I'm a Genin in Konoha

This book is not pleasant. It feels like a job. In reality, rubbish bosses are annoying enough. I really don't have the patience to read this kind of life-and-death struggle of little people.

How should I put it? First of all, the time of Hex is unclear. It comes suddenly, and then when will it appear next time? Secondly, there is the clichéd problem of the substitute technique. Nowadays, it is very criticized that the substitute technique is written like the power of the hand. This work still does not change it. I hope it can be adjusted in the future. To put it bluntly, the Substitution Technique is not a technique that allows you to switch places with an object to hide yourself during a battle. It's a technique that allows you to hide when you're facing an enemy. You change it before the fight and then hide quietly. The protagonist's current Hex ability can clearly be used to hide well with the Substitute Technique.

Does the author really know how short twelve meters is? Hyuga's perception is measured in kilometers. You should be 100 meters at least.

I thought I was playing with Konoha genin, but it turned out to be a genin.

A lot of empty talk without any content, no useful information at all, it's like I haven't read anything.

I don't understand the purpose of writing such a useless protagonist. He doesn't have any talent. The trick is just a joke. The first trick is to indirectly sense hostile units within 5 meters. The throwing speed of ordinary humans is about 40 meters per second. What is the difference between 5 meters and hitting the face? The average arrow speed is about 50 meters per second. The top-level bow has an arrow speed of 150 meters per second. With only a ninja's defensive power, ordinary ninjas do not have 50-meter perception. What is the difference between them and dead people?

It's like AI, but it can see typos. Sentences with repetitive meanings, "one" and "such one" over and over again, are like a primary school student trying to make up for the number of words in a composition. Very disappointed.

These last few chapters were probably written by AI. I don't even know what they are talking about. My scalp feels numb when I read them.

A classic with overwhelming combat power He even killed a jounin He was also evaluated as mediocre in ability Still a genin Kakashi described Rin as being able to call her by her full name The level is really a bit low

But as that comment said, the protagonist is like a camera. In your writing, everyone's characters are well drawn and fleshed out, but the protagonist feels a little too weak. It would be nice to add a trump card to the protagonist that can flip the table. Even if this trump card has limitations and the cost is high, it is still better than nothing. Oh, by the way, the protagonist has learned eight doors, and eight doors are indeed very strong. You want to develop in this direction, but it takes too long. It is so difficult to open just one door, and that is not all. When you can open seven or eight doors in the future, the day lilies will be cold, and the results will be too slow. What you have to do now is to give the protagonist a hook that will make him popular immediately.