Becoming the Mastermind Behind the Scenes, Starting with Marvel

Here's a little suggestion: avoid overly empty praise. It's a common problem with this kind of writing—all that talk about an eternal river, reversing time, etc. It just gets worse and worse. Also, don't portray other characters as particularly low-class; that's crucial too. Don't make each character's writing too monotonous.

Don't keep talking about going home. It's fine to make going home your goal, but don't keep emphasizing it.

What trash is Under One Person? A bunch of little karaomi who can't even withstand modern firearms.

Setting up obstacles before time travel is a real mistake.

Isn't Under One Person a pure server? Yet Lü Ci was dragged up and beaten by a pair of ordinary people for days and nights.

Is there a Shennong? What do you think of this book?

It looks good. When will organizations like the Umbrella Corporation and the Secret Files make an appearance? Stop with the Chinese style all the time, let's have some overseas elements.

If you can't post chapters properly, then don't post them at all; this is discouraging.

Go screw in a screw. No, wait, the author's literary level is at most kindergarten level; even screwing in a screw requires at least vocational high school education. This is utter nonsense.

I couldn't take it anymore after reading Chapter 6, so I had to vent before leaving. The "behind-the-scenes mastermind" route. Summon virtual characters, then role-play them to gain "shock points." In short, it's about constantly causing trouble and creating chaos. The first five chapters summoned two virtual characters, Ren Woxing and Yan Shuangying. But how is it portrayed in the novel?