Under One Person: I Am an Innate Stranger with Twelve Talismans

At the beginning, the protagonist was subjected to experiments that were all-encompassing, including bone dismantling and neurotoxins. It can be said that the protagonist is used as experimental material. Then the protagonist did not retaliate, which was simply disgusting. It's amazing that there are still people writing this kind of articles these days.

It's better than practicing Wing Chun in Day of Destruction. The protagonist is identified as a congenital bitch and is of dog blood.

The comments are all bad. From the replies, the author has his own thoughts. He seems to be a newbie. It's so full that I really don't dare to read it.

I am rarely black, but this book of yours made me think that everyone should not come in. I was tortured at the beginning, treated like a dog to others, and called them uncle. Author, have you ever thought about these things happening to you? Have you done the same thing?

I usually don't read books whose comment sections are full of negative reviews, but I was curious after reading it for the second time, so I came to take a look. After reading it, I understand why everyone in the comment section is scolding me. Evaluation: A very childish book. Advantages: AI should not be used. Disadvantages: Lack of engaging plot, mediocre writing, long sections of the original plot, and inappropriate plot design. I won't go into details about the plot appeal and writing style. This requires time to practice. The water story gives people a terrible impression. Almost everything in the middle is what happened in the original work. There are dozens of chapters written, and the protagonist has no sense of involvement. Although it is an unreleased chapter, it can't be so excessive. Inappropriate plot design is the main dissatisfaction of readers, that is, the protagonist is subjected to painful human experiments in a bunker, and Liao Zhong is called Uncle Liao and works for a company. I don't have any objections to this. It's acceptable to be dormant for a while because my skills are inferior to others. But the bad thing is... The author doesn't really like to write about the psychological activities of the protagonist. There are other psychological activities, but when it comes to this aspect of psychology, he really doesn't write much about it. This makes this book very embarrassing. I want to ask, who can endure such an experience and still act like a normal person? And the author can't justify the specific details, and he doesn't know how Zhao Fangxu can come to the conclusion of "immortal body". I originally thought that the author said in the introduction that he knew something about the Three Religions and would talk about spiritual transformation in the book. What was the result? There is almost no such plot. The only thing that is relevant is that the system occasionally reads a few lines of poetry. The protagonist has not changed much except for awakening the second personality. There are also large blockbusters of Shui's original work. If you want to get good reviews, you have to turn your perspective to the protagonist. And the protagonist's second personality is really a very, very bad design. This has been tested by history and is not liked by readers. Of course, readers do not mean to absolutely reject the settings of "second personality". Most of the time, they are disgusted with those low-quality settings that are irrational in logic, lack personality charm, are self-inflicted, and become a tool for the author to forcibly add drama. Obviously, only when will the second personality be lovable? The answer is when the second personality is superior to the protagonist in all aspects (especially moral), or when it is smart and cute. Unfortunately, most of the time, the second personality is evil... The author, you have made such a mistake. This goes back to my original evaluation, which was naive. How did I come to this conclusion? It is shown through the evil personality of the protagonist: He loses face because his parents don't give him pocket money, he is not praised for his ability to do pull-ups, and his roommate secretly tells him that he wants to be beaten with a sack... Because of these reasons, he hates the collective, and asks why he is so miserable when others are so comfortable in the sun. Moreover, this second personality also named himself "" and said a series of mysterious words that he thought were cool. I don't like the word Jiahao, which is essentially a pointer for children to exclude those who are different, but I can only say that it is used here very appropriately. Of course, I'm not saying that the pain of youth is not pain, but you shouldn't write about it in the context of being under one person. Why don't you write about it in Japanese comics about campus, such as Haruhi Suzumiya? What is the ultimate pursuit of Confucianism, Buddhism, Taoism or other philosophies? In the final analysis, it is self-realization. But this self-realization should be carried out after you have fully understood the world and gained a mature cognition. At least you must have your own perspective on the society you live in, such as receiving higher education or working before we talk about it. This is why, under one person, they are also called old-blooded fans. You understand, Xiaodeng can only say that they are practicing, and only the old guys who have experienced the world can be said to be truly on the road of spiritual practice. After I read it, I didn't feel that the protagonist was such a person, nor did I grow because of traveling to this world. Please, it's already chapter 65, okay. How long are you going to lay the groundwork?

