Marvel: Saints Begin with Reality Stones

It's a bit too long-winded in the early stages. It introduces a small incident in one chapter, and it's easy to lose people's attention.

Mark it and skip it if you encounter it in the future. Che Zhuluan talks about the king, ai article

I have finished reading the chapters as of 26.7.22, So I'll leave you with a summary. I looked at the comment section and it seems that he is an old author. I guess he will be criticized after writing this post. So I am not going to reply one by one. Disclaimer in advance that this is all personal reading experience. If it is different from yours, please refer to your own experience. Let's talk about the advantages first: It can be seen that the author is very familiar with the works of Saint Seiya, and the settings are very clear and consistent with the original work. I don't know much about Marvel because I don't know much about Zhang Jiebei at the moment, so I can't see much more. It can only be said that the current setting is quite consistent, and there are no special dramas or dramas caused by the incompatibility of the original Marvel characters. This is rare. It can be seen that a lot of effort has been put into the original work. If you want to write a good fan fiction, the character and basic settings of the original characters must not collapse. This is the difficulty of fan fiction. Readers who know the original work will not feel weird when they see this character. For example, Stark in the movie universe does not have a bad mouth or talk nonsense throughout the whole process, and he still maintains a serious character that makes people feel drawn to him. (This refers to another book) The following are the shortcomings: The author currently has a common problem among most online writers, which is that he cannot write (that is, he can write a story well and has many ideas and inspirations, but his writing skills are too low to express it correctly. I also have this problem in writing, but I do not make a living in this industry.) The main manifestation of this problem is: writing wherever I think, and unable to grasp the key points of the story. For example, the author writes about the protagonist having a fight with someone, and then suddenly when describing the topic, the topic deviates from the battle itself. I don't know how far it went before he reacted and forcibly brought back the original battle. This problem will appear in 90% of the novels written by online authors. They write a short plot paragraph. For example, the core of the paragraph is the protagonist fighting with someone, and then the author starts to explain himself. Explain why you want to fight him, what you originally wanted to do, or whether it is reasonable to fight him, and then add why it is reasonable and where it is reasonable. Simplified explanation: The author must interpret and describe some plot-related content. This situation is not only due to substandard business capabilities, but also a lack of self-confidence that readers may not understand. This way of writing simply means water. Because you can't see the actual plot advancement. One chapter basically explains the protagonist's behavior, the plausibility of the plot, or the settings of the original text and the author's personal settings. I mentioned above that it will be reflected wherever I think of writing. For example, in Chapters 15 and 16, the protagonist defeats the Black Elf Queen and Hammer God arrives. At this point in the plot, the author writes: Hammer God shouted the name of the enemy and then failed to find the person because he had been killed by the protagonist. Then when he sees the protagonist, he begins to prepare to take action. This description is done in a few sentences. Then things started to get interesting: after the protagonist's conversation with the Hammer God Loki didn't make sense, he was about to take action. The author began to explain that the protagonist didn't want to fight the Hammer God now because Odin was still alive and so on. After a long explanation, he concluded that he didn't want to fight. But in the plot, the protagonist takes action, so he starts to explain why he wants to fight. The simple summary is that the Saints will fight if they don't accept it (ps: what kind of fighting race is the Saiyan). Finally returning to the plot, the protagonist started to fight the Hammer God. After several moves, the Hammer God suffered heavy losses, but the protagonist did not win. Then the protagonist hits the head and wants to kill Hammer God. After all, he is the protector of Loki, the enemy who killed the protagonist's adoptive parents. At this time, the protagonist has the intention to kill, and the author starts to explain why the protagonist can have the intention to kill, first, second, third and so on. To simplify it: Because Ragnarok has begun since the God Queen was killed by the Black Elf, Odin lost his divine power. Then the author mentioned the original plot in which Odin was sent to wander the earth by Loki, and was later discovered by Doctor Strange and sent to a nursing home. He once again explained that Odin has no power because of the beginning of Ragnarok, and his power is gradually disappearing. He also has no ability to take care of these things in Asgard. Otherwise, why didn't he come out to take care of it when the Queen of Gods was killed? Later, it was ruined on the earth. Don't think I have too many words. This is how the original text was written. I have simplified it a lot. This last wave of explanations returns to the previous explanation, so it is reasonable for the protagonist to be murderous, because Odin is already a paper tiger at the end of the Light Crossbow. At this time, Loki, who had exiled Odin to Earth, pretended to be Odin and ordered Heimdall to open the Rainbow Bridge and pick up the Hammer God who was about to fight the protagonist. See the readers here carefully consider, isn't this a contradiction? What kind of new logic is this? Anyway, I was really confused when I saw the original article here. Could it be that God's will is still exerting its force? That's it. Be prepared to be scolded. It seems that this author has many old fans, but he is really unhappy about it. And more than 90% of online novels are currently written in this way. This is not the first time I have complained. Summary: Most of the plot is watchable, but occasionally the logic is confusing. You can read ten lines at a glance or just watch the dialogue. It is not suitable for those who are smart, experienced or bookworms. The summary I posted does not exceed 1517 words. The author wrote two chapters of my complaint about the story.

