if he is going to be a magnetic field maniac later, just pretend that I didn't say it

With this system, Marvel can only get by. It's really not possible to play high-end games.

After reading the introduction, there is no need to read the content because they are exactly the same

What the hell are you writing? Natasha is not from S. H. I. E. L. D.

True light speed kick: blast the planet with one kick, super light speed kick: kick the enemy away 😂

The author is great, this subject matter is very good, but the ability to create characters needs to be improved 1. As a person who wants to establish a power, the protagonist's personal charm and convincing power as a leader are currently not seen 2. The protagonist who established the power did not build a future blueprint (long-term goals and short-term goals) for his subordinates. There is no goal. The strong can gather people, but they cannot retain them. Small circles rely on friendship to survive for a long time, while large forces are bound to become disorganized, infighting, and divided. Your force can suppress resistance, but it cannot fill the confusion in everyone's hearts. 3 Failure to show faith: A very powerful protagonist still needs goals and beliefs. Force can be the strongest trump card, but it cannot replace spiritual ties; there is a huge difference in loyalty between people who rely solely on strength and coercion and those who follow because of faith/goal. Don't set the concept of "very strong, all members of your team are unconditionally loyal, and there is no reason why", otherwise the logic will collapse. Loyalty comes either from favor, ideas, and beliefs, or from fear and interests. It must be one of the two. (Except for a few parts in this novel), the bottom class is most needed as a source of power for the operation of power and the source of talents for the middle and upper classes.

The mass derived from the elementalization of light Physical essence: Photon (Photon) is an elementary particle, and its static limit mass has been strictly proven to be zero. Speed ​​limit: Because the mass is zero, photons can move at the maximum speed in vacuum - the speed of light Energy transfer: light carries energy. According to E=hf (h is Planck's constant, which is the speed), photons have energy Momentum: light has momentum (p=E/c), so when light hits an object, it will produce a small "light pressure"

The entire devil fruit, and the aunt's physique, can only be used under water... A lump

The author's writing is too bland. The subject matter is obviously very exciting, but the author's writing is bland and tasteless.

I couldn't stand it when I saw the Devil Fruit illustrated book. What the heck, it says that you are starting to build your power. Nine out of the ten books about building your power in fan fiction are on the market. They even create Devil Fruits for their subordinates to eat. So how can the protagonist pretend to be awesome? There are only a few big events in Marvel. Should he let his subordinates do it or let the protagonist do it? What's the use of letting your subordinates play the protagonist? What's the use of having the protagonist be a subordinate? It's a thing that blocks both ends. In a world like Marvel, power comes to oneself. Only villains will worry about whether they have subordinates. If you are strong enough, the whole world will be under your subordinates. You can just use your mouth to do whatever you want. If you are not strong enough to establish your own power, you will also provide benefits to others.

It was the best before it was put on the shelves, but not after it was put on the shelves. The appearance rate of the protagonist dropped sharply, and most of them were played by subordinates. Indeed, after establishing a power, the subordinates will share the burden for the protagonist. It is very true, but this is a novel! Are readers looking at the protagonist's power? Or look at the protagonist? This should be a mistake that most novels make after establishing a power. This should also be the reason why the protagonists of most novels are loners!

Let me start by saying, I don't look down on One Piece, but I always feel that One Piece's combat power system is a bit low. With a universe system like Marvel's that is relatively large, is it more suitable for the system of Swallowing the Starry Sky? The planetary level has a lifespan of a thousand years and can fly, and the star level can even fight in the universe and have a lifespan of ten thousand years. Isn't it more suitable to fight on a cosmic-level white dwarf star? This kind of combat power system looks more enjoyable

I haven't even started reading the book, but there are typos in the introduction~

Just add the devil fruit and domineering, but I can't see it.

Let's be more open. Since the protagonist has obtained the Devil Fruit, let the protagonist share it simultaneously. If it doesn't work, it would be fine to get a three-fruit substance and a sparkling fruit. And isn't the first choice for developing technology and other things brain-brain fruits? I'm speechless if I choose the Tunton fruit.

Are there any mutants who join the Avengers who are not bad?🤔

The invincible hang-up is too big, and the later it gets, the more boring it becomes.

There is a group of gods in the earth. The author must know about it, but he never mentioned it at all.

Asking for everything, I didn't understand anything when I first came here~~

After reading the introduction, it is equivalent to reading the book...

At the beginning, I casually obtained the Shining Fruit + the Physique of the Pirate Mother. In the first three chapters, the protagonist can already wander around in the Marvel Cinematic Universe... I don't know how the author is going to get it right... I don't know if the other people who said that they don't have enough fighting power are sent from other places to frame the author. Author, you don't want to think about these people talking about God, Heavenly Father, etc... It already shows that your combat power has collapsed. In the first three chapters, your protagonist is used to compete with the Marvel background board for combat strength In the next plot, except for the protagonist transforming into a native of the motherland, causing the Ancient One Wizard + Avengers Assembly + Captain Marvel to jointly encircle and suppress the protagonist, I don't know what plot you are going to write next... If the protagonist has any difficulties after the first three chapters, it is to suppress the protagonist's combat power, a watery plot...

A very good Shining Fruit, no long-range attacks, only a light-speed kick. Even if I want to see it, I also want to see it. Since you like to kick with your feet, what kind of sparkling fruit should you eat? Isn't it enough to just pick any animal type? I'm sick.

After reading Chapter 16, why should I pursue power? I thought I encountered difficulties in doing things. This is my habit of reading books, but this book seems to keep stacking values. I have no comparison of combat power. It is like writing a game article.

Can the ability of a Japanese two-dimensional world view be effective in Marvel? The underlying logic of the world is different, how can the ability be universal? In the Infinite Stream, there is a master god who takes care of everything. As for this book, at least the author has some basic settings to make Devil Fruits effective. After all, even the Infinity Stones are just stones apart from their own universe.

Isn't the Heavenly Father level a term for status?