If you have to put the humiliation logic of real religion into a novel, you deserve to be scolded. These are not the same tracks.

How old is this author? From the looks of it, he has the beauty of living completely in his own world.

It is indeed a daily guide. Fortunately, I have a good habit of reading the comments section before reading.

Poisonous, the most poisonous one-person fanfic I have read this year, and the author also thinks he is righteous and will not listen to advice.

This kind of writing was rare ten years ago. It is simply a pull within a pull.

Wo finished reading. The story and writing style of this book are both very good. It is above the passing level and can be read into the book, but it is not a refined food that can be eaten. The main conflict arises in the character of the protagonist. There are big problems with the character of the protagonist, especially the origin of the protagonist. Even we readers don't know the origin of the protagonist. We can only know it through some one-sided memories. And so far, the protagonist's life experience has not been explained. We only know that the father of the protagonist in the previous life was very strict. The protagonist has a split personality. As a result, the protagonist's memory is incomplete and his personality is incomplete. According to the author's setting, the protagonist's evil side memory is passed on to the evil personality, and then the good personality acts. This is the poisonous point that other book friends complained about. When I saw the protagonist working for Nadutong after doing experiments, I felt disgusted and thought it was the main reason for abusing the master, because the protagonist is really mentally ill. I can only say that the protagonist has polished the original work very carefully, but the character design of the protagonist is really rubbish and is not suitable for writing fan fiction, because the author simply does not understand what kind of protagonist and story the fan fiction circuit requires.

There are too many original plots. If I don't write about the main character, I might as well watch the original plot.

Shi, it's really poisonous. Others use the protagonist for experiments and dismantle the bones. Later, the protagonist works for others as a dog. It's awesome.

Every book is like an unknown delicacy, and we readers will have a taste of it. Some books are boring at the beginning, but they have great staying power, and some people can persist in reading until the later stages. Your book is like a nine-turn large intestine. The first bite is shit and no one wants to take the second bite.

Does this protagonist have masochistic tendencies?

Don't write it down if you are happy. It's disgusting.

Saw the beginning. Please don't push this kind of article in the future. The Qidian official should not push this kind of article to me. Thank you. Don't push this kind of article to me, thank you.

Why do everyone who writes about strangers like to post about companies? I don't want you to be a native of the motherland, but you also don't want to be a licking dog. Everyone is being treated as a guinea pig for you. You still go up to others and tell them that you have worked hard. Are you cheap?

It's poisonous and makes people feel uncomfortable and oppressed And looking at the author's reply, I want both. You have to figure out why you are writing. If you are writing for your own ideas, you don't have to write according to your own ideas. If you are doing it to make money, then don't write in such a way that makes people feel uncomfortable. The problem is that you are neither at the level of a master, nor in line with the market, nor even the setting is surprising, so you can't want both😓

To be honest, has anyone overestimated the author's subject matter? I will change it later: it can kill everyone with explosions. I really can't stand this kind of abuse and then get together and be a dog.

I found that today's authors have not found that modern people are very violent. What they read in novels is Shuang Jia's writing style. Some are more patient, and some are not patient at all, so the desire for revenge comes out. Once you abuse the protagonist, you need revenge, revenge, no matter what it is, as long as it does not involve ordinary people, you can do whatever you want with powerful people, and you can abuse them however you want.

Thank you guys for trying the poison, I almost watched it. Thank you guys.

You still have a dual personality. Do you think it was ten years ago?

If you want to make money or become famous by writing a book, you have to consider the readers in today's society, which is very depressing and very angry. If you can't make everyone happy, there will be no mass market if you originally planned to relax and read a book but it is still depressing.

Poisonous weeds and novices are not considered

A second look at a junk book in a junk book will pollute the eyeballs.

There is no annoying article, being used as a guinea pig by others is still a shame.

Well

Is the author a legal Taoist priest recognized by the state?

I read the reviews and said this book is rubbish. I'll give it a try.