Reincarnation Paradise: the Golden Crow Dragging the Sun

The first road represents punishment, the second road symbolizes divine mercy, and the sword and shield on the third road are meant to overcome obstacles and protect the heart. This perfectly fits Laoyang's character image! The impatience and disregard for politicians, the pity and care for Aurora; holding a "shield" to guard behind him, and drawing a "sword" to swing forward are the policies he has been practicing in the paradise so far. It can be said that these three paths perfectly correspond to the protagonist's mood and personality. He affirmed the suitability of the third path because he has been practicing it; he rejected the first path because he has not yet turned his dissatisfaction with what he saw and heard into a spear of judgment and followed his own will to change the world. As for the second path, in addition to the choice of the path itself, it is probably because the previous chapter once again "cleared the clouds and revealed the sun" to one's inner wishes? The description after the talent changes seems to confirm my thoughts: "The saint walking in the world" matches the description before the talent awakened and represents the past; "The light that all living beings pray for" corresponds to his "choice" in fate and the sea of stars, representing the present; "Forging the Holy Crown in Compassion" should describe the "Shinto" he chooses in his heart and implements his own will (so the charm will be added to the willpower later? ) If my previous correspondences are correct, then I boldly speculate that "Crown as King in Responsibility" should correspond to a certain native world in the future. Under the expectation of all living beings, the protagonist faces an existence in the true sense where all attributes have reached the limit that the world can carry and is about to destroy the entire world. Through the power of faith gathered in the entire world, he condenses his own holy crown and even a sun, and casts a divine soul! This should be the "Eternal Life of Mu Hui, the One Who Praises" in the talent introduction, and he is the "blood-stained one" who can conquer without hindrance. (Perhaps when the talent is awakening for the second time? Then what kind of existence can achieve this specification and have the corresponding weight?) Of course, because of the word "conquest" and the protagonist's special combat skill that combines "big sword" and "spear", this can't help but remind me of the "unstoppable" old knight in the original work and the Iron Feather King who was the first to bring Su Xiao a truly hearty battle with skill. Their "Hegemonic Slash" and "War Soul·Zong" - as we all know, these two are real battlefield experts, so will Mu Yang's actual positioning be that of a "leader general"? Let me loosen my imagination a little more: "Decapitated Akatsuki" + "Legion Xiao" and the invincible "God General Yang" + a bunch of powerful contractors who cooperate with them work together to face some difficulties that cannot be matched by a single fight (such as the battle of becoming a god I guess, such as some enemies in the original work that require means to overcome, and The guy from the Star Sea? ) Anyway, the prophet is here. If I am right, the readers who have read it will remember to come back and kill me 🪖 PS: If the three stone tablets of talent are the future, the present, and the past, doesn't Mu Yang have to change the world? Well, pity, mercy, saving the common people with one thought - all these are the best expressions of the "power" and "power" of the powerful! After the screening of reincarnation, madmen are only dangerous, but those who practice the way of the Holy King are destined to be invincible!

(Reprinted in the group) The readers of the article convey the aspirations of the heart and the expectations of the public. It is not just a play of pen and ink, but actually a contract of faith. In ancient times, there was a Shanfu who worked hard at night and day, and the Wu and Han Dynasties never left the official gate. Today, there is a poem written by the soul of an author. He has a literary name and the power of writing, but he indulges in feasting and is lazy in writing. He has failed everyone. His crime is obvious and should be punished by everyone in the world! Erhun's poems first seduced the world with their beautiful chapters and seduced the soul with their wonderful pens. They attracted the admiration of readers at home and attracted the attention of literary friends all over the world. Since you have achieved great success, you should be careful at the beginning and respect the end, and make up for your weakness with diligence. After you have achieved your ambition, you will gradually become slack, and you will be lazy at the beginning. The chapters are unresolved and the plot is discontinuous, leaving readers eager to read and those who follow it anxiously. The ancients said that "misfortunes arise from laziness", so you use pen and ink as a play, regard promises as trivial, turn readers' earnest expectations into mirrors, and reduce the reputation and elegance of the literary world to perfunctory gestures. What's worse is that one indulges in pleasure and abandons writing, pursues vanity and abandons one's original intention. It should be noted that "the sun and the moon pass away, and the years are not extended by me." The success of the literary industry is not the result of a day; how can the reader's treatment be tolerated for a long time? However, you regard being late as the norm, and use a few hasty words to answer your questions, causing your masterpiece to be scrapped halfway, and your foreshadowing to be lost in the sea. I betray my own talent, betray the public's trust, and betray the atmosphere of the literary world. How is this laziness different from stealing fame and deceiving the world? Looking at the records of history, people who are lazy in their work rarely die. Are you not afraid that history will leave ridicule and readers will be alienated? Although a certain person is a commoner, he always has a desire to write. Seeing this lazy behavior, he is deeply angry. I would like to announce this to readers all over the world and literary friends at home: Let's denounce these slackers and punish those who break their promises, urge them to work diligently in writing, and restore their sincerity in keeping their promises. I hope that the poetry of the soul can wake up, change one's mind and face, make up for mistakes with diligence, atone for sins with writing, live up to the original intention, and live up to the expectations of the public. Whenever the message comes, the envoy will hear about it! If you still persist in your stubbornness and remain lazy as before, then the whole world will abandon you and the literary world will condemn you. It will be too late to regret!

