Grinding Experience Starting from American Horror Story

So far, the writing is alright, but one character has a slightly overly strong sense of justice, which doesn't quite fit the current atmosphere of Qidian. The other two characters lack clear goals and seem rather easygoing; their grinding and searching for skills don't seem to be high priority for the protagonist.

I'm really curious how the author plans to write Evil Dead. Both the main characters and the demons in this series are pretty strong, wielding chainsaws and short-barreled shotguns. "I'm the Demon King, remember that!" 😁 And each of the original trilogy felt quite disjointed, not to mention the TV series and the reboot. But in the reboot, Ash is gone, so maybe it's better not to write about him. Oh, and Ash also has comics, but he's gone to the Marvel Zombies universe.

There's no clear objective; how to acquire skills or how to improve them isn't shown; you're completely being pushed around... It's strange.

The protagonist seems too righteous, getting involved in all sorts of supernatural events brings him no benefit whatsoever! Instead, he suffers all sorts of harm. After narrowly escaping death, instead of promotions, raises, honors, and wealth, he first has to prove that he acted in legitimate self-defense and face various investigations! The protagonist is a transmigrator, and an Asian at that!

I almost lost my temper. I'm a strong-willed person, not some "saintly saint." There are plenty of books on Qidian with no bottom line, so why am I here breathing on them? The writing is alright, but the power levels are a bit off. But this is American Horror Story, so it's reasonable. 😋

It's normal for the readership to be low. If you can't capture the readers' tastes, this book is niche, so you need to add some Hollywood beauties and such to attract readers. Also, the protagonist with this kind of cheat ability should actively collect and try various mystical powers and books. After all, readers of American Horror Story naturally prefer mystical elements.

This book should be called "Supernatural Police Officer," it's been submitted to the wrong category. It should be submitted as a US police fiction.

Well, to be honest, overall it's pretty good. Even for someone as picky as me, I think this book is at least a decent read. However, some issues limited the book's development. The protagonist's skill extraction mechanism was confusing, and besides that, it gave me a sense of unease.

Thank you Shennong

The biggest problem for me is that the protagonist's actions lack a clear purpose; it's like he's just walking along, fighting monsters as he goes, and then he just goes wherever the road takes him. Although the cult is a major villain, they have had too little interaction with the protagonist so far, which makes it impossible for readers like me to feel the anticipation of "this cult is so evil, I want to see the protagonist annihilate them".