American Comics: the Survival Chat Group I Joined Is Actually Real

The protagonist is made so silly that in time travel, the only plug-in mobile phone chat group, I thought it was cosplay, and gangsters came to ask for money, but they refused to pay even though they had the ability. He actually gave it to me. Although your narration and writing are good, your plot is too drawn out!

Writing like this 10 years ago was ridiculous. Find a class and don't write this. Your talent is not in this area.

One household is the biggest wall hanging in the Shinigami, and it can explode at any time. The first cross-border mission is actually that one household has not exploded. It is about to die at the hands of Baymax. It goes to save people, and it is completely lost, and it is impossible to watch it.

Dio was not defeated by Death, and even beat Byakuya away? Can Dior's attack power break through defense? Can Senbonzakura killed Dio? Dior Vampire can withstand beatings and can slay ghosts with his fists. If he can't be killed by the attack, he can't trap him. Not to mention that he can't use the Binding Dao.

It's so stupid, let's put the good and bad side together

This first chapter is really speechless. Nick Fury has time to go to the protagonist's place every day to buy fried chicken for his subordinates. An indestructible mobile phone, with the only chat group in it, the protagonist still doesn't believe it's true. Can I also read this kind of intellectual book?

When I saw Chapter 67, I couldn't stand it anymore. I was being plotted, and I had to help save one person for 10 million. If you don't have an idea, don't write it. Don't keep following the plot. Stay out of it, do whatever you want, and help others. You can make sense and watch it if you play it for a while, but if you were tricked by Mystique into destroying your store and you foolishly went to help him save people, all you can do is say goodbye and run away.

There is a kind of mysterious self-confidence, and there are many confusing operations

You have traveled through time, and you have an indestructible mobile phone in your hand. There is a chat group on the mobile phone that connects different worlds. What do you think A: This horse is my golden finger B: There are a lot of people in this group playing Cosplay

Except for the two members of your group who were killed in the plot, DIO and Obito, what do the remaining members have to survive? ? ?

. The first time I saw the protagonist get super powers, he was almost killed twice by the villain's minions like a wooden stake. Live by luck. Knowingly knowing that there are guns and knives on the other side. After going out and kicking people, he stopped moving. I was convinced too.

There are many typos and many plots are not smooth. I can barely watch it.

Don't write books using stereotypes about the protagonist and other supporting characters of Good Food

Under the current circumstances, I can only say that you can see without using your brain.

There are more than ten typos in one chapter. Are you my husband? Brother

There are currently 42 chapters, and although there are some minor issues from time to time, the overall story is pretty good. Moreover, it is a type where the chat group can accept tasks to go to other worlds. As long as the plot is well grasped in the future, it will not be too bad.

I can only say that the protagonist is as stupid as a fool. If you don't have that kind of writing style, you shouldn't write that kind of story that abuses the protagonist.

What are the letters ⊙∀⊙? Carving