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Molly, more points

I suggest you write a few derivative worlds first to gain popularity.

At first glance, I felt that I had rested enough. I was thinking about writing but got too lazy and felt that it was not easy to write. I just thought it was like paying tuition for my fellow friends in Paradise.

Have you been to Samsara Paradise? Some things are scribbled and taken for granted.

Good news: Out; Bad news: A piece of shit

I have a paradise encyclopedia, does the author want it?

Authors should not push themselves too hard, and relax at ordinary times. For example, write when you are tired, write when you are hungry, and write when you want to catch fish. It is best to update 100,000 words a day.

Wuhu, Wuhu, come on, don't enter the palace. There are too many people in the early stage who can't hold on.

Anti-theft is too tough

Can the protagonist just tie a few Sun Swords to his body and press into the enemy camp (When I saw the protagonist's golden wings and black wings, I suddenly thought of this picture of Bai E)

I hope the author writes more about the world of anime. I feel that I have read too little of it, and all I write about is Chinese comics. In fact, there is no need to learn how to write about the original world in Samsara Paradise. In the later period of the animation, I didn't have to write a few native worlds to finish the book. In fact, the back of Samsara Paradise is too long and boring, and it feels like the talent has been exhausted. For example, Sea of ​​Death Fire, Demon Slayer, Reincarnation, Holy Grail War 4-5, Tokyo Ghoul, Hunter. If these popular IPs are written, many people will read them. I personally like the first half of Samsara Paradise. The original world reaches its peak at the Dead Silence.

Author, is there a female protagonist? To be honest, yours is the only one among the many reincarnation fanfics I have read that hopes to have a female protagonist. The main reason is that the author writes that Mu Yang is too charming and has a normal personality. Moreover, according to the description in the book, several women who are related to Mu Yang have long been full of favorability. For example, Hela and Aurora have at least extremely strong potential.

When I first read it, I felt that the author's writing was really good, but one thing I can't avoid when writing about Samsara Paradise is that there are only two ways to reach the highest level, one is a Star Apostle and the other is a Spell Destroyer. If the main character is not a Spell Destroyer, he cannot reach the highest level, but he is a Spell Destroyer and has to face Su Xiao. It doesn't feel very easy to write. Of course, it would be better if the highest combat power is set to the Supreme or the Peak.

There are too many copies of the novel. Forget about Super God, Douluo is okay, and Dou Po is here. Are all the subsequent copies of the novel? If so, I will run away.

The resources obtained by Contractors are not as good as those of Hunters. In the mid-term, the national football team almost died trying to become Hunters, but in the end they did not succeed. They seemed to have become quasi-Predators. If they became Hunters, the protagonist would definitely become stronger much faster than Contractors. After all, the resources of the two are not equal at all.

If you still have a monthly pass, you can wait. If you don't have one, you can order more books and save one.

Turnips and greens, everyone has their own preferences. I prefer those with a female protagonist, 1-3 is the best. You can also do it without a female protagonist. Just don't engage in eroticism and engage in purely combat-enhancing games. Both of the above are acceptable. It is acceptable if the harem is well developed, but if there is no heroine and the protagonist is purely interested in the kidneys and not the heart, or the harem is opened without brains, it is not acceptable. Which category does this book belong to? As for the last few, I'll do it myself.

Now that you are playing with the sun, how can you not learn a throwing technique and use the sun gun?

Naruto has a weak Explosion Star and Kaguya is also a fifth-level world, but the level of Samsara Paradise is strange if you don't look at the pitfalls.

Come on, I feel that the protagonist's combat power is a bit too high for the same level. The second level is almost comparable to the third level. Except that the attribute points are not real attributes, there is no more exciting skill duel. There is a feeling that when the opponent uses a move, you are immune to damage and can be killed with a backhand

Is there any Shen Nong who can recommend some good unlimited novels? It's best if it's serialized

It's alive in the bookshelf, it's incredible

Too little, too little, too little

Seeing that the protagonist takes the path of the Sun God, it would be quite suitable to go to the Black Soul World to spread the fire or to the Secret Cult World to seek for the Sun Heritage, but these two worlds may be more difficult to write.

With help, the title of the book has been changed

Wait for the Naruto copy to end and start killing directly 🤓

I hope I can write it to the finale. To be honest, it's pretty good. It's much better than the previous fandom that also followed the solar system. It added a twilight world very creatively. At the beginning, it felt like something written by a mosquito. Come on.