Naruto: Rising to Power by Creating My Own Sonic Techniques

Maybe it's because of my skill, but the scenes where I suffered a loss were handled very poorly, and it basically turned into a failure. This is related to the almost two-dimensional narrative style during the plot. In this aspect, Heshuang literature is needed, not two-dimensional or light novels, and the literary youth should be avoided as much as possible.

In the author's setting, kunai is made of chakra metal. The protagonist wants to smelt his own kunai, and then create a metal ring, which can be used to make sounds by collision and friction. The mention that kunai contains chakra metal made me laugh. I would rather you say that the material of kunai is very hard, but I can't stand you saying that kunai contains chakra metal.

Tayuya of the Sound Four seems to only know how to use sound illusions.

Sonic spell, how about a Netherworld Sonic Wave Technique? 🤭

Do you know why this book is so bad? There are hardly any comments. Because I can't see any redeeming qualities in the protagonist. We're almost at chapter 80, and he's still a genin playing house, no cheat codes, no bloodline limit, no clan, no backing—he has to rely on himself for everything. And his limited foresight keeps causing him to miss opportunities.

The contribution system is flawed. If I teach my son the ninjutsu I redeemed, who would report me? Even if I have enemies watching me, how would they know which ninjutsu I redeemed? And even if, hypothetically, my son is going to war, and you, the Hokage, find out I secretly taught him ninjutsu, what are you going to do about it?

I have to create my own alternate settings; the writing isn't good enough.

Question: What is the name of the ninja village that Orochimaru founded in the Land of Rice Fields? A: Sound Village

Having read up to Chapter 5, I feel the protagonist is already old enough to be sent to Konoha's interrogation department and dedicate his life to it. The Snow Country's ice shield is unlikely to be part of the questions asked in the Cold Laughing game. Even if it were, if you answered correctly, you'd most likely die. After all, very few people in Konoha know it. Just look at Kakashi—even he doesn't know. Kakashi is a Jonin, and an elite Jonin at that—and you'll understand.

Having read up to Chapter Nine, he's saying ninjas must keep their ninjutsu secret, yet he's telling others he created sensory ninjutsu, as if afraid no one will know... Isn't that a contradiction? Furthermore, it didn't explain how the echo was developed. At least add something about learning ninjutsu or utilizing a certain ninjutsu ability. It's like that science bat from the Naruto novel.