I just ordered the first version of Saint Seiya, so I cut it and now you've opened another one 😆😆😆😆 I'm really convinced

I don't even have to click on this cover and add rice to it. I can confirm it by looking for it in the comments.

Familiar writing style, familiar Mi Yike, familiar bourbon and familiar Ni Ge terminator

The author even included the taxi the main character took! What brands are listed? This,,? How to write it? This is not a detailed description or sufficient setting, this is pure water. What is even more difficult is that this paragraph is less than 100 words into the first chapter. This is really water from the beginning...

Again, he forcibly found himself an enemy who killed his father. I remember that there was also a novel about Saint Seiya who also found himself an enemy at the beginning. One is Loki killing the protagonist's parents, and the other is the Hulk killing the protagonist's sister.

Mi Yike finally opened a new book 😍😍😍

I'm still recommending it. Why do I keep seeing this book? I don't even have the desire to click on it. Qidian's recommendation mechanism is rubbish. I read the cover introduction and left without clicking on it. Please don't push it again. I've never heard of Gouba Saint Seiya. There are a bunch of junk books blocking the place and I can't see any interesting books at all.

He keeps talking nonsense, mentioning one thing repeatedly, and he can write an entire paragraph about something that can be described in four or five words. Lao Feng is really dead

A meter and a gram at a glance, the water god who is more water than AI, the writing style of ancient times is blended with modern moisture, making the road of water great again

The protagonist is a double standard dog🐶🐶.

Che Luolun repeatedly said that the left and right brains are fighting each other It was like this before it was put on the shelves, I don't dare to think about what it will be like after it is put on the shelves It's a waste of time

The three views are distorted, and there is a lot of talk when returning the wheel.

The outlook on life is distorted and there is also a problem with aesthetics. The person who plays Jia Ying is too ugly. I keep talking about the ideal type, the ideal type. It's disgusting enough.

The starting point has really come to an end, I can recommend any book like this 🙂

I really had to bear it and withdraw the brothers first. A friend who is not a girlfriend has trouble finding a wife for 5 chapters. The logic is confusing and contradictory. I came to see Saint Seiya, not to see you clear the Marvel plot.

No, the writing is terrible. All kinds of nonsense. It's either science popularization or psychological activities. Talking back and forth 🙂

I have lost all interest in Mi Yike's books, and my grades are just like that. I can still go to Sanjiang. Indeed, the level of Sanjiang is just like this now.

The ai article of the journal, after the software ran out, it was not read or modified at all, and it was identified as non-recyclable garbage.

Author, did you write it in AI? The different logics make my head hurt, and 80% of the first part is about talking about my own personal settings, and I talk about it over and over again, which is a complete mess. Whoever wants to read this book should read it. I can't read a bit of it.

Repeating those few sentences back and forth, the first few chapters, they are still repeated in the 50th chapter, double standards, no fighting, cool, and pretentious. Saints wear suits and leather shoes? Saint Seiya wears trousers and lifts weights and squats? The mysterious Riddler

The protagonist Dai Ke, the pen name Dai Mi, Marvel, Saint Seiya, I can't imagine how pure this is

Che Luolun kept saying, "Goodbye" over and over again.

It's free, whatever you want to write. Whoever orders it for a fee is really crazy.

Why do I see Marvel + Saint Seiya novels in the recommendation column every few months? Every time I think it should be 1 million words, but when I click on it, it's a new book. 😰

This writing is not as good as the one written by AI. Che Shuluan talks a lot, it's watery and sticky, it's glue.

This can also go to Sanjiang😰😰😰

Is it possible that the Saints are not war mad, but a group of bodyguards?