I Explain Urban Legends in America

If it were a book written 100 years ago, it would definitely be a god.

It is rated as a niche radio novel. If it can be compared, it is quite interesting. The plot can be called interesting. However, the author's writing style and plot structure arrangement ability are not enough, especially in the description of some small details. For example, the switching of various scenes is very abrupt and has no rhythm. At the same time, the dialogue between the characters is difficult to understand the logic. So whether it can be compared with the radio wave, but if it is correct, it can be regarded as a bit on the food side.

Shen Nong Lai La A lighthearted and funny story, the protagonist is awesome and awesome, and the sense of horror is greatly downplayed. Generally speaking, it is quite healing, with adventure and warm interpersonal relationships. The character of Uncle Li Ang that children love is also a genius. What kind of bad guy can a child like? Not recommended reading group: readers who like to see the value increase. This article is relatively slow to develop, the system reward abilities are also scattered, and the intensity of improvement is not obvious. Of course, the growth of the system is crucial, and it will also provide the ability to break the game (but it is not powerful). The local extraordinary system may be the point where the author is ready to dig deeper. Who said it's not an old tradition for horror movies to become family fun?

It's pretty good. The setting for children is a genius.

The recent plot feels like the main plot has strayed a bit. Basically, it is about defeating the enemy. The protagonist and the enemy compete with each other through various fantasy events. The main plot is indeed advancing, but I think the direction is off. The rhythm at the beginning of this book is to experience events, solve them, use the golden finger to gain strength, and gain growth. Then the protagonist's highlight moments are made into a TV show, and he gains wealth while appearing as a saint in front of people. The main flow of the opening chapter is a complete set of standard cool articles connected by many small cool points. It is very good and attractive to read. But now this main flow has been interrupted. The current plot rarely shows the small joyful moments where the protagonist gains something. Instead, the focus has always been on the back-and-forth battle with the enemy. This won't work.

The black cat of the protagonist is the panther god of Indian belief. She can still exist even if the Indians are dead. So what about God who has a large number of believers around the world? If He existed, how could those monsters run rampant in the human world 🤔

Let's add a parallel line. The most exciting thing about being a host is the audience reaction and fame. When writing, you should emphasize the growth of fame and the surprise of the audience. Otherwise, your identity as a host will be useless and it will be the same as an ordinary American horror novel.

Unsolved Mysteries, Monster Files, X-Files, Evil Force, American Gods, American Horror Series... Those who like modern fantasy American TV series, and those born in the 8090s who like stories about unsolved mysteries from more than ten years ago, can try it This track is too niche. Ten years ago, there were a group of people who wrote about Marvel, American TV series, and American variety shows. In recent years, they have basically disappeared. American Prison A is a different background. There are several other books in the American Horror series, but they are not as "classic" as this one. Probably the character of the protagonist - the monster file host who attracts children. It is so classic that it can evoke the memories of those born in the 90s. Of course, the shortcomings of new authors are that their writing style, routines, and outlines are not mature enough. They can only use characters from movies and TV series. In the early stage, focus on writing the Witch's House and use the Witch as the starting BOSS. There is no need to join the organization behind the Lizardmen and Wandering House. It is recommended that they both suffer losses, pass it over in one stroke, and open a new picture. The protagonist's conspiracy theory-like psychotic character is originally very attractive, as is the schizophrenic who can see ghosts, but when the ghosts actually appear, the expectations of readers and audiences will drop. In fact, it is most suitable to write this kind of thing as a road novel. American TV dramas are mostly road novels, with a case here and a case there. Receive cases from children all over the country, look for the gods, and explore slowly (I feel that the protagonist has upgraded too fast, and the author did not intend to write more than three million words to ignore me). Qidian has a book called "American Detective", which is also written in the United States. I don't know whether it has been banned or not, but the author can learn from it. I personally like this kind of fantasy American detective novel story. I hope the author writes more and better. Oh, you can write down the background of the monsters in detail. It is a show in itself. The protagonist's jokes and background introduction are not obtrusive. On the one hand, it is a contrast, and on the other hand, readers who are not familiar with American horror can understand it. The backgrounds of these monsters are very interesting and a major attraction. It would be better if some details could be added to deepen the background of the era. At present, I don't feel that the background is distinctive. It is not bad to say that the 90s and 00s are not bad. Generally speaking, if you like fantasy American detective adventures, if you don't have a meal replacement, you can give me a meal+.

