Naruto: Rising to Power by Creating My Own Sonic Techniques

Maybe it's because of my skill, but the scenes where I suffered a loss were handled very poorly, and it basically turned into a failure. This is related to the almost two-dimensional narrative style during the plot. In this aspect, Heshuang literature is needed, not two-dimensional or light novels, and the literary youth should be avoided as much as possible. The plot must be handled steadily and decisively, and only when the words are written can the narrative be lyrical. Don't use too much force when describing the lyricism. Clean is better

Tayuya, one of the four sound ninjas, seems to be doing sound illusion.

Sound wave technique, why don't you use the Netherworld Sound Wave Technique 🤭

In the author's setting, kunai is made of chakra metal. The protagonist wants to smelt his own kunai, and then create a metal ring, which can be used to make sounds by collision and friction. The mention that kunai contains chakra metal made me laugh. I would rather you say that the material of kunai is very hard, but I can't stand you saying that kunai contains chakra metal. I feel like the author looked at Danzo's Chakra Wind Release Kunai and felt that the kunai was capable of transmitting chakra. In fact, it's because Danzo himself is so powerful. In the Naruto setting, Wind Release is actually very rare. Even in the Kingdom of Wind, there are not many wind escape ninjas, and when they fight against the Third Raikage of the Dirty Land later. You see, there are only a few Wind Release ninjas gathered together. Danzo's Kage-level strength lies entirely in Wind Release. And if there is no golden finger, I don't think a modern person can do much if he travels to the past. There were so many monster-like geniuses, what could ordinary people do in the past? A lesson learned from the past is Beiliuhu.

Any idea why this book is so bad? There aren't even a few comments. Because I don't see any merits in the protagonist at the moment. It's almost 80 chapters. Currently, the protagonist is still playing the role of a genin. There are no cheats, no bloodline boundaries, no family, and no backstage. He relies on himself for everything, and the limited plot prophets are missed step by step due to their own reasons. It would be one thing to have the six-level strength of a genin like Naruto Sasuke, but the current protagonist is just a passerby, relying on a few ordinary ninjutsu he created, which doesn't seem to be of much use. Rhythm is very important, it is a free chapter, just watch it to kill time. It is estimated that within a few days of being on the shelves, you will be so overwhelmed by the number of subscriptions that you can no longer write. You might as well just cut it off and start a new book with this writing foundation in mind. Without the strength of the elite Jonin before it is officially released, it is difficult for people to have the desire to watch it. Naruto is originally based on blood, and it is really difficult for amateur players.

There is something wrong with that contribution setting. If I teach my son the ninjutsu I redeemed, who will report me? Even if I have an enemy watching me, how does he know the ninjutsu I exchanged? If you take another ten thousand steps back, my son will go to war. You, Hokage, know that I taught ninjutsu to my child privately. So, what are you going to do with me?

When I read Chapter 9, while talking about how ninjas should keep their ninjutsu secret, they also told others that they had created the sensory ninjutsu, for fear that others would not know. . . . . Isn't this contradictory? There is no mention of how to develop the echo. At least it should be something like learning ninjutsu knowledge, or using the ability of a certain ninjutsu. Just like the science bat in the Naruto novel.

I have to set up my own design, and I can't write it well.

After reading Chapter 5, I feel that the protagonist can already enter the Konoha Torture Department and devote his life. The Ice Shield of the Land of Snow is unlikely to appear in the sneer question. Even if it does, if you answer it, you will most likely die. After all, not many people in Konoha knew about it. For details, you can see that Kakashi doesn't even know whether Kakashi is a jounin or an elite jounin, and you will understand.

Is it reasonable to use echolocation to know whether the other party has chakra?

Shouldn't the Hokage talk about ninjutsu? It's not a curse

All the phonological skills of a full-time mage can be copied!

Sound missiles, sound cutters, sound nukes, sonic armor, and the sound of death for killing. I feel like I can just copy it over if I change it a little bit.

To be honest, as a Naruto fanfic, your introduction is too bland. Everyone has been watching the fanfic for so many years. Do you think this is attractive enough? The same goes for the chapter names. Can you browse through the table of contents and click on them? It's an eye-catching place for free, can you seize the opportunity?

Question: What is the name of the ninja village founded by Orochimaru in Tian no Kuni? Answer: Sound Ninja Village

The core of ninjutsu is the yin and yang shield, with yin type representing the spirit and yang type representing the physical body. That is, sex and fate in the traditional sense. I feel that ninja system practice can also achieve longevity and life evolution, but they have been pursuing meaningless things all their lives.

For example, carbon dioxide poisoning, death by suffocation, white phosphorus burning, drug addiction, chronic poisoning (lead and mercury, etc.), Liquid nitrogen attack, AIDS+ germs, blood-like water escape (control of blood, such as blood clots, blood reflux, bleeding from the seven orifices, etc.),...

Orochimaru came out and summoned tens of thousands of snakes to clear the forest of death. Do you think everyone in Konoha is dead? What is the level of the pig's trotter chunin exam? Let Orochimaru come out to target

The second feature is a bit much, but still within a reasonable range. Nothing too sinister to watch.

It's so fierce that it looks like a Boeing technique

Sonic? I remember there was a Naruto fan who started his career as a Sanwu civilian by raising bats and creating his own ultrasonic induction ninjutsu.

Sound wave must be the one among the four kings of food🙂🙂

Without mentioning the magic transformation, how can the Konoha genin graduation assessment be based on actual combat?

Can sonic waves be upgraded to vibratory waves? Oscillating continental shelf

Pokémon's sound skills include the Roar of the Great God, the lion's roar skill in martial arts, the sound transmission of thousands of miles, and the sonic attack using the musical instrument Erhu Guzheng In the later stages, the sound will turn to vibrating, taking the path of One Piece's shaking fruit You can also take the path of Hibiki in Kamen Rider😁

Spiritualism should be a kind of perception secret + soul secret + time and space secretary

Speechless, so weak, if you don't practice well, how can you be a ninja?

The writing is okay, but there are too many secondary settings.

Come on, this kind of story is quite rare.