
Dragon Ball: Starting as the Crane School’s Junior Disciple
龙珠:从鹤仙流小师弟开始
- Status
- Ongoing
- Length
- 712k Words
- Genre
- Light Novel
- Subgenre
- ACG Fanfiction
- Updated
- 1d ago
- English
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200Chapters
60Monthly votes
189Recommendations
742Fans
7 ch/weekPace
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The beginning is really low-quality. The protagonist is lazy and doesn't exercise, then suddenly becomes incredibly strong. I can only say, is this even interesting? Do you think slacking off is cool, that you're different from everyone else? 😒😒😒
What exactly is the role of the main character?
Having read up to chapter 10, I can only say that what the comments section said was true.
Chapter 1 claims the protagonist can't even learn the art of flying; Chapter 2 shows him being threatened by Master Crane; then Chapter 5 says the protagonist is talented but lazy. Comparing Chapters 1 and 5, it's unclear where his talent lies.
The protagonist's personality is very unlikable, and there are no satisfying moments. I'm really curious, does someone like the protagonist really have any reason to exist?
What is this writing?
After reading a dozen or so chapters, it's all just a monotonous account of events. The protagonist is not only useless but also has no presence. He's supposed to be talented and insightful, but he's just a complete lazy bum. He doesn't want to cultivate; instead, he's greedily running a business in this Dragon Ball world.
Whether the main character is useful or not doesn't matter, the plot must be there.
Master Shen and Master Gui are rivals for life.
Master Shen and Master Roshi, these two brothers, were rivals in their youth. Later, when Piccolo was born and wreaked havoc on the world, Master Shen became afraid of Piccolo's power and believed that martial arts could not save the world, so he gave up on himself. In fact, if he hadn't known that Tao Pai Pai died at Goku's hands, he wouldn't have targeted Master Roshi and Goku like that.
Why doesn't a protagonist with this kind of personality go to the neighbor's cat?
He has absolutely nothing but the protagonist's halo, making him extremely unlikable.
What kind of nonsense is this? (๑•̌.•̑๑)ˀ̣ˀ̣
I couldn't continue reading after the third chapter.