So what if gravity remains unchanged? The impact of falling from a height is not just determined by the landing speed. The mass of the object will also affect the impact. Sothe protagonist's superpower of losing weight will reduce the impact of landing, then there is no problem. Because the value of the ability is determined by the author, and the author did not write the specific value, what you can do is to infer the skill value and physical fitness of the protagonist after jumping from a height of 10 meters, rather than just brainstorming that the protagonist will be injured if the ability is not good, and then come up with nonsense

Hahaha, it's quite interesting, but it incorporates too many movies, and sometimes it's hard to get the right point, so you have to combine it with paragraphs and commentary! As for the lack of commentary, we can only skip it.

If I have to comment, this is it. It feels very smooth, the plot, and the characters are good. It gives people a sense of popular science like old-fashioned TVs in the past, and foreigners' translation accents. This is what I brought to watch, and the characters are not awkward. I have seen too many homogeneous things, and this tastes really good.

Okay, I hope there will be "The Bad Seed"

Dear Uncle Li Ang: Hello! I am a loyal little viewer of your show. The first thing I do when I get home from school is to sit in front of the TV and wait for you to take me on one thrilling and exciting adventure after another. My friends and I like you very much! I am writing to you this time because I have something strange and I want help. Recently, a very good friend of mine suddenly disappeared. I went to his home to look for him, but his parents insisted that they never had children. The adults didn't seem to remember him and said I was playing a prank. Only my classmates believed what I said. Uncle Li Ang, I know you are an expert in this field, can you help me?

I discovered it by accident, and it turned out to be surprisingly good and interestingly written.

Losing weight will not change gravity, nor will it turn you into a rubber man with super cushioning. Will you be okay if you jump from a height of ten meters and three stories? Did you think about it when you wrote it? Difficult to stretch.

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I wonder what future generations will think of Lyon, and whether it will become like this. In the eyes of later generations of scholars, Lyon has long transcended the category of a single creator, and is regarded as the well-deserved pioneer and founder of the "Children's Urban Horror Circuit". He completely broke the "absolutely safe" fairy tale filter in traditional children's literature and film and television works, pointed the lens at the dark corners of the reinforced concrete forest that were deliberately ignored by adults, and used extremely experimental image language to set a cold and profound tone for the entire track. The great thing about Lyon is that he does not simply create shocks, but uses the "realism" of the mockumentary and the "metaphorical" nature of the puppet film (I feel that this puppet plot will be broadcast to the end on TV) to construct extremely tense psychological spaces. He allowed future generations to see that urban horror for children is not a simple sensory stimulation, but a profound inquiry about growth, loneliness and urban alienation. After all, in the eyes of adults who have never been exposed to it, there is no such thing as ghost. It's just a movie special effect. 🙂

The main character is called Leon. When will he take a camera to shoot a documentary about the massacre of villagers in a small Spanish town?

I said the author wrote this book hundreds of years ago and it would definitely be a hit.

I don't know if the author has a sewing foundation. I've always wanted to see the appearance of the foundation in the American-terrorist worldview.

A good setting, interesting background, but it went astray. I would like to give you a suggestion: tie the main plot to the TV show, let the protagonist act as "Uncle Leon of the children" on TV, and give more indirect reactions from the audience to drive the plot, instead of simply intervening in various urban legends. The urban legend that everyone wants to see is the vague and exploratory feeling on TV, rather than a specific setting without any sense of mystery. Do more shows. Urban legends, the most important thing is mystery, isn't it?

It's a very interesting subject matter. Now most of the American fear fighters have suddenly lost their combat power. It can be said to be a breath of fresh air

Adding the childlike innocence of children is a stroke of genius The protagonist is a very good adult Treat children's curiosity and innocence, do not suppress or reject and encourage children to use their imagination It's great I hope there will be more interactions with children in the future Help children really have ways to deal with danger

I feel like Bloody Mary's rank is too high. I thought it was just a C-level weird story.

The subject matter is good, but it feels too fast. In the 18 chapters, the protagonist has experienced at least 5 events... Each time is very fast, and there is a sense of déjà vu. Writing a good story is the key

Seeing the protagonist say to the children, "Don't be afraid, Uncle Leon is here." This is a beam of light that illuminates the dimness of the children. I feel that if the protagonist continues like this, he will become a Santa Claus-like existence.

The writing style is all above average, but the author's logic is relatively poor, but when you think about the average IQ and logic of American horror, it makes sense.

It feels like the reality of the world is too low, just like going to a story world, it's too fake.

How about letting Lily and Little Bear publicize their abilities every time the show is broadcast, so that they can gain a little more power of faith?

Every time I see a novel on this theme, the first thought in my mind is always The Mystery of the Detective Monster, but no one has written similar fan fiction.